3 stars for having a good amount of and variation of sexual content for how short the game is. I especially liked the younger girls.
The abrupt turns of events, although sometimes poorly written, were absolutely hysterical. I added 1 star just for all the laughs I got.
The really shows that you don't need elaborately written scenes and stories to make a good AVN. It's just porn. Getting things to the point faster and avoiding mindfucking the player with the author's life philosophy is a good move. Who knew?
Although I'd have liked the VN to be longer, even something of double the size of this would be to my satisfaction. You don't need 8 chapters and a year to make a good ADULT VN that has plenty of sex. If I wanted a sappy story or a philosophy lesson I'd just read a book.
I'd give this 5 stars if it had:
- a bit more story at the least
- no grammar/writing errors
- a bit more realism: