VN - Ren'Py - Domino Beach [Ep.2 Fix] [Mr Jet]

Very average VN. Renders, LIs and setting is really good, nothing good besides that. The story and writing is really underwhelming as everything is corny as shit. Regular "rich spoiled brat" enemy as seen before 100 times.

Lewd scenes could be improved as they are short, boring and uninteresting. Atp it's not worth playing this game for a "lewd" experience.

In conclusion. Below average writing with elite level renders, setting and some mildly interesting characters.

Overall, this game misses the mark. Unlike the developers past work I wasn't too immersed in this game's story. The reason is a weak narrative and broken structure. Further, I feel like most games in this genre struggle with impactful and meaningful choices/interactions. The choices in Domino Beach feel like placeholders. Choices are supposed to make players feel like active participants in shaping the story or influencing the world, but this game falls flat in that aspect. Instead of branching into unique or meaningful outcomes, they seem more like superficial options designed to give the illusion of agency. It’s frustrating when choices have no lasting impact or when different options funnel players back to the same result. This game suffers from lack of consequence and depth. While the visuals and renders are impressive and elevate the overall aesthetic, the conversations between characters fall flat, detracting from the immersive experience. The dialogue often comes across as stiff or robotic, making it difficult to connect with the characters and the MC on a deeper level. The game also doesn't lay the foundation or give the audience a clear understanding of the MC's true goal.

good game we expect many faster updates, and incredible character riley we hope to have action with her, she misses sounds when having sex, the stages are very worked and the stages and stories are quite good, hopefully she does not leave this game and have update soon

best in class renders and camera angles coupled with good lighting.visually the game looks stunning.it needs some time to pan out story wise.hopefully we get a huge update in the coming times.been a fan of the devs previous work.highly recommend it

You have to have some kind of talent to make a story about being a beachguard so damn boring.
Mc is a wet blanket who keeps getting shit on time after time.
Every character is a trope of some kind.
Mafia plot tacked on for some reason.
The two stars are for the renders and for the waittress girl
Hope the rival gangs storyline gets dropped.

The character dynamic in this game are fantastic, It great to see some Baywatch vibe from AVN and it turns our so spectacular. love to see more from Zoe and Fiona and other Li as well. Also the render graphic of models and scene is beautiful

Very promising start (with already a significant amount of content): great renders, good pacing, entertaining story, fun setting.

Yes, it does play like a fantasy where all the girls are incredibly attractive and attracted to the MC, but that's kind of the point. The game offers fun, harmless escapism, a sunny baywatch microcosm in which to relax and enjoy a story that is well crafted.

Imho a project that deserves more backing and love, also considering the dev's previous work which I found equally fun and which was completed to a very good degree of polish.

This game is peak, i'm loving every second of it. It has potential to become my favorite game, i loved the beach setting, the teen drama, the LIs, everything.

The MC starts as a loser, no doubt about that, but his growth is already apparent even with only 2 episodes. The animations are top notch and the renders are beautiful, every girl feels different, there are friends along the way, not only LIs. There's an overarching story and a sense of "belonging" somewhere that i don't see in many VNs. Keep it up, i'm looking forward to the next updates.

This is my review for Domino Beach Ep.2 Fix by Mr Jet.

The good

• Renders are looking really good
• Animations are the best
• Music
• Writing
• Gameplay
• Big amout of content 5+ hours
• Story is interesting
• Big updates
• Great characters

The bad

• Slow updates

In conclusion, 5 stars worth playing.

This is the best beach setting in AVN; even if it's only 2 chapters by now, I know for sure that this is at the top of the line after playing lots of AVN for the past few years. The unique environment provide a refreshing change for players accustomed to college settings and medieval themes.

Mr. Jet captures the beach vibe story. It's like playing Baywatch; the bonus is we can interact with lots of fun characters, especially those beautiful girls. Each character feels like they have different personas and are not monotonous, so it feels alive when interacting with them.

The rendering department is very nice too; I like the lighting, shadow, and night view. Only my problem is the nighttime; sometimes it's too dim. My another critique is the sex scene; in my opinion, it would be improved if it were a little bit longer with a good animation scene, but what can I say? It's only 0.2, so maybe it will change in the future.

The design of the characters is good; it's like seeing real-life proportionate models. Mr. Jet did a good job on crafting slender girls like Zoe, Fiona, and Riley, while thicker babes like Emily, Alex, and Carla are amazing too, especially with Emily having a good-looking torso with childbearing hips. So, kudos to Mr. Jet for crafting one of the best LIs in the AVN universe.

I recommended this game; the environment is amazing for some gamers that want something different, and the story is nice enough to grip you into the game. For now it's 4/5; I'll change it in the future after the game contains a lot of content.

