Eternum [v0.9.0] Incest Mod

[BlueArrow]

I knew this question would come up eventually, but to this day I haven't found a satisfactory answer. But yes, I think Annie and Mc are twins in this case.

Replayed again with the 0.11.3c update (latest one?) over the weekend to see what changed. Cool to see you've implemented the Annie twin idea! That can actually work out, played further last time and at the restaurant date they do mention having birthdays close to each other; with a bit of rewriting it can made into the same birthday.


Back to my 11.3c rerun, noticed things got fixed but still saw a number of errors so I noted them down. Had too many screenshots so had to split into two posts. This first part goes over the simpler spelling and grammar typos.

Keep in mind I am playing with the Annie sister option so some if not most of these lines might only apply to that. This is up to the end of v0.4, after the meeting the founder at the Mansion.

Spoiler: typos/grammar part 1

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[BlueArrow]

Back to my 11.3c rerun, noticed things got fixed but still saw a number of errors so I noted them down. Had too many screenshots so had to split into two posts. This first part goes over the simpler spelling and grammar typos.

Spoiler: typos/grammar part 2

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Second art with the more story/writing-related issues and some suggestions. Again, since I'm playing with the Annie sister option most of these suggestions are for that.

Spoiler: Writing/suggestions

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I'll continue playing and taking notes later if you're okay with that. Sorry if it's a lot, since it seems you're still actively working on this. I'd love to help by ironing out some of these myself but I don't how the coding works. And thanks for making this mod in the first place!

 

[Lucifer_W]

Thanks a bunch I allways need Ideas and help proofreading dislexia man and I am not native Eglish so pleases if you find something tell me.

Also the changes you sugested where Implementet in the new patch .

 

[GreggoryLove]

I'll continue playing and taking notes later if you're okay with that. Sorry if it's a lot, since it seems you're still actively working on this. I'd love to help by ironing out some of these myself but I don't how the coding works. And thanks for making this mod in the first place!

I just wanted to say that you are amazing BlueArrow. You spent a lot of time and energy to help Lucifer with this project. Just wanted to let you know that your help on this is appreciated. Thanks bud!

 

[lesnO56]

I'm also one of those who thinks that the Ethernum would be hotter if Nancy and her daughters were Orion's mother and sisters.

The question about this mod is, does it just change "Nancy" to "Mom" and her daughters to "sisters"?
I hope there is some kind of change in the dialogues as well?

 

[Lucifer_W]

I'm also one of those who thinks that the Ethernum would be hotter if Nancy and her daughters were Orion's mother and sisters.

The question about this mod is, does it just change "Nancy" to "Mom" and her daughters to "sisters"?
I hope there is some kind of change in the dialogues as well?

I even made some changes to the pictuars shown while the dialog plays so I made a big efford.

 

[BlueArrow]

Thanks a bunch I allways need Ideas and help proofreading dislexia man and I am not native Eglish so pleases if you find something tell me.

Also the changes you sugested where Implementet in the new patch .

Glad to to help! I've downloaded to the new patch so I'll be using that for the rest of the chapters.

I just wanted to say that you are amazing BlueArrow. You spent a lot of time and energy to help Lucifer with this project. Just wanted to let you know that your help on this is appreciated. Thanks bud!

Thanks! As an incest and Eternum fan this mod is a godsend (or devilsend coming from Lucifer lol) so I want to help it be as great as possible!

 

[Xxavlt]

Hey there is a mistake at towards the start of the game during the photoshoot with Penelope , she say "and besides, what would MY mom say if she saw me posting those pictures? "
With the mod isn't Nancy supposed to be the mother of both of them ?
Anyway thx for the mod godd work

 

[Xxavlt]

Hey there is a mistake at towards the start of the game during the photoshoot with Penelope , she say "and besides, what would MY mom say if she saw me posting those pictures? "
With the mod isn't Nancy supposed to be the mother of both of them ?
Anyway thx for the mod godd work

And just at the end of the photoshoot when nora appeared she say " I was wondering why Nancy and her you shared the same last name in your follower list. Nancy is your mom !"
I think it would be better if spelled " Nancy, you and her "
( If I find more while I Replay the game I will post them later when I finish the game all in one for the sake of efficiency
( And just in case do not take my word for granted I may be saying dog shit because English is not my first language, I'm french)

 

[nogger]

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Spoiler: i'm sorry i don't know that many languages image nana

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Spoiler: there's a lot here, i appreciate the effort in having to modify this whole scene lol

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[nogger]

i collected a few more but i forgot to save the draft, sorry
i'll try and collect all the errors i can find throughout my gameplay so that this mod can be perfect
really do love the work you've done with the mod, and understand how hard it can be for someone with dyslexia going through a bunch of text but you, bluearrow, and all the other degens who are helping make this mod the best it can be are doing an amazing job
i'll be editing the message above with any errors i find during my playthrough and will try to use the right punctuation just so you can save some time by copying my messages

 

[BlueArrow]

maybe replace "daughters" with "family"?

