Why are there conversations we only hear one side of?
View attachment 3554210
----------missing reply---------
View attachment 3554211
Same thing happened with Aria and her conditions.
The dialogue is already tedious and annoying enough, what with all the "$renpy.pause(0.1, hard=True)" every other line and the weird "sayings" or idioms, do we really have to skip half of the conversation that seems like it might actually be important?
Speaking of the nonsensical sayings.
View attachment 3554221
This isn't some profound idiom, it's something Hillary Clinton said, which was dumb then and no better now.
"Every moment wasted looking back, keeps us from moving forward." - Hillary Clinton
"
Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it. " is an idiom translated to English that is widely known and is the opposite of "not looking back in order to move forward" and actually makes sense, because it alludes to learning from the mistakes of the past, not ignoring them.
Still, that isn't as egregious as this;
View attachment 3554234
What?
The first part seems totally nonsensical, like some sort of strange translation and the second part seems like a really poorly formulated question. "If we go by that" ... why would we go by that?
The whole thing seems like a weird translation error.
View attachment 3554238
Another poorly formulated question, would be much better as "Do you know what I mean?"
But then he says he isn't asking if she understands the meaning
behind the words, but it'd make more sense if he wasn't asking if she understood the meaning
of the words because he clearly is asking if she understood the meaning
BEHIND the words.
And why does it seem like this is a secret coded conversation when they are in private? Just say what you mean, these strange overly verbose exchanges are not only written in an odd way, they are seemingly out of character for the protagonist who we've been told doesn't speak much up to this point.
Just say "The plan is to seem like I don't know what I'm doing, to seem dumb or naive, in order to lull her into a false sense of security".
Simple, succinct, to the point.
View attachment 3554245
Bruh ...
