There are some things here that really tickle my (ahem) fancy. But a lot of it is odd and irritating, and the oddness and irritation is increasing.
It's a VN with choices and minigames. The choices are non-intuitive and either meaningless or lead to game over, so I recommend saving at every one. The minigames are random and feel more like the teacher throwing chalk at you to make sure you're paying attention. Like, "hey, are you paying attention, or are you just clicking to the next erotic scene? Well, here's a spot quiz to check."
This is a noir, MC is a sleek secret agent, surrounded by lesbians, virgins and femmes fatale. Lots of night scenes, fast cars and gunplay. It starts with intriguing mystery and menace. Unfortunately, this ambience dissipates with every update, and the plot is becoming random, just throwing bits of intrigue at the wall to see if they stick. Dialogue also begins nicely hard-boiled, but by about chapter 5 it's switched to full- Dostoevsky, meaning-of-life confessional, and gets really tedious.
The renders, too, are way better in the beginning, very cinematic. Early on, there is a great sequence where the MC goes out on a mission and gets stopped by a cop. To me, it's a near-perfect example of using cinematic style in a VN. Really kinetic, and an excellent use of sound.
The erotic stuff is often weird, but sometimes outstanding. I say weird because the way the MC speaks in the erotic scenes is really out of character to how he speaks everywhere else. It's like, "Vodka martini, shaken, not stirred," followed by "yeah, baby, suck that big cock." Like, the moment Sean Connery takes his pants off he transforms into Mike Myers. And there are many mascara-ruining irrumations, which, I er, don't mind, but just wish there was a little more going on. Seems rather, well, selfish and inconsiderate to the lady.
Where the erotic content is outstanding is the scenes with the MC and his, er, houseguest. These are wonderful (even if they are repeatedly interrupted by random doorbells, gunshots, and people screaming).
One odd thing about the artwork I have to mention... does the MC have mirrors on all the walls of his apartment? It seems every image includes a reflection. Just an odd way to live.
Kind of a rambling review, I know. But my main observation is that this VN is taking its time. Updates are very slow, and quite sparse. I wonder if that's the problem, the reason why the strong start is going downhill. Is there a kind of creative momentum you need for these things, and if you take too long, and do too little, do you lose it? Like I say, a strong start, but then it's as if the dev is like, "huh? I guess I'd better toss out another chapter."
It's a pretty fast play, and there is gold in here, so I do recommend.
It's a VN with choices and minigames. The choices are non-intuitive and either meaningless or lead to game over, so I recommend saving at every one. The minigames are random and feel more like the teacher throwing chalk at you to make sure you're paying attention. Like, "hey, are you paying attention, or are you just clicking to the next erotic scene? Well, here's a spot quiz to check."
This is a noir, MC is a sleek secret agent, surrounded by lesbians, virgins and femmes fatale. Lots of night scenes, fast cars and gunplay. It starts with intriguing mystery and menace. Unfortunately, this ambience dissipates with every update, and the plot is becoming random, just throwing bits of intrigue at the wall to see if they stick. Dialogue also begins nicely hard-boiled, but by about chapter 5 it's switched to full- Dostoevsky, meaning-of-life confessional, and gets really tedious.
The renders, too, are way better in the beginning, very cinematic. Early on, there is a great sequence where the MC goes out on a mission and gets stopped by a cop. To me, it's a near-perfect example of using cinematic style in a VN. Really kinetic, and an excellent use of sound.
The erotic stuff is often weird, but sometimes outstanding. I say weird because the way the MC speaks in the erotic scenes is really out of character to how he speaks everywhere else. It's like, "Vodka martini, shaken, not stirred," followed by "yeah, baby, suck that big cock." Like, the moment Sean Connery takes his pants off he transforms into Mike Myers. And there are many mascara-ruining irrumations, which, I er, don't mind, but just wish there was a little more going on. Seems rather, well, selfish and inconsiderate to the lady.
Where the erotic content is outstanding is the scenes with the MC and his, er, houseguest. These are wonderful (even if they are repeatedly interrupted by random doorbells, gunshots, and people screaming).
One odd thing about the artwork I have to mention... does the MC have mirrors on all the walls of his apartment? It seems every image includes a reflection. Just an odd way to live.
Kind of a rambling review, I know. But my main observation is that this VN is taking its time. Updates are very slow, and quite sparse. I wonder if that's the problem, the reason why the strong start is going downhill. Is there a kind of creative momentum you need for these things, and if you take too long, and do too little, do you lose it? Like I say, a strong start, but then it's as if the dev is like, "huh? I guess I'd better toss out another chapter."
It's a pretty fast play, and there is gold in here, so I do recommend.