benq4884

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Mar 26, 2020
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May I ask a question, please?

How could I close a system detail box (on Android)?
I couldn't find a way to hide it.

Thank you in advance.
 
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amazing a dev who actually cares about his game listens to criticism and actually tries to implement suggestions without acting like a defensive greedy dick hole attacking people that like almost never happens here
 

Aero34

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Oct 11, 2018
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When I click
Yeah, I basically took all the suggestions from this thread and tried to implement them as best as I could. I'm still learning Renpy so as soon as I know how to make a fluid animation I will. Like I said, every suggestion you guys make I listen to.

Something I personally really want to do is character customisation but I'll see how that goes.
When I click "Lab Fun" this happens
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/PlayerPlanet.rpy", line 2663, in <module>
NameError: name 'FunFirst' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "Training.rpyc", line 11, in script call
  File "PlayerPlanet.rpyc", line 2663, in script
  File "C:\Users\Alexander\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Divine_Adventure-0.9d-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1832, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "C:\Users\Alexander\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Divine_Adventure-0.9d-win\renpy\python.py", line 2059, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "C:\Users\Alexander\Documents\MEGAsync Downloads\Divine_Adventure-0.9d-win\renpy\python.py", line 2052, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/PlayerPlanet.rpy", line 2663, in <module>
NameError: name 'FunFirst' is not defined

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Divine Adventure 0.9d
Mon Jun 29 05:03:52 2020
 

circuit

Member
May 17, 2017
140
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what do i do when android 21 asks for the diamond planet EDIT its adala i thought explore was repeation interact
 
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Gozer

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May 16, 2017
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When talking to califla she describes all ss forms and ultra instinct but once you go back to the past (much later in game) all of that info is new to you, script needs a lore peer review. Also noticed a hefty ton of story arcs and side stuff that happened but never went anywhere for example (training with x person, women staying at your castle but not interactive beyond story progression,mind control power route slave videl locked in my base as rape meat,etc) and the fact that 18 gave that pussy up (finally) and got pregnant and we only got bj art irks me a bit. I still like the game though.
 

Kyriel

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Oct 24, 2019
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Welp, aside for a few bugs I certainly didn't expect some of the changes I suggested to be implemented this quickly, even if in a minor scale. I'm impressed to say the least, not to mention the animation part. I said it and I'll say it again, it has to be nightmarish to animate while keeping the same level.
All in all, it's definitely great to see some interaction with all the characters and something for Videl. She was kind of warming the chair there...
 

rance4747

Member
May 25, 2018
240
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Here are my thoughts on what is wrong with the game after current update.

1)Word minimap? For now basically hangs in there for hours, and is only available after you've gone past all of the content. You, who suppose to be a GOD in this game - cant access it. No sir, you just sit there amd wait until its available and just look at it for the next 2-4 hours untill you it finally starts being usefull. FFs, triggering a button to appear only after some point in time is not that hard!

2)You can now at least somewhat interact with your conquests? But now you are forced to endure not only "sleep after every fucking action" but also semi-repeating text about how your fish prophet pooped a storm in bathroom, or smthin. (i wish i was kidding).
Aperrantly just separating this content with a "take a walk around castle" button, was not an option, just as adding "quick snooze" button similar to the minimap one. To top it of, you can only exit the "bedroom coridor" only by going to your original bedroom. :FacePalm:

3)Slave village, potentially one of the saving graces of the game if done properly, where you could have stored some weaker captured girls (bandits like Launch, Filler girls like Zangia, or ressurected Red Ribon army for examaple) as collectibles, to stroke that power boner of enduser? Gone thanks to the 21 bitch, and she didn't even recieved a proper spanking for it.

Srsly trought, if you mentioned slave village full of people Beerus himself decided to keep as sex slaves, people expect content.
And if you don't diliver, well, while its not strictly false advertizment, it sure as hell feels like one. At least cough up some alien waifu survivors.


