VN - Ren'Py - Domino Beach [Ep.2 Fix] [Mr Jet]

ver. Update 2.0

Overall: Still a 3/5

I am kind of repeating my review from last time, but the use of ChatGPT for the dialogue and AI generated music is still apparent in this present version. So, moving forward......don't expect anything different. The use of ChatGPT makes the dialogue feel unnatural and unnecessarily wordy. When characters try to make a point, they come off too profound and out of character. The conflict between the two groups the Wave Kings and Rebels seems like an interesting concept at first glance, but the dialogue and setup hinder this tremendously. It makes it seem like a weak middle school brawl with no substance or stakes. I think if the writing and setup were better, this'll be one of the best VNs on this site because of the concept and setting. At the moment that is not the case.
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The game visually looks amazing, and the renders look amazing, but there is one thing that threw me off.... it is the writing. I have a feeling that it was fully written by ChatGPT given by the way the characters speak, and the music seems to be made using AI as well. I mean you could tell almost right away if you had used ChatGPT to create your own story before. I got to say the setting and exposition is unique and fun, and the story seems interesting. It's a game that pulls you in, but it leaves you feeling like there is something off about it. I have nothing against using AI as a tool to generate ideas and create art (for developers who lack the means to hire artist or create their own art)...BUT to create all the dialogue for the game using ChatGPT gives me a bunch of mixed feelings. Is anything from the game an original idea from the dev or was it purely made through ChatGPT?

Visuals/Renders: 5/5

Narrative/Setting: 4/5

Dialogue: 2/5 (uses/created through ChatGPT)

Music: Okay-ish, but also AI created and generated (SunoAI)

Content: Fair

Overall: 3.5/5

Not a lot there yet, but what is there is very good. Characters are well written and distinct, models are gorgeous, plot seems to draw its inspiration on a mash of baywatch, outer banks and road house. Looks like will be a AAA game, worth supporting this developer because he has proven to see projects through to the finish.

A very promising Episode 1. Excellent at setting up the foundation with brief background of how MC got to this point and what the new group dynamics are like. I also enjoy that the different groups are distinctly different from one another. I'm looking forward to see what they are like as we go deeper into the story.

Being adult game, of course we must talk about the girls too. They are stunningly beautiful and they seem to have interesting characteristics too. I do wonder who the blonde girl in the cover page is and what role she would play.

Vanilla+youth theme meets flawless renders, good presentation and hot girls. I'm definitely in. I really like this type of games. This game has been chosen very well in terms of environment and concept. This game gives me Outer Banks vibes.

A desperate young man suddenly shines and becomes the center of attention of everyone, and there are people who can't bear this situation. It's one of the scenarios every man imagines in his mind lol. The game definitely started out narratively interesting. I wonder where it will go. I hope not every girl jumps on the MC without a reason like most games. It would be nice to see more groups/people in the story like Wave Kings, Rex, etc. who will constantly cause problems for Mc.

The game received a good rating. I want to contribute to this, it's definitely a 5 star game. Let's see where it goes.

Wow! it was a cool start!!!

Awesome start in a sunny atmosphere! I really enjoyed this game

High-quality renderings.
Beautiful women.
Excellent animations and a normal MC.

Beginning of the story is already interesting and we are looking forward to more adventure and wave, Domino Beach is coming to you!

Great start!

The writing is MUCH BETTER then the authors previous game, Become a Rockstar.
Graphics are great, and the models in particular deserve much praise. Very well made, polished and distinguished, so you don't feel like you've seen all the characters many times before.

With regular updates, this game will for sure become one of the bigger ones, the potential is there for sure, and I, for one, am really hyped for future releases.

Looks promising so far, there is only one scene and about 5~minutes of text scrolling.

The panels and art are smooth, the text writing is alright, the game feels polished. Will have to see future updates.

Best demo I have played this year prolly.
Great renders, a good variety of girls and even males. Detailed backgrounds and some pretty good shots at the beach.
Storywise the game is promising. We have several plot points to cover and to be entertained with.
Gameplay is nothing complicated, just a straight vn with no clicking around shenanigans.

Stunning girls, smooth animations, good storyline.

Suggestion for future animation: Make the speed of the action realistic. Too many of these games feature slow motion sex that is not exciting to watch.

Best game I've played in a while, that's for sure. Good graphics, great characters and a new and fresh plot that might sound simple at first sight... but a lot of things can happen in the beach. Impressive as a first episode.

Saw it was from the developer of Become A Rockstar and since I enjoyed that game I thought I'd check it out and wow, it's already better imo.
Honestly a very strong episode 1 which has made it one of my favorite AVNs already just off its concept, music and characters introduced so far.
Can't wait for the upcoming episodes

This is promising, lifeguards and gangs of surfer LMAO kinda funny.
story is engaging, I dig it. hope the dev play the cards right.

The girls are hot wth lmao... cannot wait for the next update I hope its soon!

First time rating something here and I think for good reason. Though just the first chapter, this game shows a lot of promise with gorgeous renders and very attractive characters. What was a pleasant surprise to me however was the writing! It's very fun and each character feels like a distinct personality. Great work, looking forward to future chapters!

The dev's previous game "Become a Rockstar" was pretty good (minus the cringe main girlfriend) and was developed to the end so I have high hopes for this one aswell.

In this first chapter:
The renders seem fine, hot and thicc girls, nice atmosphere and a plot that seems to be heading somewhere. Also it's giving off Baywatch vibes.

Overall a solid first release. Good luck to the dev.

the game is very pleasant and beautiful, the characters I will say this: everyone is unique in their emotions and character, the plot is interesting and calmly reads pleasantly and all this makes the atmosphere of the music individually selected and all this causes me pleasant emotions and feelings for the game

The game is great. One of the best new games I've played in a long while. And I'm already super impressed by the renders, the characters, and the interactions. Looking forward to seeing more. There is a huge potential to become one of the most popular and famous games.

This was an extremely promising first episode, with an obvious Baywatch vibe that is a breath of fresh sea salt air in this genre. I did not see who the author was before downloading and playing, and now I know this game will be great. Become a Rockstar was a great game, and this game follows in its footsteps and even surpasses it in terms of graphical quality.

All of the girls are HOT. They are insanely hot. Some of the best women I've seen in a VN, It's hard to pick a favorite, when there are so many tasty options.

I will eagerly look forward to the next update!

One of the best new games I've played in a long while. Become a Rockstar was a great one, and I'm already super impressed by the renders, the characters, and the interactions. Looking forward to seeing more.

I was surprised by this game, I like this style, the main character, NTR, etc., I can say that this is one of the best games I have ever played (even with a small amount of content), the screen position in the hot hours is perfect, I am very happy to see the process of creating the game. it has a huge potential ahead, I just hope that fame and money won't turn the developer's head, and he won't start delaying updates or releasing very few things during the year, as happens with many games... Don't let this game die, update it more often, it has a lot of history that needs to be explored, and continue in the same spirit until everything is perfect.

The game is great. The quality of the renderers is at the highest level, pleasant background music, navigation is very good, clear plot, the main beautiful and hot girls. I would prefer more sexual content in each update, but in the first releases I am satisfied with the quantity. There is a huge potential to become one of the most popular and famous games in this