VN - Ren'Py - Domino Beach [Ep.2 Fix] [Mr Jet]

10/10 so far Amazing Game, Amazing Story, Amazing Plot, Fantastic Characters.
All the Characters seem realy interesting so far, many Waifus even the male side characters seem really good which most games just do a horrible job at.

Hope you had a Hub (so that you can see the characters profiles is a really good feature that most games with a lot of charaters should 100% have)

Cant wait for more will follow this series very closely ,
Hope you can produce the story that you have in vision.

First episode release and I am ready to say this is a very promising game. The setting and colors are very vibrant and pleasing to look at, the music is on point.

The girls are not only very sexy and attractive, but I find myself quite interested in getting to know them better. Carla, Fiona and Reilly are my current favorites, that may change in the future of course.

The MC is relatable and fun to play. Oh and for once in an AVN he DOES NOT HAVE A SUPERNATURAL DONG !!! Thank you for that MrJet.

The main story flows smoothly and builds up at a reasonable speed. It has just the right amount of drama to keep me interested.


So far, a great start for what has the potential to be another hit by MrJet.

Well done Sir, I raise my glass to your brilliance,
here, here.

Review of Domino Beach for Episode 1
The main character in Domino Beach is a good looking young man who is on a journey to discovery what he wants do in life, so this chapter gives a small glimpse of that.

Renders and Animations
The renders and animations are among the best in the industry. They surpass the already visually stunning work of the developers previous game, this is undoubtedly the strongest aspect of the game. The lighting, texture and details is all there. Minor flaw is that animation doesnt match the colors of the renders.

Music
While the music does enhance the overall experience, it isn't the best I have encountered.

Writing
The writing has improved since Become A Rockstar, particularly in terms of grammar. However, the dialogues remain somewhat lackluster and can become disengaging after a while. The text conveys the message but lacks the engaging quality that makes you want to keep reading. The humor really lacks in delivery department.

Characters
The female characters are a bit disappointing. Only Carla and the "Cave Explorer" girl stand out to me, while the rest appear rather average or trashy looking. The casting could have been better (the standards were set high from devs previous game).

Choices
So far, the choices presented in the game have been mainly affecting the MC's responses without significant impact on the storyline. I hope for more meaningful choices in future chapters.

Overall Impression
At this early stage, I would rate the game a 3.5 out of 5.

Well, Mr. Jet sure knows how to knock out a first episode.
This avn is about beach life, lifeguards, surfers and the renders and animations are awesome. I very much like his former game, but this one looks even more promising.
I would recommend to play this very much. You will like it, i bet.

I have long been not attracted to games created in daz 3d, I like more games created in hs2, but this game hooked me, it's ooh very nice. Cool music, lots of sounds, cool renders. Thanks for the game, I will follow the development of the project.

What a game and welcome back with new content

" Domino Beach " The story is attractive drawing players into an The narrative is well-paced, keeping players engaged from start to finish. The renders are visually stunning, with detailed environments and character designs that bring the game's world to life. The sound design complements the atmosphere perfectly, enhancing the immersive experience.

Animations are fluid and well-executed, adding to the realism of character movements and actions.

Overall, Domino Beach is a well-rounded game, making it a must-play for beach lovers.

The game visually looks amazing, and the renders look amazing, but there is one thing that threw me off.... it is the writing. I have a feeling that it was fully written by ChatGPT given by the way the characters speak, and the music seems to be made using AI as well. I mean you could tell almost right away if you had used ChatGPT to create your own story before. I got to say the setting and exposition is unique and fun, and the story seems interesting. It's a game that pulls you in, but it leaves you feeling like there is something off about it. I have nothing against using AI as a tool to generate ideas and create art (for developers who lack the means to hire artist or create their own art)...BUT to create all the dialogue for the game using ChatGPT gives me a bunch of mixed feelings. Is anything from the game an original idea from the dev or was it purely made through ChatGPT?

