I love this game. Mary is a fantastic protagonist, and even with her drastic shifts in personality and goals over the course of just one week, I always found her to be likable and interesting. The hypnosis is an incredibly cool plot point, and the impact it had on her life was just wild, in a great way.
I also checked your Patreon and found another game only to come across an extremely interesting mystery game, and I can't stress enough that I think that you write extremely well.
I am unfortunately a broke college kid, but I seriously encourage those who come across this forum to play this game and potentially donate as well, since I very much want to see more of Mary and perhaps even more of the mystery game as well. Consider me a fan.