VN Ren'Py Abandoned Exiles [Ch. 3 v0.4.1] [Tim.E.Pants Games]

[Rinbael]

I just finished the update and I must say it was well worth the wait. I love the dialogue in this game it's so well done and hilarious and we finally got revenge on that dick 357.

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I really like this game and can't wait for the next chapter but now I have to go and watch gladiator after playing this update since it put me in the mood to watch it.

 

[lyric123]

Didn't expect to love this game as much as I did. Tahir

 

[AL.d]

I 've forgotten all about this game. Glad to see it back, we need more well made fantasy wegs.

Just a bit of feedback though. Why the constant 4th wall breaking and awkward humor/pun spam? It's so much that it ends breaking immersion, which seems pretty important for a fantasy type of setting.

Humor is fine and it's ok to poke some fun at your own creation. It can also add personality to a character.

But at times, I felt like characters in the game were coked up comedians doing awkward roast battles. They would even ramp it up during sex scenes which seems kinda counter-productive for a game of this type. When most characters start reading like the same sarcastic douchebag it actually hurts characterization. At least for me.

 

[Deleted member 1565614]

Tahir bestboy

 

[-Hex-]

I'm usually not into gay stuff in these games, but i'll probably replay and choose to romance Tahir.
His reaction when i told him i just want to be friends with him made me fucking hurt, damn

 

[Rinbael]

I'm usually not into gay stuff in these games, but i'll probably replay and choose to romance Tahir.
His reaction when i told him i just want to be friends with him made me fucking hurt, damn

Yeah Tahir's route seems like it is going to involve a lot of romance and feels. I like the submissive Astrid route but Tahir is definitely my favorite so far.

 

[Glooskabe]

Fucking awesome, timepants! Can't wait for next update!

I know you have said that Tahir might be a tad possessive, but if you could see it in your heart to help him understand that MC might love him and Astrid equally fiercely and make him okay with it, I'd really, really appreciate it! Kthxbye!

EDIT: I actually went back and found your post. You didn't actually say Tahir was possessive (although I guess that could be inferred...). You said he would probably go along with whatever you wanted but it might not be best for him psychologically. So, I revise my earnest prayer to make him psychologically okay with sharing MC with Astrid. Toodles!

 

[ThunderRob]

timmie pants does that on purpose....to confuse yer libido..."he's got a dick..no...ohhh..puppy dog eyes...dammit!!"

 

[-Hex-]

Yeah Tahir's route seems like it is going to involve a lot of romance and feels. I like the submissive Astrid route but Tahir is definitely my favorite so far.

for me it's reversed, my favorite it's sub Astrid and Tahir is my 2 favorite

 

[Glooskabe]

for me it's reversed, my favorite it's sub Astrid and Tahir is my 2 favorite

But they're so damned close!

 

[timepants]

I'm usually not into gay stuff in these games, but i'll probably replay and choose to romance Tahir.
His reaction when i told him i just want to be friends with him made me fucking hurt, damn

Ahahahah that was my intention! Make you all hurt in the feels!

Why the constant 4th wall breaking and awkward humor/pun spam?

The game is supposed to be a comedy and send up of a lot of different genres and tropes of these types of games. As for the fourth wall breaking with the narrator, it's not actually just a plot device to get information across. There's a purpose to it and a plot arc for it. Let's just say it's not just a simple traditional fantasy story. Things will get a tad more dramatic as the chapters go on and the stakes increase. In fact, you'll probably see that sooner rather than later. As for whether or not the humor tickles your fancy, humor's subjective isn't it? I like the humor style and that's the type I like writing for this particular project and it keeps me engaged. You may not like it, unfortunately. I've mainly written a lot of action or heavy drama scripts in my other work (not porn visual novels) so this was a nice break from all that. All I'll say is try to stick with it, but there's no hard feelings if it's not your cup of tea.

I will say that i'm not into him calling you "Daddy". I have never really liked that nickname and find it kind of awkward but it's so minor that it's not really a problem.

This is on purpose. Part of Tahir's character arc is about making him more comfortable in himself and his relationship with you. He overcompensates and tries to be something he imagines some super dominant alpha guy would like so he really plays up the submissiveness and "daddy" talk. You might have noticed he briefly breaks from it in part of his sexy time scene. You'll be given the option to encourage him to be more "authentically" himself or you can encourage his raunchy slut daddy talk side.

Could any gentleman make a port for Android pls?

Can't help there since I don't have an android device to test it on or really know how to adjust code to enable stuff like touch screen stuff. However, I'm sure there are plenty of people on the forum who do things like this.

 

[timepants]

Changelog updated.

 

[timepants]

Looks like the Mega link for Mac is for PC?

Looks fine to me.

 

[Kurobatique]

Just asking, but is there some interactions Tilv and the MC or not yet ?

 

[timepants]

Just asking, but is there some interactions Tilv and the MC or not yet ?

Zilv, actually, but no, not yet. He's a big focus of the second half of the chapter since the MC can't fight his way out of a wet paper bag and needs a mentor. Zilv can be that mentor if you want.

 

[Ass-a-Lot]

This game made my stomach hurts so much laughing from my first playthrough,damn humorous scripts lol.its time to replay again,thanks for the hardwork timepants.

 

[despot444]

Exceptional update, had lots of "fun".

 

[HarveyD]

Was recently wondering if this would ever get an update. Really enjoying it so far. Loving Tahir. Just hoping for a chance to put Kadijah in her place. Are we going to see anything with the lawyer? Since we got to choose their gender.

The MC comes off a little more blundering idiot than lovable rogue but, eh, it still works.
And I did notice a few times characters use the default name and not the one I entered.

 

[timepants]

Was recently wondering if this would ever get an update. Really enjoying it so far. Loving Tahir. Just hoping for a chance to put Kadijah in her place. Are we going to see anything with the lawyer? Since we got to choose their gender.

The MC comes off a little more blundering idiot than lovable rogue but, eh, it still works.
And I did notice a few times characters use the default name and not the one I entered.

There's already at least one opportunity to "put her in her place." Also, yeah, the lawyer will show up again. As for the default name use, would you mind PMing me and letting me know the scenes/bits of dialogue so I can clean it up?

 

[despot444]

I don't want to impose anything but is gallery option possible for this game? More convenient than creating save for every scene and bloat save database.