So this is pretty swing and miss atm, but its not out. There is definitely some potential here. First the good:
-Rather unique renders, the characters are nice to look at...mostly
-The concept isn't bad, it can go in a lot of ways, many interesting.
Unfortunately, I am gonna end the good right there, cus that's about it. The game is short, so that doesn't help it, but right now it suffers from some very severe grammar issues. I know, grammar isn't the big concern when your goal is to fap, but it really breaks the story, especially since you're using the dialogue for context of whats going on. Which brings to the next bad point: What even drives our main character? His actions are really crazy, one minute hes the one at fault for an accident, the next he's borderline raping them to teach a lesson, contract or no, it makes zero sense on why he thinks that is the way to talk/deal with people. He isn't the only one suffering from this, as other character's actions are unnatural and just plain bizarre. The sequence of events is cut short at times, leaving the player reading wondering what even actually happened. Its extremely jarring.
I know that was a lot of bad. but! I don't want to completely dis this and just rave about how bad it is. There really is some potential here, the graphics are mostly nice (aside from distortions and that really god awful splash screen/title screen image. I guess its an attempt at foreshadowing?) So...I give this a 2, its not a total lost cause, as I've read there is some intentions to rewrite this in the future (it really needs it) and they may/may not clean up the renders/story telling.
this is a 2 for now (honestly its not 1 star, just because I really want the developer to keep trying, he doesn't need to scrap the whole idea, but it needs some significant improvements). I would consider upping this if more progress is made, if the grammar was cleaned up, I'd easily make this a 3 stars. Fix the character's actions/behavior, and its a 4 star game. If it continues with this kind of writing and the shortcomings are never fixed, this is a one star for sure. I'll keep watching to see how this goes.
EDIT: Unless I read this wrong, I missed this before, but apparently the comments got to the dev, and so this is abandoned. Patreon is down too...so...yeah. I guess this is 1 star, it will never be fixed. Its a shame. I realize the hypocrisy of saying this when I wrote a bad review, but honestly, I wish people would be nicer. I was legit rooting for this to get better and make some improvements.
