VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Erotica [Final] [Daniels K]

Story is very vanilla but i dont mind that to much, there are still some fun stuff happening, like Harper to bad she wasent a virgin though then she would have been perfect, but not really supprised she not, she just had the perfect look for it, but with her background it also make sense she isent one, i just love my virgins so always hoping

MC is pretty much just a slave with out a mind of hes own, when hes uncle says jump MC says how high, someone threatens MC with a baseball bat uncle says go to a party with them and MC does....uncle tells him go work with some dudea and he see the two guys he hate the most and MC still works with them.....its just really bad.

The constant relationship thing with Riley and MC feels way to drawn out, keep hearing "lets talk about what we are" and they never do is stupid, MC took her virginity, they fuck and kiss and yet for some weird reason they are still just friends......but keep saying they need to talk about but never does it gets a bit annoying.

MC i dont really care about, hes just to childish like alot of MCs are, constantly thinking how hot evey thing the walks on 2 legs is and how he wants all of them..... i wish there was an off button for thes thoughts, when a girl talks to him about anything he thinks they want hes dick, surely it couldent be for any other reasons...it just feels to cringy and gets annoying, even more so when MC thinks like that about a LI you dont want anything to do with.

MC is also a true idiot, like when it comes to the photo session while Karl is there, even when he got told that he might want her for porn movies MC just tells Riley all she needs to think about is being sexy for the photos....MC just cant put 2 plus 2 together and its a normal thing for MC doing the game.

As for the virgin scene its just a joke, its proberly one of the worst scene ive seen, when MC puts hes dick in he covers them with sheets? so the player cant see anything what so ever? and no i am not even joking....

Most funny part is when he says hes slowly getting inside you can see on the covers hes already very deep with how much he moves....its like they where to lazzy to make a real virgin scene with deflowering.
What makes it even worse is that the girl has 0 pain even with MCs dick size, not even from breaking her hymen which she did since she shows you blood on her hands in the toilet right after.....

There is 0 virgin vibe doing the hole scene and dialog was extreemly bad, never heard a girl getting her hymen broken with 0 pain but only pure pleasure.
Its almost funny to hear her say after sex that she has some pain now? but dident have any doing? and then MC explains it hurts the first times even though she dident hurt at all doing her first time....lol

The voice thing i dunno, its pretty good considering its not a voice actor, but for it to really have any effect it would need to be 100%, having 2 lines without then 2 lines with voice just feels a little pointless, you dont really get into it since once you start reading you read so when voice then pops up you are pretty much done reading already, if its 100% then you can just listen and not look text at all.
Not even sure which way i would like the most, reading is a bit faster but with nice voices that fits the characters it can do alot for a game and done right i would take the voiced over reading since it just adds more fun.

Story 3/5
Even though it is very vanilla i did enjoy some of it, and the small side things was fun as well proberly more then main story.

Girls/LIs 4/5
They look great and has diffrent builds and diffrent personalities,

Animations: 4/5
They are pretty decent and has diffrent positions.

Music 4/5
To me its just above average since it still mostly just feel like a background thing and not really setting a mood, but its still better then the normal elevator music alot of games use.

I was at 4 stars for some time but the way MC acts and thinks plus the virgin scene and the story becoming a bit boring i had to go down to 3.

Pretty solid game by Daniels K.

I enjoyed most of his games (except the previous one) and he's on good form here.

Girls are pretty and varied and as usual getting to the good stuff does not take too long. The story is nothing much but I don't mind it, it's not an incest game that needs a good story and build up.

One star deducted for the horrific looking dick though. Size is on the big side for my taste, but it's ok. The texture is really bad, not only does it looks wet all the time but the veins and the colour are all wrong compared to the rest of the body.

Minor annoyance: the transitions between scenes take a bit too long.

Review of ep 4

The main menu ensemble (music + video) is arresting and brilliant. I love it, and IMO other devs should do things like this to set the tone of the rest of the game.

...and that's where its virtues end, because the game itself is mediocre at best. (Note: I turned off voice acting as it was distracting.)

MC's "I faked a degree at salesman school" look is off-putting, and he has the charisma of a ten-year-old Republican trying to be a model citizen. Like all the characters in this game, he has no brain or agency at all and follows the "I'm a good guy" script because that's his job. It's uninspiring and I just don't care about him.

Riley is similar. I really like how she looks and superficially acts; she's my type and I should love her to pieces. Unfortunately, I can't; like MC, she also just barely registers as human and seems to be thoroughly on-rails for some type of external narrative. You could almost replace all of MC and Riley's lines to each other with "herp derp" and get the same game.

Lilly is also kinda my type but falls flat for similar reasons. I didn't go through her route fully because I just don't care.

Heather isn't my type.

Harper's intro was the high point of the game for me, but the dev doesn't seem to know what to do with her and she quickly fell into the same boring pattern that the others girls did. What a fucking waste because that storyline has problem-hot written all over it. She should be inspiring fear and excitement, not "oh, it's Harper".

Minor gripes: the game's geography is inscrutable; it looks like we park in the middle of nowhere to get to our house. Apparently driveways aren't a thing. The 50's style gas station is ... well it's interesting I guess. Never explained.

I dunno, this game had all the ingredients to be something I'd love and then just ralphed on itself at every opportunity. I don't get it. Girls + renders are gorgeous, story is a nothing-burger, nobody has any charisma. It isn't a train wreck, but it's got nothing going for it either. 3/5.

one of the most boring pointless games i have ever played on here ....a huge amount of convos go on way too long or are just DULL....do yourselves a favour and go watch some paint dry it a lot more fun......ok after playing the latest version i am altering my review from 1 star to 4 star ... the dev has tightented up the dialoge .. the wrinting is delivered much better and the animations are a massive improvment ... also what was a sketchy mish mash of a plot ... thin as it is lol... its now in your face and not a problem to follow ... you can clearly see the dev has made a huge improvment and this is one case were remaking the game was a giant improvment ... kedos to the dev for that

This is definetly the best game of Daniels K.
Renders and animations are good as always with his games.
Unless many others i really liked his last game, but this is another
level, the story the writing is really good. Looking forward for future updates.

The writing for this story is better than average, it makes for interesting reading although having no good choice in some options is as frustrating as it is realistic.

The models are nice, even the mc for a change, but the girls all have horrible body hair which was enough to drag down the whole novel for me

The good:
+ Top quality designs.
+ Interesting story.
+ Talking girls.
+ Replay-ability.
+ Often updates.

The bad:
- Nothing really worth mentioning.


Still too early in game's development, but it look like it is going to be great!
The game so far is 5/5 IMO.

This is probably Daniels K's best novel yet, I've tried other novel's of his in the past but they never really stuck but this one I'm actually really enjoying. The character models are good the renders are good and so far the story is actually really engaging and pretty interesting and leaves me wanting more, Looking forward to future updates.

great potential. i like the diversity of choices, realistic LIs, love the implied storylines. if it keeps up as is easy top 10. renders are nice. good art and posing. looking forward to more updates. keep up the good work dev

Great first chapter, love all the girls. Pretty standard overall MC isn't a douche, girls are pretty and the art is really good. You get a sense there's a bigger story with the uncle and you're basically going to end up owning the town or something else.