Eternum [v0.8.6] Incest Mod

[BlueArrow]

I knew this question would come up eventually, but to this day I haven't found a satisfactory answer. But yes, I think Annie and Mc are twins in this case.

Replayed again with the 0.11.3c update (latest one?) over the weekend to see what changed. Cool to see you've implemented the Annie twin idea! That can actually work out, played further last time and at the restaurant date they do mention having birthdays close to each other; with a bit of rewriting it can made into the same birthday.


Back to my 11.3c rerun, noticed things got fixed but still saw a number of errors so I noted them down. Had too many screenshots so had to split into two posts. This first part goes over the simpler spelling and grammar typos.

Keep in mind I am playing with the Annie sister option so some if not most of these lines might only apply to that. This is up to the end of v0.4, after the meeting the founder at the Mansion.

Spoiler: typos/grammar part 1

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[BlueArrow]

Back to my 11.3c rerun, noticed things got fixed but still saw a number of errors so I noted them down. Had too many screenshots so had to split into two posts. This first part goes over the simpler spelling and grammar typos.

Spoiler: typos/grammar part 2

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Second art with the more story/writing-related issues and some suggestions. Again, since I'm playing with the Annie sister option most of these suggestions are for that.

Spoiler: Writing/suggestions

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I'll continue playing and taking notes later if you're okay with that. Sorry if it's a lot, since it seems you're still actively working on this. I'd love to help by ironing out some of these myself but I don't how the coding works. And thanks for making this mod in the first place!

 

[Lucifer_W]

Thanks a bunch I allways need Ideas and help proofreading dislexia man and I am not native Eglish so pleases if you find something tell me.

Also the changes you sugested where Implementet in the new patch .

 

[GreggoryLove]

I'll continue playing and taking notes later if you're okay with that. Sorry if it's a lot, since it seems you're still actively working on this. I'd love to help by ironing out some of these myself but I don't how the coding works. And thanks for making this mod in the first place!

I just wanted to say that you are amazing BlueArrow. You spent a lot of time and energy to help Lucifer with this project. Just wanted to let you know that your help on this is appreciated. Thanks bud!

 

[lesnO56]

I'm also one of those who thinks that the Ethernum would be hotter if Nancy and her daughters were Orion's mother and sisters.

The question about this mod is, does it just change "Nancy" to "Mom" and her daughters to "sisters"?
I hope there is some kind of change in the dialogues as well?

 

[Lucifer_W]

I'm also one of those who thinks that the Ethernum would be hotter if Nancy and her daughters were Orion's mother and sisters.

The question about this mod is, does it just change "Nancy" to "Mom" and her daughters to "sisters"?
I hope there is some kind of change in the dialogues as well?

I even made some changes to the pictuars shown while the dialog plays so I made a big efford.

 

[BlueArrow]

Thanks a bunch I allways need Ideas and help proofreading dislexia man and I am not native Eglish so pleases if you find something tell me.

Also the changes you sugested where Implementet in the new patch .

Glad to to help! I've downloaded to the new patch so I'll be using that for the rest of the chapters.

I just wanted to say that you are amazing BlueArrow. You spent a lot of time and energy to help Lucifer with this project. Just wanted to let you know that your help on this is appreciated. Thanks bud!

Thanks! As an incest and Eternum fan this mod is a godsend (or devilsend coming from Lucifer lol) so I want to help it be as great as possible!