VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Erodio [v0.13] [MiZtyl]

Its not a bad story but the choices you get dosent always work.

At one point your given a choice to do stuff to a drunk girl, if you play the nice guy and dont do anything then they story breaks a little bit, since the day after when the drunk girl talks to the princess she tells her it wasent MCs faulth and she forced here self onto MC but the thing is noting happened and she dident force anyone, the princess even helped MC carry the drunk girl back.....
And it goes on when she ask the princess "why did he let me jump on him last night" and no such thing ever happened.

MC is even worried what the drunk girl told the princess if she will be mad at him and so on, it feels so stupid when you picked a choice where nothing happened.....

Its a big deal that can get really annoying, if a game has choices the text should match what you do and not just let the story go on like you did all the bad choices, then the story turns to be kenitic and choices are pointless and fake.

If you play 100% by the walkthrough there wont be any issues i belive, but thats not really how your supposed to play, atleast not for the first playthrough so text should still match choices with or without using a walkthrough.

I am still giving this 3 stars since the story is pretty good, animations are decent as well, i do miss some mood music though, when playing a game in silence it takes away alot.

I would have gone 4 stars but the blueballing with AI/KO and never even getting to be with them was the reason i went down to 3 stars, they where in a way main girls in the game as well which is why it will leave you dissapointeed.

I had a good time playing this game and the rating doesn't really reflect that, in my opinion. The girls were for the most part very pretty. The characters are differentiated from one another. And while the plot wasn't amazing or anything, I felt engaged to the story and the pacing was good.

My only gripe was that the dialogue felt like it was written by a non-native English speaker but it was passable and didn't detract too much from the experience.

This game is the definition of average western game, nothing bad but also nothing impressive either, nice renders and sex scenes but average everything else, just keep your expectations low and you will be able to enjoy it.

The progress was generic and linear, you can choose what sex scenes to watch but the story never really changes regardless, you just go with it, resulting in a very limited gaming experience.

The game was good enough. The graphics and animations were all good enough. The story needed some refurbishment. Both harem and ntr routes can be avoided from the beginning. All over good job for the developers. Keep moving forward. Best of luck.

I'm a big fan of this developer's other game, New Earth, but I was underwhelmed with this one. The characters were not very compelling and neither was the ntr (which I like). The scenes felt very disjointed like it was missing stuff in between. Also I don't understand the decision to split the game in two.

Good NTR game, although George should deflower the main girl.
Love Mary design.
There is the thing about a war/ invasion can be more deep feels toned down.
Would love to see the next game from author.

The game has some nice graphics, and the medieval setting is not bad at all although it is susceptible to a great improvement...

The worst thing of all is the script, the story has no head or feet, it goes jumping, without taking you anywhere... And the dialogues seem to be written by a little boy, which makes the game quite boring.

It makes a good impression at the beginning, but it's not worth wasting your time with it...
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El juego tiene unos gráficos agradables, y la ambientación medieval no está mal del todo aunque es susceptible de una gran mejora...
Lo peor de todo esl el guión, la historia no tiene pies ni cabeza, va a saltos, sin llevarte a ninguna parte... Y los diálogos parecen escritos por un niño pequeño, lo que hace que el juego sea bastante aburrido.
Da una buena impresión al empezar, pero no merece la pena perder el tiempo con él...

Fun game. Grammar was definitely not perfect. the story was entertaining till the end. the animations were great for what they were but with a bigger budget could have been better. this dev has a talent and i hope he gets more patreons.

The harem route is ending with 1 girl, so no harem. The plot is nonexistent, there are only jumps between scenes. The animations were just reusing old scenes with other characters or old scene with the same character.

