Ren'Py - Fashion Business [Ep.5 v1.01 Extra] [DecentMonkey]

To be fair and honest, the story is fantastic, the renders are super amazing but there is one thing that made me drop the game and close it forever is the way it is built to grind the hell out of the player and makes me bored to death with doing stuff over and over and over with no point...... show me a stripper that takes 0.5 dollars for squeezing her boobs and ass....... really? it is totally annoying to keep scrolling through the whole process over and over and over and over again!! this game has become gamer-enemy and it is really making me sad with the quality of such a game ... sometimes working too hard does not mean you are doing it right, I fully understand the process of making such a game and the amount of time it takes to put things together but you need to work right along with working hard....

I hope the developer sees this and realizes that it is only constructive criticism and do something about it

From the start I wanted to something bad happened to the MC but when she got into prison I wanted to get out and start my vengeful path. I wanted to get my high life back. I felf really pitty because everybody was a dougebag to me through I helepd them in the first episode. I had nowhere to sleep, nothing to eat and I had to survive in icy rain. The game awaken some feeling I did not expect and I love it. The models are high-quality, the game also has sounds, animated scenes, nice quest log.

I finally found time to try this game, and I can say that this is one of the worst games ever made.
There is unavoidable sexual content related to, for certain people unappealing fetish, and players are forced either to watch it or to delete game into trash bin, as I did. (Funny thing, all other previous sex scenes were avoidable, so questions are raised why this one wasn't? ) Besides that, MC's going around with some, for certain players, unappealing dude on dates...Seriously? Where is option to decline him?
Characters are bad, very bad written. MC especially, she acts like she have some kind of mental disorder, cause she's doing things highly conflicted to her own personality. It's absolutely unrealistic, even for a porn game. That is also big minus.
Storyline is ...just meh...It could be much, much better.
Game mechanics are beyound horrible. VN combined with RPG - it's recipe for absolute disaster. Recipe for boring and annoying.
Quality of renders is satisfying. Good thing is unique character (at least I didn't saw that model used as MC anywhere else). Which is only positive aspect of this game.
My rating is one star, but yet, I'm under impression that one star is way more than this game actually deserves.

Awesome game! The perfect balance between "hit a button to read another text window" and "grind your ass to death" types of games. Zero grind with some of real "gameplay" (not just hitting one "next" button). Perfect character, amazing CG (and LOTS of them). Plus intriguing story. Not like 99% other "motherfucker stories" or "5 min in the game and I'm so shy that I'll suck all the dicks that I meet". Also has some variety. Yeah, not that much as some would prefer, especially in Episode 1, but a lot of games are much more linear than this one. So, Keep the good work, dude! Hope you'll get the fame you deserve soon. 9.5/10.

Story: You play as a wife of some rich dude and now she's rich. The story provides a decent environment for the female protagonists corruption. You can make her bitchy or nice, both of which are not erotic. Bitchy is annoying, nice is boring.

Character beauty: The main characters face is problematic, unattractive and lacks make up. You'd think a rich woman would wear more makeup. In DAZ Studio there are simple one click makeup overlays. Makeup makes a huge difference. Her face proportion features aren't appealing.

I found one attractive female NPC in the game: img_1268.png. The rest of the woman were ugly and plain looking with pudgy faces, nose too big, too much cheekbone and chin. Body proportions on most women are not good. I could give examples of better body proportions, but review guidelines prohibit me from mentioning other games content.

The maid is ugly and her hair is nappy. She has no makeup.

Render quality: Render quality ranges from poor to decent. I'm used to top notch IRAY renders of high quality.

Porn images vs Non-porn image ratio: Most of the renders are not pornographic. Too much time was spent on making non-pornographic renders. If you look through the image folder of the game, most of the renders are not pornographic. Sometimes games focus too much on build up and not enough time on delivering a solid climactic, erotic impact.

Mechanics: The game is tedious. Everything is an extra click or takes 2-3 clicks to achieve something that should've taken one click. The game wanted me to find a piece of laundry and then iron it. The game literally made a tutorial just to show you how to iron and laundry in a porn game. That makes no sense. If you look at the help folder the game offers a tutorial for basic mechanics that should never have required a tutorial in the first place.

Bugs: No bugs, the game seems properly tested which I gave an extra star.

An excellent game who put in your hands the destiny of Veronica, a young and beatiful model.

The graphics are very beautiful and clear, this game is perfectly written and look like more erotic novel than a hard game and it's very good in my opinion.

There is two ways who really interesting to explore and the game have regular update and the APK version is prefect, one of my favorite game

The female protagonist has a perfect looking face and body, and there's a focus to make her feel "alive" (great number of facial expression, poses, clothes etc.). Story is very compelling and manages to make us feel empathy even when you decided to make her a bitch through the dialogue choices. There are some flaws in ergonomy, and the game could be more fun to play, but it managed to transcend all my experiences with past games.

I love it! Nothing like trashing that High society evil queen, it's great that every decision that you made while she was powerful comes back to haunt her later! Full perversion mode!!! Keep u the good work, this game gets my seal of perversion approval!

