VN - Ren'Py - Fake Father [Second v0.5 Gold Full Beta] [Netero3009]

It's okay, nothing too great but also nothing REALLY bad either.

Storywise, I feel like the whole Mafia plotline just needs to be dropped and forgotten about as quickly as possible. It's not interesting at all, and is just taking time away from the parts of the game, that I am assuming the majority are here for. That being the daughters and the wife. The niece is also rather annoying and could also be shelved, and I wouldn't really complain tbh...

The MC needs to chill the fuck out a little as well, and stop being such a weirdo control freak. The dude suddenly gets 3 daughters thrust upon him and then instantly decides that they all, BELONG to him now. And that he needs to break up his eldest daughters wedding...Like, bro is a menace...

Also, not really understanding how it's in anyway a good idea, for the above mentioned daughter that we spend most of our time with, and the one who clearly loves the MC the most. To be suddenly written off to go and live in another country, RIGHT after her and the MC finally sleep together. Could be be a good pay off eventually sure, but right now it just seems kinda dumb.

Also I think the Dev needs to hire somebody to actually go over the translations again after him, or whoever is currently doing it. Because their are waaaaaaay too many lines that will swap to spanish randomly, and then swap back like nothing happened.

It HAS potential to be a pretty good game, but as of right now, too many random things that are holding it back.

I thoroughly enjoyed this game! The storyline had me hooked from start to finish, especially because the characters were so compelling. All the girls stood out in their own way—they were not only beautifully designed but also full of personality.

The visuals in the game are impressive. The character designs are detailed and the skin textures are realistic. Although the animations are limited, it doesn't make the overall experience any worse.

Renderings: 10/10
Characters: 10/10
Storyline: 10/10

Overall, By Fake Father is an incredible game! The characters are captivating, the story is deeply engaging, and the gameplay is seamless. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for an unforgettable experience.

Rating: 10/10

I was a big fan of the first part. I was not even upset by the fact that is a huge episode of dick teasing. While there was the occasional fuck tossed in from the slut secretary.

The second part however shot that all back out the window for me. Now I see this is yet another Dev who haas flown the mexican hairless idiot route and changed the lovely natural look on the women to the indudtry standard all shaved pre pubescent route. I personally find that look disgusting on my women. I can live with it mixed in but when he shaves one himself and no choice given in that matter it thoroughly ticked me off. Not happy with the maid still being just a blow job machine. Come on that needs a good quality insemination as well.

Ummm Future tags. They all look good except the one that doesn't. How the hell is it incest when they are not his family members. That would only apply if the real dad came back in the picture and was carrying on the same way as the "fake" father.

Yeah. I will happily give those stars back again if some things get reverted back to previous. The girls are still hot but a natural look is appealing. The story could stand some improvement. There could stand to be more sex scenes. A choice of whether to shave or not like it did with blood on with taking the virginity would be appreciated. That way us natural folks are happy and those that like every woman looking like a 12 year old get what they want too.

Dude needs to develop an income source as well. This is pathetic. He should have some sort of money flow as you know damn well the previous guy had one. His lavish lifestyle does not support the ;ack of income sjown here. Just saying.

1 cherry down and 2 still to go. When is he gonna bang the real dudes ex old lady as well? That should be interesting. It would be funny as hell for the original him to switch back and find himself sharing a bed with his entire family. That would get the dev that tag he wants so much.

Second v0.5

The story has very imaginative take on the familiar "family love" setting. It gives nice plot to follow and makes all the interactions between characters fresh.
Sadly the Second part has only ghost of what was the main plot in First part. Like if sequel of some action movie was the "happy life" after all the action. If this second part has some major plot coming, it is taking its time to reveal itself.

Writing does good job of creating women characters that makes me want to support MC´s goals. Conversations flow naturally and with good writing make the characters believable.
But in the end, characters are little boring. Or maybe the one sided sexual interest does make the conversations lack sexual tension.

Visually game is really good. Different types of bodies make all the women pretty on their own way. Sex scenes have lots of well done intimidate touching, good animations and nice camera angles.
Virgins and teens are nice and all, but lets hope the wife and other possible experienced women are more passionate.

I really enjoyed this AV game. The slow burn pacing works really well and gives time to connect with the story. All the love interests are really pretty and well-designed too, which made the scenes feel more rewarding. That said, I think the game could really use more content. The counting and progression feel a bit too slow and light right now. If they added more updates or scenes, it would be amazing. Still worth checking out if you like story-driven stuff.

This was a so so game, but it has a good premise and the start sounds it has a lot of potential, but then it completely starts going apart. Its almost the generic 1+3 Woman gameplay.

The graphic design is generic and does not stand out.

The thing I would say stood out was the dialogue, it was decent and the choices gave more gameplay and also some had some interesting directions the story went, held my attention and also gives you the choice to move away from story lines you dont like. This is sometime i liked.

The average rating is not because it is actually average, it has a lot of potential. People who like quick rush visual novel this is for you.