4)All girls are finally gathered? YAY! Nope, wait, still the same old design of "six bedrooms on whole planet limit"(probably one of the easiest things to change tbh), and by some leap of logic Videl, who is essentially a dubcon sex slave, is here, and in good quaters that she didn't deserved in any way, while on the other hand Caulifla is still sleeping in the boonies, while she would be one of the most motivated ones to join. Also, why does Videl has the title of "queen" in the first place. I get strong, smart, or even just somewhat likeble girls, but current Videl, along with the post marrige original Chi Chi, and Mirai version of 18 is a hatefuck material at best.

5)Invading an enemy god's Universe? Finally some action!!! Hey, wait, this is a consent world (this has to be a Troll), so we cant pillage, rape and plunder the shit out of it. Or at least destroy it if we fuckup their riddle game.

6)Motivation of - LETS MAKE ZENO PROUD is just... eh. Ask yourself this, does it sounds revarding in any way for people that play your game? I mean, something basic like, "catch them all" or breed your harem despite Vados nagging and deal with consequences later at least offers some difinitive interst by promising lots of sex. And this is a porn game.

7) Finally, gathering the whole "girl team" thing. You could have actually milked it so hard man.
Actually capturing 21 after you got wind of her doing some crazy shit on some remote planet again, and punishing her so hard she doesn't dare to defy us.
Taking Bulma from Vegita by bitchslapping the Napoleon complex out of midget, and potentially fucking his wife right in front of him just to show dominance.
Lazuli doesn't want to be a harem girl again (godly ego and all that shizz), so first she fight you, and only after being both beaten in combat and fucked till the last stages of ahegao, she remembers her place and accepts your dominance.
You wasted it all, and for what.
Hey, look at my newest plot hook, its Gin again, he can actually pose some threat, let us invade his FUCKING CONSENT PLANET.
 

Masq

Member
Game Developer
Nov 30, 2016
390
959
Here are my thoughts on what is wrong with the game after current update.

1)Word minimap? For now basically hangs in there for hours, and is only available after you've gone past all of the content. You, who suppose to be a GOD in this game - cant access it. No sir, you just sit there amd wait until its available and just look at it for the next 2-4 hours untill you it finally starts being usefull. FFs, triggering a button to appear only after some point in time is not that hard!

2)You can now at least somewhat interact with your conquests? But now you are forced to endure not only "sleep after every fucking action" but also semi-repeating text about how your fish prophet pooped a storm in bathroom, or smthin. (i wish i was kidding).
Aperrantly just separating this content with a "take a walk around castle" button, was not an option, just as adding "quick snooze" button similar to the minimap one. To top it of, you can only exit the "bedroom coridor" only by going to your original bedroom. :FacePalm:

3)Slave village, potentially one of the saving graces of the game if done properly, where you could have stored some weaker captured girls (bandits like Launch, Filler girls like Zangia, or ressurected Red Ribon army for examaple) as collectibles, to stroke that power boner of enduser? Gone thanks to the 21 bitch, and she didn't even recieved a proper spanking for it.

Srsly trought, if you mentioned slave village full of people Beerus himself decided to keep as sex slaves, people expect content.
And if you don't diliver, well, while its not strictly false advertizment, it sure as hell feels like one. At least cough up some alien waifu survivors.


4)All girls are finally gathered? YAY! Nope, wait, still the same old design of "six bedrooms on whole planet limit"(probably one of the easiest things to change tbh), and by some leap of logic Videl, who is essentially a dubcon sex slave, is here, and in good quaters that she didn't deserved in any way, while on the other hand Caulifla is still sleeping in the boonies, while she would be one of the most motivated ones to join. Also, why does Videl has the title of "queen" in the first place. I get strong, smart, or even just somewhat likeble girls, but current Videl, along with the post marrige original Chi Chi, and Mirai version of 18 is a hatefuck material at best.

5)Invading an enemy god's Universe? Finally some action!!! Hey, wait, this is a consent world (this has to be a Troll), so we cant pillage, rape and plunder the shit out of it. Or at least destroy it if we fuckup their riddle game.

