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Sherengroth

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There are tons of dragon ball games out there where you play as master roshi and can fuck every girl in the world with no consequences
hey masq you never got to me on my last question, will the dialogue pictures be changed with the event,like when the mc goes ssj1,ssj2,ssj3, and the transfomation you make after you time travel the picture in the dialogue box will look the part,or will the dialogue pic stay the same?
 

SweetrollDealer

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Yea you wanna put real life drama elements in game where people are just trying to escape, like many devs try to do which ruins the aspect of an adult game in my personal opinion and many others when the people playing are usually trying to escape from real life drama ,again a good netori story features an MC stealing all the wives and the husband/boyfriends are essentially helpless and/or completely ignorant to the fact that their wives are cheating or they do know but their wives love you more so they essentially get fucked out of the picture in most pretty good netori storylines but im ranting again and i dont feel that strongly about this to continue the discussion further but you do you cuz ill give you that much their are idiots who will buy into mellow dramedy porn but I'm not one of them , so good day to you sir
bro mad over hentai.
 

Masq

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i think mostly the ai stuff from what i've seen
Alright, I'll remove all the A.I art and spend thousands hiring new artists for people here who still won't pledge me on patreon, ignoring those who already do and are fine with the A.I art.
 
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ddtmm

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Alright, I'll remove all the A.I art and spend thousands hiring new artists for people here who still won't pledge me on patreon, ignoring those who already do and are fine with the A.I art.
hey man i'm just saying what i saw, that was months ago
 
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DredgenVayn

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The story needs a rewrite. Too much bs that doesn't really fit. The betrayal arcs don't fit a db game. Angels are impartial, so why are you making them all evil?
 

Barbraroi

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The bad A.I art is such a huge turn off, especially if you notice the fuck ups. The most notable is Califua’s ear when she blows you.
Honestly the entire games lacks anything resembling a soul, not just the A.I. art, just the haphazard story, the lack of compelling gameplay, lack of any stat menu.
Maybe one day it’ll be a game worth playing, but right now it’s lacking and real bones, or skin.
 
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GNova

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dev tried to make this game as low effort he can do, the story sucks so much that i got tired from skipping, and now the art also sucks damn
 

DredgenVayn

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Lol you still haven't given me criticism? List them so I can address them??
Poor writing, lack of consistency in story, lack of a save system outside of the bedroom, no option to skip minigames, art is too realistic for an anime franchise.
 

KingWeWuz

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Poor writing, lack of consistency in story, lack of a save system outside of the bedroom, no option to skip minigames, art is too realistic for an anime franchise.
Listen I agree there's stuff worth criticizing in this game, but outside of wanting to skip minigames to a developer there's no real criticism. You got the author's attention, so it should be easy to explain the specifics.

A personal criticism I've had with the game:

Bugs:
A bug I reported a while back was still in the game last I played (though to be fair, I didn't play the latest version yet so it's a bit unfair to use this)

Consistency:
-I really did like some of the routes and stories that started, but it feels like many of them were sidelined. (As an example, our daughter basically became sidelined character for idk how many years.)
-Parts of the game feel like they're meant to showcase more, or are a beta. As an example: the segment with the empty rooms feel like I'm meant to put a harem in those rooms. If they're just empty forever... why are they there?

Story:
It's ok to have some drama, mystery, and suspense, but I feel like Vados's betrayal could've been handled much better. It's not cuck, but in the context of the protagonist being a horndog she loves and even trains and helps hook up with others, it doesn't make sense.

Presence:
Last criticism is limited presence on these forums. Masq used to come by all the time, then I think around the time there was that "ntr" incident he tried calming everyone down, even retconning it, but the forum went to war with him here and now he only stops by from time to time.
 
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Masq

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Poor writing, lack of consistency in story, lack of a save system outside of the bedroom, no option to skip minigames, art is too realistic for an anime franchise.
- Poor writing: This is entirely subjective. I personally think the game is brilliantly written but then again I wrote it so creator bias. If you actually told me what specific part was bad writing I'll happily answer and see if I agree or disagree with you.