Its one of the best games currently out consistent with each update a good amount of gameplay is added , there is 2 main paths both very well structured, the renders are very good aswell and the story is more than just "oh a dick let me suck it"
Overall : 10/10 one of IF not THE best game out atm

Game version: [Ep. 2 v0.2]

What a hidden gem. One of the few games that actually feel like a real game without descending into becoming a dumb grind. Though the systems are pretty underused so far, I think there were literally two points in the game where you need to use an item, but it's still early.

The renders are high quality, the characters look unique and interesting. I'm a big fan of this style of game where you see the main character in the scene while walking around and wish more games tried this, it feels a lot more immersive than just jumping from empty room to empty room.

The grammar is kind of bad in some places, but funnily enough it actually works out great when it's in Monica's voice because it makes her more endearing and kind of works with her character because she's supposed to be from another country. I really enjoyed her little comments when you click on background items, especially her irrational fear of candelabras. Not a big fan of the tons of background items that don't really have any interesting reactions and just seem to exist to pad out the playing time though.

I liked that you could kind of steer Monica's character a bit and I actually came to like her while playing in a non-bitchy way. Or as the game says "as much as that's possible for Monica."

The plot isn't very believable, but it serves its function and fairly quickly leads to some interesting situations. The game is still fairly light on sex scenes, with most of them being literal filler that doesn't involve Monica at all, but they are all well done and make me look forward to the next release.

Looking forward to more content, with some more work this could easily be a 5/5 game for me.

Excellent game so far (0.5). A massive quality work. Many CGIs for each moment, interesting plot that evolves differently according to choices, a few grammar mistakes, very good sex scenes. Only annoiance: there could be more saving points, saving is impossible at choice dialogue.

so awesome game i cant wait the next update of her story . maybe need more coruption and blackmail scene in bad ending . need walkthrough and CG too . but i just wanna say i love this game . keep it up bro

Graphics are pretty good with a lot of animations, there are a lot of choices you can make throughout the game that might have consequences though I just couldn't get invested in the game simply because of engrish. Some grammar mistakes, typos here and there. Once it get fixed, I might revisit it.

The lead character is so damn HOT. Those legs!! Dayumm!! Unfortunately this babe's an annoying bitch at times but that's what I like about her. Slow corruption, you also feel sad for her at times. Renders are top notch. The atmosphere is great. You should definitely try this renpy game. I like the fact that she runs a fashion company. Will she stay at the top or not? That's upto you to find out.

The only thing this game can offer is the animation and renders which are pretty good quality, but nothing to write home about. It also dabs into some less prevalent fetishes with rape and supposedly bestiality (which as of now is not in the game). Other than that the game has abysmal writing and paired with broken english it really is a nightmare to get through. MC might be the worst written character in the genre ever, and the others might as well not be there at all. Furthermore, the intro teases you into believing the game plays out differently based on your actions which is not the case at all. No matter your choices story follows the exact same path aside from premature endings that you can reach if you're good/bad enough. The game is a rotten apple in a nice wrapping. Unless you're into the fetishes included in the game and some heavy degradation, I would steer clear of it.

Amazing game, love the various degrading things Monica has to do to survive in the new world (the world she forgot existed).
Happy about the RenPy transformation as well, much more enjoyable.
Can't wait for more content!

This game stands out from most other games. The artwork is top notch. It is well written. I like how the game has a built-in system that allows you to play on the nice/bitch scale. This allows you to do downright nasty things, or be compassionate and kind. The creator also seems to regularly update the game about once every month or so too which means you are not waiting forever for new content. It is better than the old version of this game as it branches out, and uses a better engine. With this version completed (0.5) from here on out we can look forward to 100% fresh content as we have finally have caught up to the RPGM version.

EDIT : Revising rating from 5 stars to 3 due to episode 2 grind fest. I have now lost interest in this game completely, and it seems that the developer has as well.

Old review:
Another amazing version, decentmonkey! The ideas you have are so good and the game is soo funny at times. And the ending, what a masterpiece. You have some amazing skills in story as well as graphics!

Well, where to start?
The idea of the game is really great, it's not the usual "woman has bad luck and is stupid and is transfered to a mindless slut" thing, the MC really has character.
The renderings are just awesome, so is the humor of the dev. Often it's really funny to read the dialogues. He doesn't just write text, you can feel his ideas and the depth of the characters.
Another point is, the dev really is open to positive criticism and feedback and tries to react to that.
Imho, one of the very best games out there. If there was a sixth star, this game would have earned it!

Original game and concept, with a female MC who is acting like a bitch with money and power, which is quite unusual to other games with Female MC, and then, the fall, it's clearly different to common games with Female MC where the girl soon become a sextoy without trying to defend herself. Here it's not the case, Monica has a strong personnality and it's really amazing to see that despite her losing everything, she still doesn't hesitate to flame the males that try to take advantage of her. The renders on models are really good, no exagerated boobs/ass, they're all sexy and natural. Some dialogs are just hilarious, some sex scenes are hot, animations are fluid (and multiple point of view which make them even more interesting), musics are appropriated to each situations, well, a must play !