Game is perfect game , for it is not in rush for dev of relationship unlike other games, it takes it time to unfold its narrative.

Moreover the character relation and writing is sufficient amount of absurd that it is neither so realistic to be creepy like light of my life,but neither is too much nothing burger like click and fick game where there is no narrative tension and relation development. There is sufficient amount of suspension of disbelief, I generally hate incest tag games as they either try to be vreeply realistic in their writing or they are just too much focusing on sex, this is between that d locate balance like true bond. Where we all know this is not realistic and yet we are here for the heck of it.

The sex scenes are okay, personally I don't play this game for sex scenes, but for development of relation.

Overall 4.5/5

TL;DR
Control freak fantasy. Weak H-scenes. Poor story.

Story: 1/5
The mafia plot is ridiculous and makes no sense. The writing is inconsistent — constantly switching between “You feel…” and “MC feels…”, like the writer couldn’t decide on the perspective.
The MC is poorly written. He’s supposed to be a 45-year-old man but acts like a horny teenager who stares at every woman he sees. All his 'daughters' MUST be obedient, virgin girls whose only purpose is to be deflowered by him.

H-scenes: 1/5
Some reviews mention the slow burn. I usually like that kind of pacing, so I gave it a shot. But this is the worst kind — nothing feels natural. There’s no buildup, no corruption, no romance. Just an old guy groping girls randomly, and they go along with it like it’s totally normal, which makes them seem brain-dead.
The scenes are short, emotionless, and have no tension. There’s maybe one decent scene with the oldest daughter, but that’s it. Animations are short and unimpressive (2/5).

Renders: 3/5
One of the few incest games that at least tries to make the characters look related. The different body types are a plus, but it’s full of overused assets you've seen everywhere else.

i really like this game. some people give low score maybe because of the slow pace of the story. but what will come will come, the story is slow but it will bring more satisfaction.
Although there are some things that are not very reasonable, for example Alice, she cursed her father in the beginning of the game very badly, what kind of child would talk to her parents like that.
overall it is quite good, the graphics are getting better and better with each update
10\10

Love this game so much, especially the interaction with elder daughter - Dora.

True, I feel the pace of this game is really slow, but maybe because of this, it tells the story so much better.

As a father, take over the elder daughter step by step, instead of suddenly elder daughter want to have sex with her father without any qualms.

Watching the story, can see how the elder daughter goes from having no sexual fantasies about her father to falling for the right reasons and wanting to have sex with him even though she knows he is her father. Especially when finally gets to have sex with Dora, I am so involved and excited.

Now the story comes to the second daughter, feel the beginning of the story with second daughter is arranged without any abruptness, and now I am looking forward to the story of him and his second daughter.

But I still don't like the story of him and his youngest daughter very much.

I hope that the story can still continue to interact with elder daughter such as she came home for holidays to make love with MC and etc.

Wasted opportunity. In essence no player choices to make the player feel engaged with the story. Here's an opportunity to make the main character navigate wisely to mimic and take the place of another person. This AVN is mainly kinetic so all that is squandered.

Two daughters are highlighted, one daughter is pretty much ignored. The wife is ignored. Most of the first chapter is a female yelling at and insulting the MC. This is not appealing. The second chapter doesn't carry over the few choices one can make in the first chapter and there's even less choice in the 2nd chapter.

Too many times the dialogue stopped being English and turned into Spanish. Those bugs still haven't been fixed, this is poor quality control and attention to detail.

Two stars, this feels like a half-hearted effort.

It's an exciting story with beautiful visuals. The characters look amazing, have diverse personalities, and are packed with emotions. The Corruption aspect isn't rushed and is very well done overall. I'm hooked on that one, especially because decent corruption games are not frequently created. 10/10 would recommend

I was, at first, reluctant to play this game. Initial reviews were poor, but the premise was intriguing. Finally thought, ”What the Hell“ and gave it a go. It proved pleasantly decent. Story is rather unique for the genre. While there are some logic holes, what story doesn’t, it was just as plausible as most. Renders are decent and animations quite acceptable. It is a slow burn, but really picks up at the end.

The Dev seems to understand the best assets of the LI s and dutifully accentuates them in frames and during sex scenes. I mean how many times are you disappointed with a half baked sex scene of only one position with two angles? The LI has a righteous ass, but you only get missionary? Welp, no spoiler, but this Dev goes all in. I appreciate that in a slow burn. If you are going to build tension and tease, better have an epic payoff.

The latest update seems to now focus on the next LI. Saw that coming. Probably going to slow burn that one for a few updates. Rinse and repeat. I’ll wait for a few updates before picking it up again. Regardless, if the tags appeal to you give this one a go. Get through the slow burn for the payoff. It’s worth it in my opinion.

