Unity - Elena's Story [v1.5] [Submissive Fate]

kind of a visual novel with extra steps. But I don't hate it. I was half expecting it to be a puzzle with options of breaking out but no you really are just along for the story. Good art style, interested in future updates.

Very good, go straight to the point and it's really enjoyable, sadly it's really short.
You can petty much skip all the lore and skip everything if you dont like a scene, thing that i appreciate andd im looking forward to see more of this game

The game is in its early stages, and the overall runtime of said game is very short.
However, the animations of said scenes, the character design, the overall art, makes it extremely enjoyable and fapworthy despite the shortness of the game.
We are currently at Chapter 1, having a Chapter 2 as of V1.4,
More scenes with Elena to look forward to.

I've now finished Chapter 1 and am starting Chapter 2, and there's basically only one thing to say: More of this.

I actually only discovered one minor error in Chapter 2, and one useless path that could be avoided by swapping the visits to the weapon rack and Morag for the lexicon. The error is that the branding mark frequently changes the position of the buttock.

Simply unplayable, scenes cannot be played, dialogues just loop, this game is not a game, it's a mess. Too bad because it seems to look quite apealing...
The story seems interresting and the idea seems cool (a bad end that spans accross the whole game), you just can't play it right now.

I honestly don't know why this game is being slammed for being a walking simulator linear story. More than half the games on this site don't have gameplay and Elena's Story never claimed to be anything else. Some of the best top rated porn on this site are just linear VNs, why is gameplay a requirement for everything?

Anyways, you will walk poor Elena from orc to orc, getting subjected to increasingly depraved acts. It starts pretty intense, so the corruption arc is really just going from 8/10 to 10/10. But where the game shines is believability. The captors act realistically (except maybe the chef), have their own agendas, and Elena's mental state is pretty believable.

Where the game falters is the boring expositionary lore you collect between sex scenes. The world isn't as interesting as the developers think, outside of the cool underground "sea" that isn't water (that you don't see), so it serves more as cooldown between sex scenes.

Warning: Don't play this game if you aren't okay with broken mental bad end sad stories.

Score

• Gameplay: N/A - Walking Simulator - 0/5
• Art: 5/5
• Porn: 5/5
• Story: 3/5
• Characters: 4/5

I am not into such games (too much pain), but the animation and work and story makes this game excellent that even i can enjoy. Can't wait for Chapter 2 and maybe even Chapter 3. Great game and hope to see more high quality games

ATTENTION THIS IS NOT A GAME. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.

This is a Scene collector with IMO very good artwork, however everything falls short after that.

There are no gameplay mechanics here, no puzzles to be solved, it's literally just click here click there, collect scenes. The scenes are great don't get me wrong, but there is again no game play, no sense of corruption, no meters for tracking any sexual stats.

I really hope the dev rethinks how this game should be PLAYED and introduce some actual gameplay mechanics.

Pros:
• Plot/Scenario is hot
• Decent art and animations
• Lots of Anal

Cons:
• Very short, felt more like a demo than a full game
• No player agency or gameplay whatsoever, the entire game is go from A to B, click, repeat
• Weird tasks, for example you have to read lore about torches and shackles, I mostly skipped those

Overall Score: 6/10 - Worth a play
Review for v1.2

version 1.2

quite a short game, but very well animated. you instantly start as a slave so some pictures of other adventurers are not appearing in the game AT ALL.

imo if it had a bigger story and some other things it could be 5/5 easily. but if it had done slave/submission better it still would have been 5/5. and don't get me wrong they didn't do it badly, it's fully immersive how the whole orc camp is and how they treat you, it's just the scenes although bdsm not that sexy. some are tho, mainly the boss guy and boss lady scenes.

plus the animation is really really smooth and immersive, her little twitches when gets spanked or dick enters her are really cute and lifelike. it has some immersive story too.

it's just got a bit boring by the end by the simplicity and not-really-sexy scenes by the end. you can play this through in 2-3 hours so it's not long.

anyway, a decent game, there are probably some scenes you can fap to, it's very high quality, but not my type of game with the overly stoic fashion she was treated.

Love the art work and scenes. It is on rails, but that kind of works for a shorter game like this.
Overall Lore and story pretty good and would love to see expansions on this.
Only issue was finding the settings to change language (4th menu option).

An extremely linear scene displaying... software.

It's hard to call this a game, because it's somehow less interactive than what I usually call a walking simulator, where you navigate a 2D world from scene to scene. Here, at ANY point in time the map has only one interactive object — your next waypoint. Yes, you read that right, you can't interact with anything out of strictly designated order.