Visuals/Renders: 5/5

Narrative/Setting: 4/5

Dialogue: 2/5 (uses/created through ChatGPT)

Music: Okay-ish, but also AI created and generated (SunoAI)

Content: Fair

Overall: 3.5/5

Not a lot there yet, but what is there is very good. Characters are well written and distinct, models are gorgeous, plot seems to draw its inspiration on a mash of baywatch, outer banks and road house. Looks like will be a AAA game, worth supporting this developer because he has proven to see projects through to the finish.

A very promising Episode 1. Excellent at setting up the foundation with brief background of how MC got to this point and what the new group dynamics are like. I also enjoy that the different groups are distinctly different from one another. I'm looking forward to see what they are like as we go deeper into the story.

Being adult game, of course we must talk about the girls too. They are stunningly beautiful and they seem to have interesting characteristics too. I do wonder who the blonde girl in the cover page is and what role she would play.

Vanilla+youth theme meets flawless renders, good presentation and hot girls. I'm definitely in. I really like this type of games. This game has been chosen very well in terms of environment and concept. This game gives me Outer Banks vibes.

A desperate young man suddenly shines and becomes the center of attention of everyone, and there are people who can't bear this situation. It's one of the scenarios every man imagines in his mind lol. The game definitely started out narratively interesting. I wonder where it will go. I hope not every girl jumps on the MC without a reason like most games. It would be nice to see more groups/people in the story like Wave Kings, Rex, etc. who will constantly cause problems for Mc.

The game received a good rating. I want to contribute to this, it's definitely a 5 star game. Let's see where it goes.

Wow! it was a cool start!!!

Awesome start in a sunny atmosphere! I really enjoyed this game

High-quality renderings.
Beautiful women.
Excellent animations and a normal MC.

Beginning of the story is already interesting and we are looking forward to more adventure and wave, Domino Beach is coming to you!

Great start!

The writing is MUCH BETTER then the authors previous game, Become a Rockstar.
Graphics are great, and the models in particular deserve much praise. Very well made, polished and distinguished, so you don't feel like you've seen all the characters many times before.

With regular updates, this game will for sure become one of the bigger ones, the potential is there for sure, and I, for one, am really hyped for future releases.

Looks promising so far, there is only one scene and about 5~minutes of text scrolling.

The panels and art are smooth, the text writing is alright, the game feels polished. Will have to see future updates.

Best demo I have played this year prolly.
Great renders, a good variety of girls and even males. Detailed backgrounds and some pretty good shots at the beach.
Storywise the game is promising. We have several plot points to cover and to be entertained with.
Gameplay is nothing complicated, just a straight vn with no clicking around shenanigans.

Stunning girls, smooth animations, good storyline.

Suggestion for future animation: Make the speed of the action realistic. Too many of these games feature slow motion sex that is not exciting to watch.

Best game I've played in a while, that's for sure. Good graphics, great characters and a new and fresh plot that might sound simple at first sight... but a lot of things can happen in the beach. Impressive as a first episode.

Saw it was from the developer of Become A Rockstar and since I enjoyed that game I thought I'd check it out and wow, it's already better imo.
Honestly a very strong episode 1 which has made it one of my favorite AVNs already just off its concept, music and characters introduced so far.
Can't wait for the upcoming episodes

This is promising, lifeguards and gangs of surfer LMAO kinda funny.
story is engaging, I dig it. hope the dev play the cards right.

The girls are hot wth lmao... cannot wait for the next update I hope its soon!

First time rating something here and I think for good reason. Though just the first chapter, this game shows a lot of promise with gorgeous renders and very attractive characters. What was a pleasant surprise to me however was the writing! It's very fun and each character feels like a distinct personality. Great work, looking forward to future chapters!

The dev's previous game "Become a Rockstar" was pretty good (minus the cringe main girlfriend) and was developed to the end so I have high hopes for this one aswell.

In this first chapter:
The renders seem fine, hot and thicc girls, nice atmosphere and a plot that seems to be heading somewhere. Also it's giving off Baywatch vibes.

Overall a solid first release. Good luck to the dev.