VN Ren'Py Family Secrets [v0.1] [Netori Lord]

[Paradox004]

Nothing is avoidable. the game is kinetic. no choices whatsoever.

Ew. Then it needs the kinetic tag to be auto-ignored lol

 

[wuhasy]

looks great

 

[ktemanuel]

spanish link

 

[Netori Lord]

Thanks for your interest in the visual novel!
To clarify because this may be important to some. There is no Netorare in this story. The story will have MC taking characters that belong to another, but no one will take from MC.

 

[GodlessPhantom]

Thanks for your interest in the visual novel!
To clarify because this may be important to some. There is no Netorare in this story. The story will have MC taking characters that belong to another, but no one will take from MC.

But we will have to watch future li's having sex with other males first(sloppy seconds). Women in preview #7 pic if she is a li then i don't want her now nor would i want any li shown/tmi fucking other males that are not the mc. Is forced voyeur of li's with other men really that important that it can't be avoidable?

 

[gthmf]

Not a fan of the cel-shading... but what's really gonna stop a lot of the NTR-haters from playing this, is the 2nd to last preview, where someone other than the MC actually gets to use their dick. If you can't avoid it... just slap NTR on here. Even if it doesn't fit the official definition... on here, most people call it that if non-MC dicks get used.

If you drop the cel-shading, I'll check it out... but that seems to be how you want it... so maybe don't change it. Idk. Some will possibly prefer this art style, and some will likely be neutral towards it. I have no idea if people against it, like myself, would be the majority or not... but sometimes your artistic vision only fits a particular target audience, anyway, and you're better off sticking to it, even if the target audience is the minority. (and perhaps it's actually the majority. Again, idfk lol)

Anyway, just some things to consider. I won't Ignore it for now, just to see if you change it by next update or not. If not, I can ignore it then.

Good luck to you, either way.

Very much in the against camp. I loathe these styles/filters that make things look like they were painted. Badly. The only reaction they all prompt is hitting the ignore button. Cause I don't care how good a game *might* be, when I know I'm gonna hate looking *at it* for the entire time.

 

[RedBone]

can someone make a fix for the text so im not guessing what some of it says, since parts under the box...or tell me how.

 

[Paradox004]

can someone make a fix for the text so im not guessing what some of it says, since parts under the box...or tell me how.

Depends what you need. URM can increase things like font size or change text box positioning if some gets cut off. Not sure you can change the color with it. I haven't really messed with that stuff. Could almost certainly use something like UnRen then Ren'py yourself to change that, but man, I barely know how to use URM, so I can't help you with that lol

 

[RedBone]

Depends what you need. URM can increase things like font size or change text box positioning if some gets cut off. Not sure you can change the color with it. I haven't really messed with that stuff. Could almost certainly use something like UnRen then Ren'py yourself to change that, but man, I barely know how to use URM, so I can't help you with that lol

ah, same here. i add URM to every game, but unsure how to make the font smaller or the box longer to fit the text.. tho the game is confusing with the aunt\Mom stuff..

 

[Netori Lord]

ah, same here. i add URM to every game, but unsure how to make the font smaller or the box longer to fit the text.. tho the game is confusing with the aunt\Mom stuff..

Hey first off, thank you for giving the visual novel a try! I’ll do another pass through the game to make sure everything fits inside of the text box! Sorry if that hindered your reading time.
With the mom/aunt situation, Jun sees herself as Feng’s mother-figure. It’s something causes issues between herself and Ronald(her husband). I placed this within the dialogue, but I may need to change how I’ve presented it, or make it more of a prevalent theme moving forward.

I’m currently working on 0.30, so I’ll be sure to put this feedback to action. Thanks again!

 

[RedBone]

Hey first off, thank you for giving the visual novel a try! I’ll do another pass through the game to make sure everything fits inside of the text box! Sorry if that hindered your reading time.
With the mom/aunt situation, Jun sees herself as Feng’s mother-figure. It’s something causes issues between herself and Ronald(her husband). I placed this within the dialogue, but I may need to change how I’ve presented it, or make it more of a prevalent theme moving forward.

I’m currently working on 0.30, so I’ll be sure to put this feedback to action. Thanks again!

i understand she is the mom, but why is she referred to as aunt a lot as well?

 

[Paradox004]

i understand she is the mom, but why is she referred to as aunt a lot as well?

Not the dev nor working with them, but I would guess it's basically a term of respect, like when a Japanese person might be like, "Thanks, Tsunade-san!" but in the dub, Naruto calls her "Granny" affectionately. I think in Korean, they basically call older men or women (with like a several year age gap) uncle or aunt. If it's a small age gap, like 2 years or so, it might be more like "big sis" or "big bro." I remember the word Unnie, I think. Don't remember all the specifics.

 

[Netori Lord]

Happy Halloween!