I just finished up this point too haha. will be working on writing out my all of my notes but I will disagree with the second one: here Nancy is specifically talking about how she affected Penelope and Dalia raising them alone, so "my daughters" should be replaced with "Penny and Dalia" to separate them from MC & Annie who grew up with the dad.

 

[Lucifer_W]

Hey guys thank you so much for all the support I'll try to fix this all today but I plan to take a break for the holidays days so don't expect an update from some time 2 weeks max.

Now on a personal note: I say try to take a break caus I am a chronic workaholic and a German so let's se how long I can stay away from working. But just collect errors and Mistakes and send them over I promise to read all posts and try to Implement all suggestions if possible don't feel discouraged to ask for any changes if I think they are good I will use them.

Have a wonderful Christmas and a Happy new Year.

Edit: Don't expect any further updates for the next week. ><

 

[ahxjosu]

do this work with mod?

 

[Lucifer_W]

do this work with mod?

Yes!

 

[Xxavlt]

So here are all the " incoherence" I have found ( I didn't take screenshots but I tried to tell when the scene was happening as accurately as possible and normally it's in chronological order)

First kiss with Annie : "couple of siblings " Not a proper phrase

Penelope and nova party
Refers Penelope as friend to regina instead of siblings

Towards the end of the party penny refered to mc as friend who will help her get revenge not brother

Stealing from ulyss with Nancy : say former babysitter in the elevator

Sex scene elevator Nancy " what do they feed you bous nowadays" would be better said from her perspective by for exemple adding a little information that doesn't exist exemple: " you certainly didn't get that from your father " or something similar

Sex scene Nancy elevator : "what if your daughter could see you being fuck like this " wording is kind of weird, if he speak from his perspective he would probably call them by names ( even if it mean another dialogue if player chose Annie to not be a sister )

After Nancy sex :" I don't know how my daughter would take the news " I think better spelled " I don't know how your sisters would take the news "

Just before the photoshoot after the werewolf/vampire quest :
Penny say " how would we even explain this to mom and dalia " I choose to have anni as another sister so she is missing from that dialogue

During the fake 10 years skip penny say the wrong last name during the interview

During threesome with nova and Nancy mc say " how are you so tight after giving birth to three children" but in that case it's supposed to be 4

End of the pirate hunt : Nancy tell mc that if he ever hurt penny and dalia she will kill him , this should include Annie if picked

Annie date : mc say that after all these years he never thought je would be anything other dans her friend ( if pick sister he should says anything other than siblings)

Dalia infiltration to the sultan quarter : during the interview she says that her father left before she was even born

During the infiltration if pc speak withe the merchand he says mom and the merchand respond by referring her as Nancy ( just a simple incoherence)

Thanks for the long read and if I made mistake I'm sorry but English isn't my first language, thanks again for the mod and I hope you mod the next update coming soon too

Ps: here is an Idea : make Annie the real sister of mc but step sister of the other , I think it would make more sens that the reason for the divorce of Nancy and "mc father" ( with I think was not given ) would be the birth of Annie because he cheated so they would now her even if not personally and it would still make more sens for why she is never in the backstory

 

[BlueArrow]

Aaaand finished up my notes, just for v0.5 this time since there was quite a bit. Just putting them all in sequential order instead of splitting between typos/writing. Still will be multiple posts since there's an image limit lol.

Reminder this is using v11.5 of the mod and mostly with Annie sister option

Spoiler: Notes Part 1

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[BlueArrow]

Aaaand finished up my notes, just for v0.5 this time since there was quite a bit. Just putting them all in sequential order instead of splitting between typos/writing. Still will be multiple posts since there's an image limit lol.

Reminder this is using v11.5 of the mod and mostly with Annie sister option

Post two!

Separating this section out cus this is a big one: the Truth or Dare game with Penny. This needs quite a bit of work IMO, the original unchanged dialogues don't really make sense with a sibling relationship. Tried replacing what I can within just the lines given, but I'm not sure if my lines keep the flirty nature of the original or if they capture MC and Penny's personalities well. If anyone else can come up with better dialogue for this section that'd be great.

There's also the fact the rest of the characters don't really react to the incest undertones going on between the two... Maybe Kredon's just chiller about that stuff lol.

Spoiler: Notes Part 2: Truth or Dare game only

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Now back to the rest of chapter 5

Spoiler: Notes Part 3

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That's all I got for now. Will continue playing later.

 

[Lucifer_W]

Thank you all for the sugestions I will implement as much as posible.

And for your information what I can do:
Basically everything but adding custom screens as I don't have the assets the dev of Eternum (can't write the name ><) uses but I can stich together existing once and make unique scenes.

 

[leetitoldu]

Thank you all for the sugestions I will implement as much as posible.

And for your information what I can do:
Basically everything but adding custom screens as I don't have the assets the dev of Eternum (can't write the name ><) uses but I can stich together existing once and make unique scenes.

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