6)Motivation of - LETS MAKE ZENO PROUD is just... eh. Ask yourself this, does it sounds revarding in any way for people that play your game? I mean, something basic like, "catch them all" or breed your harem despite Vados nagging and deal with consequences later at least offers some difinitive interst by promising lots of sex. And this is a porn game.

7) Finally, gathering the whole "girl team" thing. You could have actually milked it so hard man.
Actually capturing 21 after you got wind of her doing some crazy shit on some remote planet again, and punishing her so hard she doesn't dare to defy us.
Taking Bulma from Vegita by bitchslapping the Napoleon complex out of midget, and potentially fucking his wife right in front of him just to show dominance.
Lazuli doesn't want to be a harem girl again (godly ego and all that shizz), so first she fight you, and only after being both beaten in combat and fucked till the last stages of ahegao, she remembers her place and accepts your dominance.
You wasted it all, and for what.
Hey, look at my newest plot hook, its Gin again, he can actually pose some threat, let us invade his FUCKING CONSENT PLANET.
Wait I'm really confused. You didn't specify what and how to fix it? I understand you may have issues but all I ask is that you clearly state out the problems and how to fix it so I can immediately get on it.
 

rance4747

Member
May 25, 2018
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544
Wait I'm really confused. You didn't specify what and how to fix it? I understand you may have issues but all I ask is that you clearly state out the problems and how to fix it so I can immediately get on it.

Ok, simply put, you want to get people to have as much satisfaction as possible, and annoy them as little as possible while they are playing.

On satisfaction front:

1)Dont blow up slave village via Android 21 shenanigans. Keep it. Use it. Milk it like no tomorrow as a main side activity for the actual plot.
Waifu collectors like mobile fate/grand order are a billion dollar hits for a reason. Fill said village with secondary dragon ball characters you may capture along the way. Bratty girls like Videl, Bandits/space pirates like Launch and Zangia, some demon girls like Towa. And potentially, maybe even add some progression with sex scenes to those secondary characters that people like the most, upgraiding them to main waifus at the end.

2)Add some more actually empovering, and preferably lewd options when dealing with mortals. For example, Vegita starts shit with Tuffles again, or gets brave enough to demand his former wife back, and you have options to symply beat him up, beat him up and fuck Bulma right in front of him, or just kill him.
Is it stupid long tearm since it either leaves you with mortal enemy, or drops your universe power level?
Maybe, but putting down self-important characters like him, Cell or Freeza from time to time - is one hell of a power trip. And thats what we here for. To feel like fucking gods.
Don't just give us stuff like choices on killing or sparing some kid. At the very least add pleading mother or older sister to the scene, with one of the options being you sparing the kid if she spreads her legs for you, and maybe another sub option being honoring, or not honoring the deal, and maybe even deciding to keep the fucked girl as your slave regardless of previous choices.

3)More jucy descriptions of sex scenes in general, as well as plot hooks that lead to them and actually make you want to stick around.
Character ambitions like - "impress Zeno", for example, are simply not interesting. They don't promise you potential rewards, potential smut, potential power trips.
Now, for example, getting one of your universes mass raided by that new 13th universe as a start of the arc, gathering(with varying degree of success) all the important waifus together under you, on the basis that they can be captured outside of security of your planet otherwise, and then start some millitary to raid the resurected fuckers back, potentially even conquering their dimension, with all the benefits of conquest that come along the way(kill the baddies, resque some of your girls, capture and enslave the enemy women), that's a plot hook worth sticking around for.
It promises action, it promises smut, and it promises power trips. All the thing people usually expect when it comes to NSFW fanfiction and games based around dragon ball universe.

Now, as for how to make your game less tedious:

1)As i said before, god with one point of stamina is no fun. Especially as of now when you also have to go trough the same coridor towards bed, and listen to some additional repetative bullshit along the way. A clock shaped button under the "local map" that would allow you to skip going to bed trough multiple steps, or some early game mechanic that increases hero's stamina so that he could do more than one action before needing sleep - is a must.

2)Finally having "map" of your personal planet is a nice start. But my point about having interactive list of characters you can visit in your castle, instead of image with six unmarked doors, stands. Its relatively easy to make and you can have more than 6 girls to select from at once.

