First of all, lets start with the good. Guys, this is $7 usd (if american, thats literally a star bucks drink). I bought it simply because of the artwork. Honestly guys, go buy it. Its reasonable. I'm leaving my constructive criticism here and not on steam because I'd be a neutral tbh not a full positive. For being a first game, this is not a bad start but...
Im not sure I'd even call it a game in general, its just a on rails walk simulator. This could of easily been a VN/Renpy game. I think you guys first need to figure out what it is you want to be. Do you want to be a VN devs? Make a Hentai Game? Walking Sim Hentai Game? Etc. I think I speak for most of us, most of us bought simply because the artwork is really fucking good (we are tired of the same artstyle shit thats been around for 20 years and most others because NTR is just the fad right now.) So you've got the artwork down but I played this game and honestly I'd have to agree with some of the comments, I'd barely call this a game, walk -> see scene -> reset -> scene 2 -> reset etc. While this is okay and most people will like it, I'm sure you want to capture more of an audience or be able to command more of a price at least. This game could of been done like Starmaker -> vs the opposite end where you actually add h combat -> fist of souls or even as far as Karryn. I'd suggest researching the big boys in the h game. Theres a reason why Karryn did so well and has over 400 comment page. It also was able to sell in the $30 range which is well worth it due to its replayability. I could go on and on but for your next game, commit to what you guys want to be. I bought it thinking I was going to get some H-game RPGM action but ended up just walking around to get all the scenes. It kinda killed my motivation to play. I see RPGM as the engine, I almost expect interaction at some point but this had none. I'll admit if the artwork wasn't this unique, I would of easily returned it.