Honestly, this is 5 star for a demo . i dont encounter much issues. just some grammar. nothing really major. This is how i imagine kaguya sama with ntr. this have a ton of potential honestly and i cant wait for more.
note: i call this a demo but its really not. it have decent content. he manage to put all of the foundations in this prolouge which very rare for a demo. anyway you should try this one
note: i call this a demo but its really not. it have decent content. he manage to put all of the foundations in this prolouge which very rare for a demo. anyway you should try this one