VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Fate King [Final] [Hashibiroko]

Version: final

First things first, the author should have specified that this is a prologue, because i got very confused by an abrupt end and the credit roll.

Besides that, the story seems to have some depth and mystery which i look forward to seeing more of. Art is pretty alright, nothing too special in that category. The sexual scenes are pretty few and far in between, but they are quite quality, with real smooth animations.

Overall a good prologue, looking forward for more.

V 0.3
Very interesting start to this game. The premise I personally am a huge fan of. However currently the scenes are very very short, hopefully future ones that are followed by choices are longer. Currently you can finish this whole thing in about 30minutes. The grammar has a handful of typos, but nothing is bad enough to be off putting.

Overall this game has a solid start I just hope to see more from it in the future.

I recommend this game, the graphics are good, and the characters are nice. It lacks a bit of interaction but I trust the dev to work on that in the coming updates.
I'd suggest you make paths and avoid linear progression. It's fun since you get to play the game more than once in order to explore what's gove missing..

Review of V 0.2

The game so far it's pretty good and promising, it's has a very interesting choice of femdom content where it is not your typical "porn based" femdom and explores other content other than "kiss my feet" verbal humiliation, blue balling and spanking. BUT just in case you are interested in that kind of content seems like you will have you fair amount of it with Charlotte for the fans of good ol' fashioned femdom. The game also features (or seems it will) the very possibility of revenge which is an option that I love, reverse power gives you the option of enjoy both sub and dom content.


The negative part is that english while understable should improve as it has lots of typos. Other than that the game looks promising and seems like it will feature a lot of kinks instead of rooting for the ones I mentioned before.

It has good potential, but I truly hope the author's comments aren't completely true and all the worst scenes happen to your trapped out sidekick.

The models are attractive and the promise of scenes of extreme femdom lured me in. Hopefully there will be multiple scenes of such from all the antagonists, and not just one or two from the ones into such.

Early days, about 10 mins playthrough with no choices so far though. Interesting premise for the story.

English is not perfect but perfectly comprehensible. (Perhaps the ?. reoccurrence can be changed en masse to just ?)

Look forward to seeing where we go All the best.