-3.5
As many have pointed out this will feel rushed and lower and lower quality which is unfortunate though does check list a lot of things like the lowest effort movie/anime do to try and pretend it has a lot and or appeal easily.
Atmosphere+believable setting are weak queen may as well be innkeeper or vise versa, sex talks are hea...
Looks good but many these games have same quality (or more) so hard to give much of a plus to it.
No real choice outside choosing ntr+""harem""(not actually) or just ""harem""(not and apparently never will be according to maker though idk they going all over plus more on this below)

-.5
It is not a harem Just a Guy With 1 Real Love Interest and cheats On her a bit.
(later learned it because creator has 0 idea what it is and more importantly and unfortunate apparently is beyond stubborn + unrelentingly opinionated->believing all they say is right and everything else wrong to point of seeing it as a massive negative + bad mouthing the people that even slightly disagree even when they bring forward proof, niceness, and discussion-> also a word they either don't understand or refuse because again of their unshakable opinionated way).

In Closing
Plenty better out there to play, though will say least there is a rushed semi end -> more to come and open to do so.
And it medieval era with decent animation (combo I rarely see enough to say it a +).
So I say it worth a try only if you really want/looking for those otherwise skip.

I like the story
I like the storyline
I like the character designs
and of course, I love this game.

However, there are still problems in writing the storyline
Confusion and getting lost often happened to me
So overall, this is mehh .... for me
(Not that bad, actually)

Pros
-Nice genre
-Nice designs
-Interesting plot
-Optional NTR and not forced
-Its finished

Cons
-I didnt feel my choices changes the outcome
-The game feels like with rush
-Poor detailed of the days/events, as I said, is like u pass the days in a few dialogues, Im not saying the long dialogues the better, but at least make a good atmosphere for what Im reading
-Poor dialogues in the sex scenes, same as the other, didnt feel the sexual atmosphere at all, is like well, a normal scene.

The most important point for me is the real weight of the choices when it comes to playing, I consider that these games should be designed so that your choices go beyond whether to fuck this girl, the other one, or leave the road. to another character (NTR).

Thats why my score drops drastically, is it a bad game like for dont play? No, u can try it, but within its genre there are better options, and it is difficult to give it a higher score when you have tried others of the genre that dont have such clear deficiencies in basic things such as the weight of the elections, or the dialogues.

A minimalist fantasy with optional light NTR that doesn't dwell on its characters or setting
Reviewed version: 0.13
Length: ~5 hours

Pros:
+ Attractive models
+ Gets to the point
+ Mild NTR routes (avoidable, but if you don't like NTR the game loses much of its appeal since there's little else to distinguish the game)

Cons:
- Generic setting that is just a skeleton to stick characters onto and have events happen
- Characters have little depth
- Contrived plot that requires heavy suspension of disbelief
- Occasional generic text that gets repeated
- English is crude but readable

Neutral:
= Scenario is linear with optional events depending on various scores with each character.

Recommended for: Those who are desperate for NTR that isn't completely masochistic and don't mind a barebones story.

Review for v0.11

Enjoy what we have for now, not five stars yet but could be and here is why.

First the characters look very good, I enjoy each of them, but some of the outfits look bad. Myra white outfit is probably the worst. Not a deal breaker, but I did notice it more then other games.

Having animation is a plus, but let be honest, they won't win any prices.

For the story, I enjoy the mystery. However, there now many threads waiting to make sense. I'm not sure if it will be possible to stick the landing and have a solid ending with so many unknowns. Let's hope.

Last point, the VN is not a splitting path, like a tree, but more a single path with different possible events. Meaning, you can get most of both side as long as you balance the choices properly. So the NTR path is not a total loser, it feel more of a player who is in a competition with others. Not sure how many like having both a harem route with NTR together, but I do love it.

All in all, good entry, this game is on the right track.

Edit: After 0.13 I removed a star since the ending was rushed.

Writing good fantasy is actually quite hard, because you can't just rely on people's knowledge about the real world to understand your fiction. You have to do some actual world building and do it in a way, that the world makes sense. And so, I can say at the very least that I respect the creator's ambition here.

However, this is also exactly, where this game fails. Because the writer hasn't managed to pull that off, so far. This story here is clearly more inspired by a disney-fied children's vision of a feudal society rather than anything related to reality.

For anyone, who hasn't played the game; what we have here is medieval fantasy - in the vain of GoT or other similar works of fantasy fiction.