VERSION: Second v0.2 P1

TITLE: Better than expected

PROS:

1. Beautiful models and renders, a bit dated, not as fancy as some but still above average IMO.
2. Animations are nice, short but good.
3. Story is actually not too far fetched and could be somewhat believable, plenty of thought and effort went into it.
4. Slow burn story initially, but not too bad, gets spicy eventually, but...See CONS
5. Written fairly well considering the developer is not a native English speaker, but...See CONS
6. Sounds are good, but...see CONS

CONS:

1. Slow burn is very close to being too slow IMO, but works to build the characters and story.
2. Sentences need some revision, I have found areas that are still in Spanish, areas where the MC names is changed around with person he is talking to, so some revision is needed here.
3. Game sound adjuster doesn't work, at least on second part, so sounds are very low, this is something the developer should look into, the sounds are decent and provide good immersion to the game.
4. No gallery for second part and option to unlock entire gallery would be nice.
5. Very little content currently in latest release, I personally would appreciate a bit more progression in updates, as things ended on current content, it feels like the MC is back to square one again which just reminds the player that it will be a while before there is any action again...

Overall, its a pretty decent game, I would say 3.5 stars but feel its closer to 4 than 3 so. I believe this developer deserves the support for a decent game with a fair amount of content, I hope he completes this title and keeps the story and standard high

At the beginning I arrived because of the morbidity, I stayed because of the story and the morbidity hahahaha, I have finished 0.11a and it is a brutal cliffanger, I want to continue reading
For now I like all the girls, the only one I like the least is Chloe, I want to correct her very strongly.

this is terrible game, NO sex.. Single choice, why bother ask what to choose? terrible.. waste story or recycle story pathway, going sleep with girl but no sex or opportunity to do anything and next repeat same story.. i think MC penis is not been made yet..

Well, this vn is empty, I dont recommend playing it in v0.10, wait for the V9 or something.
The actual game covers the events in the span of 15 days, but this is not a game but a kinetic novel where the developer got tired after making 2 choices available and decided to cut it back a little. You are still presented with the option of allowing or closing paths at ´"key moments", but thats it.
As a porn novel it barely reaches the category cause there is nothing besides a couple of kisses and some groping , and that despite the fact that this game is one of those where the girls are completely oblivious walking porn tropes and the guy just tells them shit like the typical sexual predator predating on kids basically using their innocence and ignorance in his favor. Still he gets nothing.
There is nothing of quality that stays for more than 2 seconds and that destroys any possibility of the game performing well in other aspects and fitting in another category like "erotic" or "wholesome". Maybe if the dev expands those things in later scenes, but right now it is too green.

This one needs a couple years and a lot of work

Review on Fake Father [v0.10b]

Such a shame, this had potential. Sadly it wasn't executed that well.

The game is a bit of a mess, the story is lackluster, and choices are non-existent. Then there are the issues with the grammar of the English version, it's pretty bad and can be off-putting.

There is also not a lot of sexual content yet, but I don't mind that as much.

The biggest reason for my low rating is due to the protagonist that we play. A delusional sexual predator who thinks he's not, while he grooms, molests, and manipulates those around him.

For me, that was extremely off-putting, and I nearly dropped the game there. I did finish the game till the end, for me, it did not get any better.

But give this game a chance yourself. Maybe you experience this game differently, it's not a bad game, it just wasn't for me.

The Dev spends his time and effort to make this game, regardless of how I feel about it, I appreciate his efforts, and wish him the best with his future game development.

I happen to enjoy the premise of this game and the pictures (those that criticise the pixels and methodology of presentation need to get a life or just leave the site), but the thing that COMPLETELY kills it is the shite English and grammar. I have tried to ignore it but FFS how hard is it to get someone to proof read and tell you that, for example HIM is not HER???? As to the more subtle errors of grammar which are equally easy to identify, it makes my brain scream trying to ignore the shite thats written!
It's no excuse if the author doesn't have english as a first language, this is something easily fixable via someone checking it

[Version 0.9a]

Story ★★★✰✰
The story is kind of unique in a way. It's not very realistic but it's something that you don't see often. I also like how by using the "double" idea, you can fully enjoy the sense of taboo without it being real incest(?) I guess.

The only sad part is the dead-ends (under-developed) paths of the game that ends your play-through unexpectedly short.
As of this version (0.9a) I recommend playing nice with the daughters. Trying to go for obedience will end your play-through prematurely and also cause you to miss over half the content.

Characters / Animations ★★★★✰
Characters are interesting and pretty cute. Corrupting them felt nice, not forced.

Scenes ★★★✰✰
There isn't much yet. A lot of teasing, but I think once the corruption ball is rolling, we'll get to see a lot of well-made scenes.

Coding/Script ★★★✰✰
Bugs and crashes-free.
But perhaps the biggest downside of this game is the English translation. Will need to get a proper translator, or quality check more thoroughly.

TL;DR / Overall ★★★✰✰
I almost skipped this game, but I'm glad I didn't, this is an interesting game to keep on radar, and I look forward to what the future brings to it.