Ren'Py - Family Business [v0.1] [Vs Studio]

As of v0.1:

If you hate women, this game is for you. If you love terrible spelling and grammar, this game is for you. If neither of the above is true, I would consider avoidiing this game.

Artwork/Animations - 3/5

The art isn't bad. I honestly have no idea whether this game even has any animations because I literally couldn't bring myself to continue playing it.

Story/Dialogue - -5/5

Yes, that is a -5. Listen, I get many devs have English as a second language. I completely respect that. Many of those devs create great games with very good dialogue because they put effort into writing and, if necessary, translating it. This dev did none of this. The dialogue and spelling is atrocious. The dev put zero effort into simple things like spacing words. And the story is just bad. The MC hates women; the first scene is a rape scene, and the woman kinda just shrugs it off. Like... what?

Gameplay/UI - 1/5

Even navigating the game is tough. Nothing is highlighted, so you don't know where to click, and even the locations to move around are spelled wrong. Hell, the dev didn't even bother to translate "Sim" and "Nao" to "Yes" and "No" when you exit the game.

I try my best to leave fair reviews on games I play, and this includes games I feel should be avoided. Sadly, this falls into that category. Again, if this is your type of game, by all means, go for it. But my honest opinion... Don't bother.

Cheers.

Radical Dreamer

Awful, 'the mc' absolutely hates women and acts like a loser all of the time. The dialogue forces us to listen to his utterly pathetic ongoing thoughts about how much he hates women while at the same time having to pay for sex - showing the reason he hates women because he is inadequate. Who wants to play as such a pathetic guy!?

The writing is cripplingly bad. The comments on the game thread saying this 'has potential' were utterly misleading. It's possible you can enjoy it if you hate women enough, but it seems unlikely.

The women have no motivations for anything and completely forget what an absolute loser the mc acts like, 5 seconds after it happens. Apparently it's normal to send kisses and nudes to the person who just raped you.

The renders are pretty ok as are the models chosen, but that irrelevant when the sex scenes are absolutely awful - supposedly you can stick your insecure cartoon dick 9 inches into a womans ass without there being any resistance. Anyone who has actually had a woman will look at the sex scenes and cringe the same way they would hearing a 13 year old boy tell a fake sex story.

The sex scenes are made doubly bad because it's full of cuckish dialogue trying to sound macho by talking to himself about how much he hates women.

The UI itself is full of spelling mistakes and awkward to use just as the dialogue is and half of the UI isnt translated from the brazilian/semi portuguese. No thought has been put into the sandbox design, there are no indicators and typically doing anything at all requires a dozen redundant clicks

The renders are pretty poor. Even if you ignore the tacky decoration of all rooms which makes the scenes hard to focus on, the lighting is very bad. They are also typically badly framed, it seems we are supposed to focus on the mens earrings ALL the time