Ren'Py - Abandoned - Fairy Trainer [v0.13.5] [AstRider]

Very nice game definitely the best 18+FT game the graphics and and design are very good can't for the next update its almost 3 year since the last update i hope it come out soon i wish erza is going to have a Hschene in the next update......

+ Quite a few good animations
+ Nice models

~ Some characters are sprites, which can be a little jarring
~ Some instances of UI look very weird

- Writing goes from simple typos to straight up bizarre dialogue
- A lot of long conversation scenes for a story that is not that engaging
- Doesn't seem to have a gallery
- Scenes are often the same only with different characters

An absolutely great game, hands down the best parody game in this site, i truly mean it, i can see how much thought there is behind the story, its hard to pickup from right where the original series ended and to make it look like a direct sequel, thats a big thing for a porn game to have a "good plot" good enough to be compared as a sequel to the anime!!!!, thats some real smart work and i am not exaggerating, i appreciate all your effort. I loved the game.

Now what makes this game so good is the story and the characters, no doubt the characters and the animations are top notch, but the good story compliments them more. Well the thing is the story here is too long at the start, now don't misunderstand it, its appreciated how much thought was put to make the game as close to the series as possible, as a fan of the anime nothing pleases me/us more, but what about the non fans, its hard for them to follow whats going on since the story doesn't really give a backstory or an explanation on the characters, you are kind of expected to know what happens in the whole anime series to make sense of the story here. The biggest example is our game's protagonist, since August is a character directly from the anime, there isn't much explanation about the other characters or the way the world works, since the protagonist already knows all of them, while in most other games of this kind you play as a foreign character to the anime, someone who got spawned into this world or like a totally original character who doesn't have anything to do with the events of the anime, in such cases obviously the other characters in the game will have to explain who they are and the way the world works, which will help every player out.
What you have done with game is a blessing for the fans of fairy tail but statistically speaking most of the players wouldn't have watched anime or aren't well versed with fairy tail. So if thats the case the story being too long and complicated at the start can cause a bit of confusion to such players.

But the game is definitely worth a shot, i dont think what i said above should hold you back from trying the game since there's a lot of H-scenes once you progress a little, I am sure you would love it, it has something for everyone, some sandbox and vn put together, don't worry the sandbox is really straight forward.

Sufficient playtime as well.(2-3 hrs). I personally took a long time since i read everything and was just trying to enjoy the game in its entirety.

I know this developer from another game, and I always liked his attitude of taking criticism into account, which few developers do... BUT, that's not why I'm here writing this review so let's go!

The game has a negative but not unpleasant side, which is the beginning of the game.

Let me explain (BAD):
This game was an RPG, which turned Renpy, when that happened, the developer knew 0 of Renpy, and it resulted in almost a Visual novel. But from the middle of chapter 2 to the current up, the game changes in a fine way.
Another criticism that I have that apparently is already being resolved by the author, is the issue of the amount of porn in the game.


Now let's go to the positive side (GOOD):
The game currently lets you choose between slowly corrupting the characters or corrupting them straight with magic if they are weak, or dating them, an example I found was Kagura, she has a sex scene if you romanticize her, but if it's for corruption, you only win a BJ scene, cause she has a strong resistance to corruption.
With the character Carla, if you corrupt her and try to corrupt Wendy, there's lesbian content, but if you don't, there's no content, only a few images. On the other hand, we found out that Wendy is not a character who can be corrupted with powers but only via Carla, but she is also easily available to date.
The same thing happens with Flare, you don't even want to corrupt her, to be honest, she almost corrupts you, really! If you go for her calls, you do the reverse of corrupting her, and she changes her attitude, THAT'S FUNNY cause the protagonist does a good influence on her, the choice literally had an effect on the dialogue of the character, make you feel like wanting to find more about her past and why she's so.. that way.
Now the writing, man, it's complex... I'm not fluent in English, I understand what Dev goes through when writing, was there once.
I understand the story, I have fun playing it, and I think a fluent American can fully understand the game, so let's say it's a positive point, English improves a lot also from the beginning of the game to the current chapters, you can see more life in the dialogues. (I'm not the best person to say this, I know.)
The menu is very interactive, I dare to say that the developer should have separated the game from chapter 3, left the game smaller for us to download, and would be showing the power it has right away as soon as we start the game, and not for the middle of it, but.. who am I to decide that. But if one day you (dev) do a poll to rework the beginning of the game, I'll be one of the first to vote yes!

Summary, it's an interesting game, the story is well explained taking into account that even I who don't watch Fairy Tail understand everything, it has an easy and self-explanatory menu, it has choices that matter, beautiful models, more than one way to corrupt (don't make sense a strong mage getting brain-fucked by a mere spell...), and a protagonist who doesn't think 24/7 with his dick (which is rare!).

I would give it 4, BUT I have faith that the game will welcome a rework not in a too-long future, so I'll give it 5 stars already!

I've firstly played when it was an RPGM, At that time I gave up honestly cause I'm not much a fan of RPGM settings, but it's back now and... Wow, great job.
The start is a bit confusing but late game, you get what's happening, the story is self-explanatory tho, dialogues can improve a bit but overall, nice to play!
You can add some more choices, a bit more of H-Content and you can bet it will rise bows! Aside from that, you're walking the right path.
Dev has been going into it, you notice a significant difference between chap 1 to 2 to the third one that is arriving now. The menu is changing for the better. You can notice there's an effort putten into it, but still need some improvement, and that's why I am giving it 4-stars for now.

good game, I liked how it was an actual fairy tail game instead of the ones like the other, it did take a bit longer then other games for the scenes but ya I like the game a lot. 100% would rate it 5/5 and wait for later updates.

Tried it just 'cause I was curious why this has no review despite nearing version 1.
Its because its just too mediocre to write about.
Its not offensively bad, but its also not good. Slightly below good. But not painfully so.

It has an unclear UI with no real indication on what areas you can go to for content, but you can spam click every option so fast it doesn't actually matter at all. Its not a GOOD ui, but its not so bad to annoy you.

It has cute girls, but basically no sex. So much writing. So little fucking. I'm not saying they should be bow-chicka-bow-wow'ing all the time, but seriously, there are like 10+ scenjes between each sex act, then the sex sucks anyways, and may not even involve your character, but be lesbians instead, which is kind of like NTR but no one seems to mind for some reason.
The writing isn't even good. But its also anime. So you don't EXPECT it to be good. Its just... standard anime fair.

What you have here is a game with extremely generic and overused assets for its art, an overly large focus on writing despite a lack of any writing ability from the author and near no porn despite being a porn game, with a poor UI on top.
You could read this and think its a 1, but no, I think its a 2. Its functional. Everything works. Its not a broken game, its not offensively poorly written, just mediocre. Its not bad enough for a 1 or good enough for a 3.
I think it COULD make 3 or even higher fairly easily if it'd remember its a porn game more.