Damn good start, the writing is top notch and punchy, organically funny without being obnoxious. Kudo's to the dev for striking that balance as most who write will tell you that humor is one of the hardest areas of writing to be proficient in. The fact that the grammar and spelling are also impeccable only makes things better.
It was a bit short for my taste, but that's my hang up, I'm greedy and when I find a game I like, I wanna dive in for a nice long play session.
Props as well to the dev having the hutzpah to make a game where 2/3 of the main love interests are not of the hetero/bi female verity, now while that may not check my particular boxes, I do have to admire not only offering those choices to players who may not be used to that breadth of choice normally but the audacity to do so in the first place.
I'm eager to see how this project proceeds forward, best of luck to you dev in telling your story and finding an audience to support it.