Others E-Thots: A NTR Game Set in a 100% PC Interface [Ch. 2 v2.4] [Archipote]

[archipote]

This game looks really promising I hope it gets some more content soon. Maybe a way to skip through the conversations quicker too for faster readers.

The CTRL key should let you skip the UI writing interactions, like the three dots or the writing in the text tab. Just press CTRL once for every message instead of clicking !

How often would you update the game on Patreon?

Patron updates come at the same time as public updates, but they have more contents and generally are a version above the free update. Two or three weeks after a patreon update, the patreon update switch to public

 

[qqwwe1234qwe]

The CTRL key should let you skip the UI writing interactions, like the three dots or the writing in the text tab. Just press CTRL once for every message instead of clicking !



Patron updates come at the same time as public updates, but they have more contents and generally are a version above the free update. Two or three weeks after a patreon update, the patreon update switch to public

any eta on the next update? the game looks fun but not enough content yet

 

[archipote]

any eta on the next update? the game looks fun but not enough content yet

I'll be aiming for monthly updates (not counting the patreon versions that will be released for free after 2-3 weeks)

 

[Arkade]

I'll sign up for patreon when the next patreon version is available- so I guess that would then put me 2 versions ahead of the one I played.. I was going to go into patreon immediately to play further but only saw one version on there(a single post so maybe the patreon is new) and thought it was just the public version. And try it again then. I want to see this cheating aspect. You may have plenty of people coming into the NTR tag to complain there's NTR in the game- try to make you change it so it's avoidable- then never play the game anyway whether you try to accommodate them or not. Don't bother with them if that occurs- a focused story is better than one with multiple routes that becomes too ambitious to keep up with. If you have a plan- keep going with it until the end unless it seems to you personally that there are major faults that need to be changed- or maybe you'll hear some actual valid criticism that gives you ideas to tweak.

 

[archipote]

I'll sign up for patreon when the next patreon version is available- so I guess that would then put me 2 versions ahead of the one I played.. I was going to go into patreon immediately to play further but only saw one version on there(a single post so maybe the patreon is new) and thought it was just the public version. And try it again then. I want to see this cheating aspect. You may have plenty of people coming into the NTR tag to complain there's NTR in the game- try to make you change it so it's avoidable- then never play the game anyway whether you try to accommodate them or not. Don't bother with them if that occurs- a focused story is better than one with multiple routes that becomes too ambitious to keep up with. If you have a plan- keep going with it until the end unless it seems to you personally that there are major faults that need to be changed- or maybe you'll hear some actual valid criticism that gives you ideas to tweak.

Yep don't worry, and tbh the "netorare" (cheating) is actually avoidable, as you can literally block any man talking to Morgane via Despot, just like in Discord.

But the fact that your GF and your sisters get groped, touched, and much more soon enough through shows you send them in, is unavoidable.
And since it's the heart of the game in a way, that's unlikely to change, even though I completely understand that it bothers a large proportion of players who don't appreciate NTR, which is an opinion I absolutely respect.


So anyway, I'll see you in two updates then my friend!

 

[rokudosenji]

gonna be honest, in the context of an NTR game: i don't think i would mind if some crazy clingy annoying chick who i don't like and is blackmailing me into dating her and who is also casually racist (or is implying that I am casually racist) cheats on me. i think i would already want nothing to do with her, so if she goes and "cheats" on me that is not really my concern

View attachment 3489807

This kind of threw me for a loop too. MC is definitely an asshole but the crazy, clingy, racist, unwanted gf is kind of weak for this context. Nothing terribly desirable there, so it makes everything feel sort of inconsequential.

 

[Cake4444]

This is the most out of leftfield thing I have ever read in a sex game. I had to come check the F95 thread to figure out what I was even reading.

 

[archipote]

View attachment 3494344

This is the most out of leftfield thing I have ever read in a sex game. I had to come check the F95 thread to figure out what I was even reading.

To be honest, a lot of people bringed it up, and it upset me because it's a slipped in one, it was meant to be changed.
That was one of the first dialogue written here.

I'll work on a "smoothen up edition" in priority to make the MC less of an asshole and modify bits of dialogues like this one.

I'm sorry that it offended you, and i hope you'll give the game a second chance when the updated version will be out, soon.