Awesome game, great characters and story is developing and going in the right direction. pretty hooked. cant wait to see how it goes keep up the great work.

pros
hot models
good renders
no grind
no mini games

5 stars just for Fiona. Hopefully there's some quality treasure hunting with her and Emily in upcoming episodes. I like the upbeat music and overall atmosphere of this AVN which gives it a genuine feel. The scenery is good and the background looks lively with characters keeping busy so the beach doesn't look empty and lifeless. Always something interesting going on with the other characters you interact with, especially the clash with the surfer "gangs" who keep the drama high, the beer flowing and their IQ low.

I'm a fan of this AVN and hopefully others will be too and will help to support the developer to see where this fascinating story leads. It's not every day I hand out a 5 star, but this one is great and looks to deliver more. Even down to how the other characters interact with each other, their expressions, body language, and individual characteristics along with the colorful scenes, plot points and great dialog that drives the story forward. Too bad there's only 2 episodes at this point, hopefully it doesn't take too many years to iron out the future episodes.

Why does the plot bully MC?
At present, the whole plot makes people feel that MC is a loser.

It's very uncomfortable, a bunch of people with bad personalities, both men and women.

Will these women or men become good friends with MC in the future? But I already hate them now. For example, ALEX and Olivia's fake date prank is simply unforgivable. You help them, but they treat you like a fool?

The plot often makes the MC feel humiliated, and the MC is the player, that is, me.
Why do I have to experience unnecessary humiliation when I play this game? Being a loser?

Yes, The characters look great and the images are well rendered, but so what? I just feel uncomfortable playing it.
Even the MC looks very ordinary, all the other male characters including REX are more pleasing to the eye.

Ill give it 3 stars for the production value. the renders and animations are good and you can tell time and effort went into it. The mc also isn't the worst, his own struggles in life and attitude is fairly good, hes not a complete loser and he's not a chad which makes a niche change of pace these days.

Where the game falls completely flat for me is the overarching stories. The dumb, cringe high school drama of the surf clubs fighting like little bitches and acting like 14 year olds. I hope we get an option to say fuck off to both sides to be honest, they are all asshats. The lifeguard has been one of the better parts of this but that jumped the shark in the last update as well with mustache twirling villain that was just lame. It was just so cheesy and it was very hard to take him or the son seriously. There are prolly too many characters as well. Your gonna be waiting a long time between updates for time with an li you like.

I think there is a solid base here its just the 14 year old level drama is kind of dragging the whole thing down. If the surfer stuff was nipped in the bud and the lifeguard stuff doesn't drag on and maybe a little more slice of life and a lot less drama this could easily be a 4 or 5. Ill revisit this in a year and see where we are at.

Great potential! Wish u will continue doing this great game! maybe it can be a goat who knows, right
Become a Rock Star was one of the greatest! so continue like that please! Cool interesting amazing amusing beautiful mind-blowing

So far the story is really great. I like that there is not too much information and not too little. Just enough to understand the plot and get curious. Visuals are nice. If there is anything i could suggest is that i have no idea what the benefit of being rebel or not. if there is a way to put hint what each route enables or disables in the game without spoiling the story that would be great. Otherwise great job dev!
I would love to see more!

I didn't ahve much expectations towards the story of this game, considering how weak the actual main story of Become a Rockstar is, but I at least expected a MC to be a natural in the flirting game and that the conversations with girls would be meaningful... so far the MC disapoints in both departmets. We got an average game with great renders and nothing else to offer: no story, no good dialogues, no interesting LIs, no MC with a backbone. So far 3/5 is the maximum this game deserves

This is great so far. Girls are hot. (not a thicc fan tho)
If you need great stories, I suggest a real book. Whatever complaints other have, I don't have 'em. I like these beach themes too.

Story doesn't matter so much to me, it's the build-up, the foreplay you could say. The right amount of teasing and then some good stuff without jumping to full nude sex. Teasing is everything. Quick to full nude/sex is boring af.

The visuals have been elevated beyond mere graphical enhancements, showcasing a meticulous attention to detail.
and Each character has a distinct personality that makes them memorable.
Despite the somewhat generic storyline, Zoe's animated facial expressions and captivating appearance made her a memorable character.
I can't stand waiting any longer for the next release.

I loved this game, interesting story, awesome graphics and unique characters.

Well, first you are introduced to a nice main menu. I know it's not the most important thing, but I can still appreciate the attention to detail and originality.

I think the thing that stands out the most in this game is the LI characters. All of the LIs have interesting personalities and they all seem to have their own quirks. The main girls that are in your house clearly have certain issues/mysteries, which makes these LIs a little more interesting and human compared to other AVNs. I'm really curious how the personalities and romances with the MCs will develop.