Now, from reading George R.R. Martin, the author of "A Song of Ice and Fire" it is clear to any history buff, that despite the fantasy elements, the books echo events and intrigues from the real world. The author clearly has some knowledge of history and of how things worked back then. Even though, and I want to emphasize this, it is fantasy. That's what separates it from a fairy tale.

If you envision a world, where royalty and feudalism exist, certain things follow logically from that. And I can guarantee, that in any version of such a society, princesses, baronesses or any other nobility wouldn't dream of socializing with peasants or anyone else outside of their caste. Not just because they were too proud or snooty (which is what I feel Ketha is supposed to represent) but because that would've put into question the whole hierarchy that this sort of society is based on. It would be scandalous and there would be punishment. For why should a monarchy exist, when titles actually don't mean anything anyway?
Also, a peasant's life and a noble's life were so different, they really wouldn't have much to talk about. They really were of different worlds, that was not just prejudice.

Now, again, you could just dismiss all that by saying: "well, it's fantasy. And porn, at that. It doesn't have to be realistic or historically accurate." And I agree. In fact, it doesn't have to be anything, really. But if that's your line of thinking, why even bother going to the trouble of investing time writing a story in a setting, that is foreign to you instead of going the easy route of & just placing the events in the modern times? Ask yourself - why even choose a medieval fantasy setting at all?
Is it something you care about? Does the story you want to tell rely on this particular setting? Or is it simply a way for your project to stand out among a see of games with similar settings?

EDIT: Also, as a basic rule of story-telling: Don't just info-dump about the cast of characters before the story begins. That's just lazy. Try to introduce and flesh out the cast organically. Let the reader get to know the cast alongside the main character.

This game has everything that a pervert like yours truly fantasises about, it has got a plot, decent looking characters, plenty of romps and a challenge to be on your toes lest you want your girls screwed away from you.

The story progression has enough bite to make me come back for more and the current installment does not disappoint. Full marks from my end to the Dev. for story and for all the hard work put into it.

This game may not be the cup of tea for those who want to have easy (and quick) action with the girls though, cause like I said, it makes you work for it and one wrong move can lock you out of a possible romp. For the weak of heart, a walkthrough is a must, for the adventurous...... go ahead, shoot in the dark, save scumming is your ammo .

I tried the 0.10 version of the game. I must say that I like it. The story was good. The animation is alright. I'll give it 5 stars tho. It has NTR content. So u can disable or enable it. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

My Rating for v0.9 is:

Pros:
+ Great Graphics
+ Nice Story
+ Characters Nice
+ Hot NTR Scenes

Cons:
- Some minor sentence Errors

Conclusion:
Nice Story of Betrayal and Mystical surroundings, hot Scenes without the notorious Blueball Effect coming up.
No boring repeating of scenes and senceless clicking around the place....
Also the ladies are beautifully made.
Also the Mystical surrounding are fantastic, doesn't let you know what is waiting around the corner.

Overall:
A Hot story worth the Download.

I played version 0.6 and it had a decent but rather generic story. Version 0.9 is just a bunch of sex scenes held together with as little story as the author could get away with. Managing to turn a mediocre game into a terrible one in such a short time is absolutely mind blowing, I'm not even mad, that's amazing..

Look first the good. I like the female character models, and the dev has obviously put a lot of work into them, and that's good.

Now the bad, God almighty are these some unlikable characters. I don't know if the dev was going for strong and empowered women, but if so he missed the mark. And apparently landed on, obnoxious, and awful. Seriously the only women in this game with any redeeming characteristics, is the one WHO DOESN'T EVEN SPEAK THE LANGUAGE. And MC is so useless that calling him a nonentity would actually be an upgrade on what he's brought to the game so far. Heck even he says it, why am I the one doing all the servant work everywhere I go (paraphrased). And don't get me started on the whole, we finished fifteen minutes ago thing. Even the so called "love Interests" forget MC exists, or thinking being a douche to him is funny.

TLDR, if your into a big black bull having his way with your women, this is the game for you, if not give it a miss.

Played 0.7,this game is still garbage.

Updated for .10......somehow the game has gotten worse. Which i didnt think was possible.