- Lack of consistency in story: This is a game I've been working on since 2017. Do you know how long that is? I was in University when I started this game, ALOT of things happened that affected the game's development. I had to cut corners in order to release updates every month. For example, let's say I planned to do a lewd update with tons of sex scenes. My artist was super slow and very expensive at the time so I would just make another story update until the artist was able to finish the artwork, that's why certain story parts feel inconsistent. At that time I wanted people to have consistent releases.

- Lack of save system outside of the bedroom: I assume you mean for android? The game was not made for Android versions. There are a lot of combat scenes that I took out because android players couldn't enjoy it fully. The android ports are a secondary option to the PC version.

- No option to skip minigames: In the latest update I've completely removed every single minigame so what are you talking about here?

-Art is too realistic for anime franchise: How is this critism? The art has been that way since 2017? This is like going into Summer Time Saga's thread and saying the art is too cartoony. If you don't like it, that's absolutely fine, like I said there are many other dragon ball games that aren't made by me. You're more than happy to go play them. I'm not even being sarcastic here, i mean this truthfully. I really enjoy making Divine Adventure but it's not everyone's cup of tea so I'd rather you played something you enjoyed
 
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Masq

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Listen I agree there's stuff worth criticizing in this game, but outside of wanting to skip minigames to a developer there's no real criticism. You got the author's attention, so it should be easy to explain the specifics.

A personal criticism I've had with the game:

Bugs:
A bug I reported a while back was still in the game last I played (though to be fair, I didn't play the latest version yet so it's a bit unfair to use this)

Consistency:
-I really did like some of the routes and stories that started, but it feels like many of them were sidelined. (As an example, our daughter basically became sidelined character for idk how many years.)
-Parts of the game feel like they're meant to showcase more, or are a beta. As an example: the segment with the empty rooms feel like I'm meant to put a harem in those rooms. If they're just empty forever... why are they there?

Story:
It's ok to have some drama, mystery, and suspense, but I feel like Vados's betrayal could've been handled much better. It's not cuck, but in the context of the protagonist being a horndog she loves and even trains and helps hook up with others, it doesn't make sense.

Presence:
Last criticism is limited presence on these forums. Masq used to come by all the time, then I think around the time there was that "ntr" incident he tried calming everyone down, even retconning it, but the forum went to war with him here and now he only stops by from time to time.
You're right, I used to come here all the time. The NTR situation was bad, I hired a writer to to help me take the load off and he added NTR. He left after the whole NTR incident.

I'm genuinely just making this game for fun and the fans now, I don't make enough from it to quit my job and I don't expect it to make lots of money. I'm truly making this game because I love it, not for anything else
 

DredgenVayn

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- Poor writing: This is entirely subjective. I personally think the game is brilliantly written but then again I wrote it so creator bias. If you actually told me what specific part was bad writing I'll happily answer and see if I agree or disagree with you.

- Lack of consistency in story: This is a game I've been working on since 2017. Do you know how long that is? I was in University when I started this game, ALOT of things happened that affected the game's development. I had to cut corners in order to release updates every month. For example, let's say I planned to do a lewd update with tons of sex scenes. My artist was super slow and very expensive at the time so I would just make another story update until the artist was able to finish the artwork, that's why certain story parts feel inconsistent. At that time I wanted people to have consistent releases.

- Lack of save system outside of the bedroom: I assume you mean for android? The game was not made for Android versions. There are a lot of combat scenes that I took out because android players couldn't enjoy it fully. The android ports are a secondary option to the PC version.

- No option to skip minigames: In the latest update I've completely removed every single minigame so what are you talking about here?

-Art is too realistic for anime franchise: How is this critism? The art has been that way since 2017? This is like going into Summer Time Saga's thread and saying the art is too cartoony. If you don't like it, that's absolutely fine, like I said there are many other dragon ball games that aren't made by me. You're more than happy to go play them. I'm not even being sarcastic here, i mean this truthfully. I really enjoy making Divine Adventure but it's not everyone's cup of tea so I'd rather you played something you enjoyed
Most ren'py games have quick options at the bottom of the screen constantly. Save, Load, skip, quick-save, quick-load, preferences.

This is what I mean. About the lack of save system outside of the bedroom.
 
3.20 star(s) 73 Votes