To add insult to injury, the game does guide you through inspecting a dozen or so objects laying around as a pretext to dumping a bit of lore. Yep, this is a slave collar, yep, this is a crate of edible mushrooms. Ooooh, a mossy rock, wow! Not joking, the game does make you inspect a mossy rock. No, you can't skip this task. This is the polar opposite of an acceptable approach to lore in my opinion, as lore should be optional and exploratory.

So in essence this is a kinetic novel but with an annoying addition of walking around two small rooms. In some sense this feels like a tech demo for the content delivery system.

As for the content... well, aside that it's all quite straightforward one-tone rape, it's definitely interesting from the technical standpoint: the game has no high-res CGs. Instead, every scene is made by animating in-game sprites. So quite a bit of animation and choreography is involved, and it's done with some good attention to detals. On the flip side, resolution is not that high, the camera angle is fixed and does not allow for any variance which is artistically limiting, and finally 2D rigs don't represent anatomy very well.

Generally I give 3 stars to a good kinetic novel, and this is less than a good KN on the account of annoying walking, and almost complete lack of plot or developement. The animation system is the only thing that really stands out here, unfortunately.

Short and simple bad end VN. Suffered from some bad translation issues and the moronic plague that is eastern censorship, but other than that this is pretty good.

Hot scenes, succinct writing, interesting random lore, and really well drawn art. The ending is weak and anti-climactic, but it seems like this isn't complete yet. It's more of a VN and has no gameplay though.

Elena's Story [v04-07-2025]

Bad ending that lasts the whole game, nice visual style, good lewd scenes

Gameplay is very basic, just walk from one point to another and read/watch scenes

I'll look forward to further development and the continuation of the story

It's a straightforward VN, but a very well done VN (especially if you like BDSM content). The art/animations are very well done.
My only complaint is that it's too short. Additional content would be great.

The visuals in the game are great especially Elena. But there is problem with the way its written. Its basically a kinetic novel with a lot of walking. It has all of the problems of being draw out like a sandbox game; without any of the freedom to see new things. There are no branching storylines; just walk to so-in-so, now look at object B ( i mean there is a crazy amount of lore for such a short game).

And while I am a fan of some of the "rougher stuff" which this game has in abundance; it treats the female lead's mental state far too realistically. Unlike many porn games where they use the "tormented till you like it" trope, this one never sees that, leaving the character at a minimum level of acceptance which makes all the scenes really freaking depressing. There are opportunities for other story lines and more types of content; the ending is a perfect opportunity for additional story and a branching arc but the creator chose just to cut it.

Interesting third-person gameplay, great graphics. Good story idea. It will be very interesting to see how this project grows. The more variants of events there are, the more interesting and exciting the game should become.

This review is about the most recent "full" version, not the demo.

I'm giving it four stars because I did not pay for the game. If we consider the full version costs $8.99, then I'd have to reduce it to a 2/5. The next update is around the corner though, and I assume future patches are included in the initial purchase, so I'll be sticking to 4/5.

Art and animations are great. The story doesn't have a lot of depth so far and focuses on the BDSM/enslavement aspect but there's more thought put into things than most adult games would.

I love the premise and look forward to what gets added in the future. An official uncensored version seems to be on the horizon as well.

So, what you see here is the demo, and that's it. It's a good taste to get you hooked, but once you actually take the dive and purchase the game you quickly learn how little there actually is. Essentially, you can clear the whole game in less than 15 minutes, more if you're a slow reader.

There are no actual gameplay mechanics in the game. You can't pick stuff up, you can't fight back, you can't do anything other than move to the next icon, read a lore bit about the red orcs, then move on. Generally, the sex scenes are excellent, high-quality stuff, but there's very, very little of it, and it all goes by relatively fast. You can control it a bit via the A and D keys on your keyboard, but that's it.

The game is as advertised, though, in that this is the fate of a submissive. The main character is basically broken day 1, and then it's just reading a bunch of lore. The lore itself is pretty tiny, with a handful of story beats here and there to explain why the red-skinned orcs do what they do to the 'Ground People' as they call humans. I won't spoil it, but it's not some grand reasoning... it's a porn game, so... you know.

Overall rating-wise wise I give it a solid 3/5 stars.
Gameplay 1/5: there's quite literally nothing to do than just move and read
Story 3/5: The story isn't terrible, but it's too short and doesn't offer anything interesting or new.
Sex Scenes 3/5: High quality stuff, but... very little of it, and the only thing you do is press the F key to read through what's happening, and the A and D keys to either reverse or forward things if you're trying to skip stuff.