Nice demo of a game, heres some points:
Negatives:
- Translation
- Grammar
(Both of these are easily fixable, and will just add to the experience)
Positives:
- Nice art
- Unique premise storywise
Keep up the good work dev!
Negatives:
- Translation
- Grammar
(Both of these are easily fixable, and will just add to the experience)
Positives:
- Nice art
- Unique premise storywise
Keep up the good work dev!