 

[Groomtinger]

To be honest, a lot of people bringed it up, and it upset me because it's a slipped in one, it was meant to be changed.
That was one of the first dialogue written here.

I'll work on a "smoothen up edition" in priority to make the MC less of an asshole and modify bits of dialogues like this one.

I'm sorry that it offended you, and i hope you'll give the game a second chance when the updated version will be out, soon.

I thought it was funny. Wildly blatant and out of pocket racism is hilarious.

 

[archipote]

I thought it was funny. Wildly blatant and out of pocket racism is hilarious.

It was mainly to keep the "weebs = racist" joke, without taking it to extremes. But as the very first dialogue, it's a bit harsh, I can understand that

 

[archipote]

Just to let you know that i've finished this little rework of the MC (and Morgane by the same occasion), it's now published here.
MC is less of an Asshole, and has a better chemistry with Morgane now.

And as a token of good faith, I'm also making the Patreon version available for free right now, in hopes that it might console the few people who were disappointed by this first release.

Your feedback is warmly encouraged, and I'm taking every one of them into account. If you like the game, let's build it together.

Thank you very much, and I hope you'll enjoy E-Thots as much as I enjoy developing it!

 

[fengshui]

Just to let you know that i've finished this little rework of the MC (and Morgane by the same occasion), it's now published here.
MC is less of an Asshole, and has a better chemistry with Morgane now.

And as a token of good faith, I'm also making the Patreon version available for free right now, in hopes that it might console the few people who were disappointed by this first release.

Your feedback is warmly encouraged, and I'm taking every one of them into account. If you like the game, let's build it together.

Thank you very much, and I hope you'll enjoy E-Thots as much as I enjoy developing it!

appreciate the changes, having something that plays differently than the typical visual novel or RPG in the porn game genre is always welcome, so if the characters are more likeable i can definitely see getting more into the game

 

[archipote]

appreciate the changes, having something that plays differently than the typical visual novel or RPG in the porn game genre is always welcome, so if the characters are more likeable i can definitely see getting more into the game

Thanks mate, I hope you find this version more to your taste!

Avar wasn't supposed to remain an asshole throughout the entire game, but to soften up to his new girlfriend, despite the NTR, because he's still someone who deeply loves his family and close entourage (and almost exclusively them, in truth). It's still relevant now, which is why Avar hasn't become a SAINT in this version either, to give him plenty of room to manoeuvre in the future, but it's already a lot more softened!

 

[Arkade]

Just to let you know that i've finished this little rework of the MC (and Morgane by the same occasion), it's now published here.
MC is less of an Asshole, and has a better chemistry with Morgane now.

And as a token of good faith, I'm also making the Patreon version available for free right now, in hopes that it might console the few people who were disappointed by this first release.

Your feedback is warmly encouraged, and I'm taking every one of them into account. If you like the game, let's build it together.

Thank you very much, and I hope you'll enjoy E-Thots as much as I enjoy developing it!

Before I play- i'll just say you didn't need to do this but I really appreciate it. As I said before- plan to support future releases anyway but it really was my biggest gripe is that the potential for NTR is there- but is dampened by the major disconnect between Morgane and MC- who made it seem like she was more of a cumrag for him that he could swap out at anytime. I guess in that regard it IS pretty possessive of him to want to always be able to use her at a moments notice- but there certainly was no love involved. I hope going forward- as much of an asshole MC is.. he can at least find soft spots for Morgane if no one else. That's not to say she doesn't also have meet him in the middle.. She seems clingy at first- but feelings should go beyond desperation or fear of loneliness. She likes her games and her cartoons- but she shouldn't just latch onto the first person that looks into her direction unless there's actual chemistry there. All personalities of the 3 main girls should be noticeably different so that the highest amount of variety and interactions bouncing off from them can be seen. Elaine has her niche of being the well-built streamgirl- I feel Anna just... is a little airheaded maybe?.. Or maybe a bit more than a little-.. Her failure as a writer seems mostly self-inflicted. Makes sense she and Morgane would click better than with Elaine who is a lot more no-bs type-.. I'm sure down the line they will become more distinct in their jobs and roles so i'll be looking forward to that.