3)Dont make options that are unavailable for now - visible. The said planet map, as well as galaxy maps, have tonns of places that you cant visit, and frankly, not only it makes the game feel far more unfinished than it is now, but it also breaks the whole "I'm a fucking GOD" feel really fast. You don't want that. Make them visible only when story allow for their usage.

Hope this helped a little.
 
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caGormjshsn

Newbie
Mar 31, 2020
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Ok, simply put, you want to get people to have as much satisfaction as possible, and annoy them as little as possible while they are playing.

On satisfaction front:

1)Dont blow up slave village via Android 21 shenanigans. Keep it. Use it. Milk it like no tomorrow as a main side activity for the actual plot.
Waifu collectors like mobile fate/grand order are a billion dollar hits for a reason. Fill said village with secondary dragon ball characters you may capture along the way. Bratty girls like Videl, Bandits/space pirates like Launch and Zangia, some demon girls like Towa. And potentially, maybe even add some progression with sex scenes to those secondary characters that people like the most, upgraiding them to main waifus at the end.

2)Add some more actually empovering, and preferably lewd options when dealing with mortals. For example, Vegita starts shit with Tuffles again, or gets brave enough to demand his former wife back, and you have options to symply beat him up, beat him up and fuck Bulma right in front of him, or just kill him.
Is it stupid long tearm since it either leaves you with mortal enemy, or drops your universe power level?
Maybe, but putting down self-important characters like him, Cell or Freeza from time to time - is one hell of a power trip. And thats what we here for. To feel like fucking gods.
Don't just give us stuff like choices on killing or sparing some kid. At the very least add pleading mother or older sister to the scene, with one of the options being you sparing the kid if she spreads her legs for you, and maybe another sub option being honoring, or not honoring the deal, and maybe even deciding to keep the fucked girl as your slave regardless of previous choices.

3)More jucy descriptions of sex scenes in general, as well as plot hooks that lead to them and actually make you want to stick around.
Character ambitions like - "impress Zeno", for example, are simply not interesting. They don't promise you potential rewards, potential smut, potential power trips.
Now, for example, getting one of your universes mass raided by that new 13th universe as a start of the arc, gathering(with varying degree of success) all the important waifus together under you, on the basis that they can be captured outside of security of your planet otherwise, and then start some millitary to raid the resurected fuckers back, potentially even conquering their dimension, with all the benefits of conquest that come along the way(kill the baddies, resque some of your girls, capture and enslave the enemy women), that's a plot hook worth sticking around for.
It promises action, it promises smut, and it promises power trips. All the thing people usually expect when it comes to NSFW fanfiction and games based around dragon ball universe.

Now, as for how to make your game less tedious:

1)As i said before, god with one point of stamina is no fun. Especially as of now when you also have to go trough the same coridor towards bed, and listen to some additional repetative bullshit along the way. A clock shaped button under the "local map" that would allow you to skip goint to bed trough multiple steps, or some early game mechanic that increases hero's stamina so that he could do more than one action before needing sleep - is a must.

2)Finally having "map" of your personal planet is a nice start. But my point about having interactive list of characters you can visit in your castle, instead of image with six unmarked doors, stands. Its relatively easy to make and you can have more than 6 girls to select from at once.

3)Dont make options that are unavailable for now - visible. The said planet map, as well as galaxy maps, have tonns of places that you cant visit, and frankly, not only it makes the game feel far more unfinished than it is now, but it also breaks the whole "I'm a fucking GOD" feel really fast. You don't want that. Make them visible only when story allow for their usage.

Hope this helped a little.
I wholeheartedly agree with everything rance4747 has mentioned. And I think with those suggestions the game would become even better.

However, credit goes to the developer for listening to the suggestions of the players. You have become my favourite developer because of it. And your game is amazing btw, don't let all these suggestions make you think that your game isn't good, because it really is. But, with these suggestions the game can go from great to near perfection. So thanks a lot for your hard work developer!

P.S. Waiting for the updated android version.
 
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