HTML - Disruption [v0.40 Public] [gaaby]

Here are a few of my observations:
The overall story is solid, but there seem to be some inconsistencies in the sequence of events. Certain actions—like those involving the sister or the teacher—appear to trigger out of order when they would make more sense happening sequentially. Also, after the uniform task, there's a line introducing your new name, but that name doesn't show up afterward, not even in later interactions with the teacher. These are small issues, but addressing them could really enhance the immersion.

This appears to be a general issue. Whenever a repeated event occurs, the text or reactions mostly behave as if it's happening for the first time. There might have been some improvement, but similar issues still need to be addressed.

It's not terrible but at the same time it's not particularly good. It's the same old you see in alot of these types of games. The writing is mid at best but some of the dialogue is just meh. In fact that's the best way to describe this game. Meh. It's alright but that's about it.

The game isn't great in many ways, of course the porn is just a playlist of different actors sometimes very inconsistent in the same scene but also the conversation and flow of the game are just horrendous where the -very- repeated scenes with any of the characters ignore any type of continuity or choices you made. You're in chastity's cause because of your sister and don't have the key ? No problem you can still peep and masturbate to her in the bathroom(with no chastity in sight) and her only reaction is embarrassment and telling you to get out .
and same on the other side , have you been fucking her non stop and she is begging to suck your dick just by seeing it ? you can masturbate to her in the shower and she will do the same thing . apply that to all scenes, interaction and conversation . very little about the game felt fun or fap worthy tbh

Good:
- It has incest?

Bad:
- The incest is... lazily written?
- Images are sized all kinds of crazy.
- Buggy as hell

Ugly:
- Levels of the women don't mean anything from what I can tell.
- One moment you're dominating your sister, the next moment she's still yelling at you to get out of the shower.
- Sex events seem to be one shot events or completely random. Even after blowing your mom's back out, you still can't bang her anywhere else besides that one time, vice versa for sister.
- Dom path is either bugged as hell or non-existent.
- Pretty obvious dev is obsessed with sub content. At this point why even have the MC be dominant?

Not my sort of kinks or game and I'm unsure if I'll try it again in the future, but nevertheless this game deserves an easy 5 stars for its genre. Tons of content for both dom and sub path (and both are afforded about equal focus!!), writing is fantastic, and for once I liked the corruption mechanic. Usually corruption style games are pretty frustrating for me - either it feels like things are progressing at a snail's pace or it feels like things progress so fast there's no point to the mechanic being there in the first place. This game's creator does a great job of balancing things.

Unfortunately, despite being objectively quite a good game, it isn't to my personal tastes. There is a focus on feminization in both the dom and sub paths that I'm simply not into. The straight content was pretty good, but if I want straight content there's an ocean of other possibilities available.

Also. This is a side note, but the description led to some disappointment. I was excited to learn how the setting being Budapest would change things - there's a lot of cool culture and history in Hungary and Budapest in particular, or so I've heard. I was excited to learn about it and how it would change the story. But... you can really just swap it out for any generic porn city and nothing changes. A bit frustrating, but this is a porn game. I should have expected it.

Waste of time to be honest. description says it has both dom and sub path but dev is obsessed with sub path, sub path has way too much content than dom. When the dom content is release then it turn out to be gayish/fem content with dad. that shit is not for me.
Little bit content with sis and mom which is way too confusing and quest description is not proper.

Do not waste your time.

I don't know if the game got a lot better recently but it's pretty straight forward.
dom/sub content. masc/fem content.

I have to say it's pretty evenly distributed. There's a list of all the content in the "list" menu allowing you to make sure you're not wasting your time.

For me a solid HMTL sandbox like game has LOT of videos/short videos/clips. It helps a lot with the immersion. At this point, there's decent amount of content.

note; If you think going in this is going into a more classic HTLM game with 1 millions sandbox but everything is avoidable, not the case here. It's - compare to similar games - got a much more developed dom/masc route.

Don't get me wrong, you're missing a lot, but it's like half half.

This is going to be a quick review because I cant be bothered to waste anymore god damn time with this game. Both paths are insanely bugged, the Events / Tips feature is utter dog shit, and the main loop of going to school 400 times is actual mind rot.

It actually pissed me off to the point I loaded this "game" up in Twine and looked though how the Dev made their choices. And Oh My God... No wonder this thing is a dumpster fire, the under the hood choices that were made are insane??? These two examples straight up brick your game.

There are events Required to be seen to progress but if you arbitrarily choose to do to many Sub or Dom events raising your score "to high" you will never see the prompt for the Required progress event??!!? (Example: the Best Friend Dom route bricks if you let your Dom Score go to high. Which you can't lower.)

OR in the case of random events tied to progress events if you see the random event Before the progress event it wont count for the progress!!! (Example: the Sub jerk off in your sisters underwear event.)

Un-Fucking-Believable... Its funny because this issue explains the crazy split in player experience, If you don't accidentally follow the mind of the Dev to the letter you brick your game.

Last thing I need to add, every single "talk to [insert NPC Name]" is an actual waste of time and space. Not once did I see this feature return anything other then "Nothing.." Why is it even here? Or is it useful in the impossible to get to later game?

We as players need to have higher standards.

I'm actually really liking this game!! Super hot! Hot pics, hot content. Love the sub stuff.

Only thing I'm still wondering is how much do I need to raise the homo stat for rodrygo to be considered homo? or has that not been implemented yet?