Also noticing you're trying to make the dialogue less offensive on top of making MC nicer- You can't please everyone so don't go too far with it. I feel like a game like this would work being a little offensive given later themes anyway. But maybe that line was a bit too early- especially because not only is it foreshadowing but I doubt Morgane is meant to be seen like that. So it's a fine change. But later- being a little insensitive might come naturally. It's part of the genre and definitely fits some of these characters. So try not to over-sanitize things.

Also.. who is Fiora?

 

[quanbe]

Contient aussi tout le contenu additionnel de la version Patreon parfait un peu de français à la fin

 

[Metalhead42]

How to activate the last message from lefey?

 

[archipote]

Before I play- i'll just say you didn't need to do this but I really appreciate it. As I said before- plan to support future releases anyway but it really was my biggest gripe is that the potential for NTR is there- but is dampened by the major disconnect between Morgane and MC- who made it seem like she was more of a cumrag for him that he could swap out at anytime. I guess in that regard it IS pretty possessive of him to want to always be able to use her at a moments notice- but there certainly was no love involved. I hope going forward- as much of an asshole MC is.. he can at least find soft spots for Morgane if no one else. That's not to say she doesn't also have meet him in the middle.. She seems clingy at first- but feelings should go beyond desperation or fear of loneliness. She likes her games and her cartoons- but she shouldn't just latch onto the first person that looks into her direction unless there's actual chemistry there. All personalities of the 3 main girls should be noticeably different so that the highest amount of variety and interactions bouncing off from them can be seen. Elaine has her niche of being the well-built streamgirl- I feel Anna just... is a little airheaded maybe?.. Or maybe a bit more than a little-.. Her failure as a writer seems mostly self-inflicted. Makes sense she and Morgane would click better than with Elaine who is a lot more no-bs type-.. I'm sure down the line they will become more distinct in their jobs and roles so i'll be looking forward to that.

Also noticing you're trying to make the dialogue less offensive on top of making MC nicer- You can't please everyone so don't go too far with it. I feel like a game like this would work being a little offensive given later themes anyway. But maybe that line was a bit too early- especially because not only is it foreshadowing but I doubt Morgane is meant to be seen like that. So it's a fine change. But later- being a little insensitive might come naturally. It's part of the genre and definitely fits some of these characters. So try not to over-sanitize things.

Also.. who is Fiora?

Ahah that's a nice analyse mate, and don't worry i don't plan to "over sanitize" things like you said, or change drastically a character. This update is only intended to make things more smoothly, and I hope it will allow everyone to enjoy the game without changing the pace of it !

And Fiora is the main protagonist of my other game Roselake's Lobelia. Just a tiny easter egg i've placed here hehe

 

[archipote]

Contient aussi tout le contenu additionnel de la version Patreon parfait un peu de français à la fin

Oops ! Fixed, thanks for the report my friend

How to activate the last message from lefey?

Excuse me i didn't understood your question, what last message ?

 

[Arkade]

And Fiora is the main protagonist of my other game Roselake's Lobelia. Just a tiny easter egg i've placed here hehe

Ah.. Thought for sure I checked when I first noticed this game if you had an Other-Games line and didn't notice.. Maybe i'll try it to get a feel of how quality your models are- but tags are not really as degenerate as what i'm normally used to and look for..

Anyway- played through this version. I tried to choose options I didn't before but I see where most of the changes were made. There was no Morgane temp break up/serious rage this time?- That's nice. As for cheating aspect- I have no point of reference for dicks yet for this title so I can't really tell if this weirdo sending dick pics is meant to be impressive or average no-show.. I was expecting like a huge hung black one tbh that was obvious something Morgane would be impressed with even if she tried to hype up her boyfriend similarly and say it was nothing special. -... Is this going to be the same main cheating guy throughout whole game or would other characters be introduced when things start getting more depraved? And I guess anna may fall into things similarly- maybe even deciding being a lesbian isn't all that. It would be a bonding experience with Morgane too though.. Maybe it'll bring them closer together.

Speaking of Morgane- she looks like she has some abs too.

 

[Shin969]

Hands down this was one of the funniest pieces of dialogue I've ever read in a H game

View attachment 3494344

This is the most out of leftfield thing I have ever read in a sex game. I had to come check the F95 thread to figure out what I was even reading.