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VN Ren'Py Extracurricular Activities [v1.177] [WolfBite Interactive LLC]

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J0hnyB0y

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I am loving Richard's route so far but I kinda find it unfair we're only halfway through his route and yet he already has as much CG art as the main five
Yea feels like the cast suffers alot from Dyne writing as he goes.
You end up with characters with shit tons of differnet cgs and other cases you get Chester jerking off for half of his route.
 

J0hnyB0y

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Yea feels like the cast suffers alot from Dyne writing as he goes.
You end up with characters with shit tons of differnet cgs and other cases you get Chester jerking off for half of his route.
No hate to Chester i love him
But for being the character that everyone hypes up about how huge his dick is, he literally uses it one time in his entire route AND you can miss out on it to top it off.
 

J0hnyB0y

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I feel like Dwayne is just slowly turning into a self insert fanfic character rather than an actual route

The pacing is all over the place and is hard to actual get a reading of what he is about, the other characters had more background going on which helped to make the narrative flow and justify the day-per update rhythm but him? He just feels like made just for the hell of it, just to add another slot and its just sad

I'm hopeful his route would pick up the pace in a few more updates maybe
Honestly i feel like that with Dozer's route..
After a certain point his route deviates from dating him to watching him try to get into Chesters pants and the MC is just there to be his "yes man".
Like where was that intrest for the MC?
 
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Honestly i feel like that with Dozer's route..
After a certain point his route deviates from dating him to watching him try to get into Chesters pants and the MC is just there to be his "yes man".
Like where was that interest for the MC?
Abundance of porn CG's aside, dozer's route is fucking weird and just laughably bad imo. First he's very upfront with his interest with the MC to subvert expectations Chester gets thrown into the mix and the later half of the route he slowly shit tests mc to see if he's cool with getting in Chester's pants while having mc as his main dish. To top it off, all this 3 way teasing goes no where cause "epilogue". So what was the point of even having it in the first place?
 

Vayu Purana

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does anyone even like Dwanye he feels so lets just say off
i absolutely love Dwayne, but I have read the loads of criticism on their writing and while I don't agree with most of it, I do understand why many feel that way. design wise, he's pretty generic, if I saw fanart cuz it be in a different artstyle of him naked I'd probably wouldn't even realize its him unless another Exa character is shown too. that great ass tho....
 

J0hnyB0y

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Feb 27, 2021
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Dozer, Dwayne, and Harold's routes are the biggest example of this. Even Harold's epilogue is plagued by this.
I agree with that.
Harold is my favorite character personally
But i completely understand the dislikemost people have for the latter part of his route, like im all down for some conflict innroutes but it really
1 shouldnt have gone on for as long as it did and
2 it shouldn't take away from the feeling that you're developing a relationship with him and since most of the time he spends being hung up on her the players will feel detached from it.
 

J0hnyB0y

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Feb 27, 2021
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i absolutely love Dwayne, but I have read the loads of criticism on their writing and while I don't agree with most of it, I do understand why many feel that way. design wise, he's pretty generic, if I saw fanart cuz it be in a different artstyle of him naked I'd probably wouldn't even realize its him unless another Exa character is shown too. that great ass tho....
I love Dwayne too
Havent had the time to go through his route in its entirety yet though
But i understand people have criticism while not necessarily on the characters personalities but how they're storues develop the audience can feel detached from it.
Like personally i always hated that in Dozers route Chester is just ok with alot of the things that are done to him just beacuse its Dozer and Dyne has such hard on for this ship he needs to shove it in everyones faces any chance he gets
I refuse to belive that Chester the guy who freaks out if you touch him while hes asleep cuz hes having nightmares if being SA'D is suddenly fine with being grabbed and kissed just cuz its Dozer.
 
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I agree with that.
Harold is my favorite character personally
But i completely understand the dislikemost people have for the latter part of his route, like im all down for some conflict innroutes but it really
1 shouldnt have gone on for as long as it did and
2 it shouldn't take away from the feeling that you're developing a relationship with him and since most of the time he spends being hung up on her the players will feel detached from it.
You can't escape this bitch even in the epilogue either. The whole DnD campaign was a long winded way of telling us, the players that he's "over" her. Which begs the question. Did he just get over her after a year of the MC and him dating or is he still hung up on this bitch? Cause she has no redeeming qualities to her at all. What exactly did he see in her?

It just reminds me of Fates where xander tries gaslighting corrin that garon was always a wise and just king. Meanwhile said king is comitting crimes against his own people and family with a smile on his face.
 
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I love Dwayne too
Haven't had the time to go through his route in its entirety yet though
But i understand people have criticism while not necessarily on the characters personalities but how they're stories develop the audience can feel detached from it.
Like personally i always hated that in Dozers route Chester is just ok with alot of the things that are done to him just beacuse its Dozer and Dyne has such hard on for this ship he needs to shove it in everyone's faces any chance he gets
I refuse to believe that Chester the guy who freaks out if you touch him while hes asleep cuz hes having nightmares if being SA'D is suddenly fine with being grabbed and kissed just cuz its Dozer.
Yeah Chester was extremely OOC during dozer's route. But suddenly he's ok with being groped and teased by dozer and mc without having some sort of panic attack like he does in his own route or in darius route. That route was just a blatant wish fulfillment. Dozer got to have his cake and eat it too.
 

PaleAngel_90

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Yeah Chester was extremely OOC during dozer's route. But suddenly he's ok with being groped and teased by dozer and mc without having some sort of panic attack like he does in his own route or in darius route. That route was just a blatant wish fulfillment. Dozer got to have his cake and eat it too.
I felt sad having played Dozer's route, felt like we weren't enough... And I LOVE Dozer. But it was a disappointment the direction Dyne took Dozer's route.
 
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