This game is the classic interactive picturebook that you can find a 100 times over and over again. It does not have anything special about it. Still it is decently made and you have 2 paths you can go on so I will give it a 3/5

it is crazy that the game is still so bugged when it's been out so long.

the sister tells me to go buy panties, i do, i get the exchange where she says come home with the panties, i go home, and then nothing happens, no scene is triggered no matter what time of the day i talk to her in her room. so just stuck i guess? like common the game has been out a while

Fantastic game. Hope it will be upgraded in the future. Why can't I just rate the game without having to write 10 million billion symbols in review? God damn it.

Feminization themes are abundant, yet feel somewhat unexplored in reactions from the world to protagonist's changes, especially on the front of your girlfriend noticing them. Gf content felt unexplored - at times it felt like I don't even have a gf or that I've reached the end of the gf content for the current patch. Cuckoldry theme is extreme and it was great, as there isn't much content on that topic to be found in games. End review.

Writing is impeccable by the way, for a porn game it tops all the imaginable charts. Fantastic stuff, keep it up.

I truly do not get why "games" like this exist. Does it feature any originality? No. Same story told a thousand times by other, better games. Nope, not really--make an innocuous decision or two early on and you're either an alpha male or a sissy cuck, with nothing in-between. Visually appealing? No. The interface is unattractive and, well, sucks ass. Engaging? Nope. Every day is essentially the same handful of choices, with the same outcomes. In most cases, there is only one canned response to a decision, which you see over and over again with no variety whatsoever.

Successful games in this genre tick at least one of these boxes.

Example: Play submissive until you get feminized, and then go touch mom's and sis's bodies every night. Eventually, you get to the point where you dom sis in one scene, but get BBC'd by her boyfriend the next. Where mom forces you to suck a dildo, but then sis helps you dom her. If you've maxxed out your dom points, you still get dommed by the teacher every single day. There is no nuance--the game just sees how many points you have in a category at any given moment and does one thing, whether or not it makes sense in relation to the rest of the story.

Nope. Just...nope.

Great topic, failing on the execution. Should drop the whole male-Dom story-line altogether, or at least wait until the sissy route is complete.

Issues: I know this is an adult sex game but I have an issue using the ret* word. It is very disrespectful and very lazy for the Dev to use it. be creative.

Way too much grinding. Also, due to the excessive grinding, there are events that one can spawn prior to the storyline triggering it.

The Tips section is obtuse.

Why the hell is the MC wearing clunky brown male lace up dress shoes with a dress? If the MC is going outside wearing a cute dress, then the MC must have at least some cute flats working up to heels. (bingo instant content with Mom seeing the MC without cute shoes, takes the MC to the mall to get some flats and heels, then can teach the MC several times how to wear heels)

Need to have a link to "go to therapy" directly from the MC bedroom. There is a "go to class" and "go to work" link there, why do we need to click click click click to get to the therapist?" Also if the therapist scene is a repeat, indicate somehow that it is currently EOC or don't require it..

There should be a quick link to go to the MC's sister's room directly from the PC if they are locked and need a release. If it is night time, there is no option to talk to her as she is asleep (even if the MC goes into the hall and sees the sister entertaining guests.

I'd highly suggest to the Dev that they have a better idea as where the paths are going and what can trigger the events. As it looks now, it seems that the Dev is patching ideas along an undeveloped story line. That can only lead to story breaks or abandonment of the whole adventure due to writing themselves into a dead end. (or causing the players to restart several times due to missed and unavailable new content)

Wow! I was seriously hoping for something really good based off the ratings but sadly this was not it. Why? While it may look like you have real choices you are way more limited than you think. You are very restricted when it comes to clothing choices both in the home and especially out. There are very limited options for commando under your outfit and it never allowed me to do it out of the home or without a shirt as well in the home.

You have as far as I saw extremely few options of what you can actually do and read carefully as this game likes to maneuver you towards feminine options and gay activities if you don't pay attention. You can quickly max out your domination points with certain activities but the points are limited with each type of activity. Oh and it is always the same scene every time and even the same garments involved. Lack of variety is very boring. School is the same scenes. Your either a wuss or a rude ass but nothing ever changes, Laptop is for porn ONLY. Good games have ways to earn income and build skills. Skills, guess you really don't need em. Income, for what ? Money is apparently shown but I found no use for it.

Lots of grind but very little reward in my opinion. I don't mind a bit of grind as long as there is something to show for it.

Hey if the Dev took their time and added some substance and variety to the scenes then this could easily be that 4 game the ratings showed.

A lot of fantastic things in the game and I love where its going, a lot of games with this focus end up abandoned and I hope this isn't one of them so please keep up the good work! I'm sure this game will be fantastic once its completed

V0.2

The game uses stolen porn, but it's mostly consistent with the pictures, so the characters can be recognized and they don't change that much from one picture to the next.

The gameplay is the standard: click buttons to repeat the same events and grind some stat, which in turn will unlock new events to grind.

The only relevant stats seem to be submission and domination. Submission is used as a synonym to feminization in this game: using lipstick or wearing a bra make you submissive. Just the same, domination seems to be overlapped with rapey actions.

I think it'd be a great improvement to rework those elements: dom/sub is all about power dynamics, and there aren't any involved in masturbating to a sleeping girl or to a pair of used underwear.

I'm giving it an extra star because unlike many similar games, it alerts you when there are new events and when you've reached the current end of a path, so you don't waste time clicking everywhere trying to get new content that doesn't exist.

As usual, the review will updated if needed.