VN - Ren'Py - Fate Won't Separate Us [v0.4 Patreon] [Raising Phallus]

One of my favorites, and definitely a contender for the top spot... if he continues to develop the story. Freya is a bit boyish for my tastes, but I give that a pass because of the story telling. The dialog definitely needs work; it's very awkward at times... almost as if English isn't the author's first language. The author could benefit from having an editor clean things up a bit. I've actually learned Ren'py a little, just so I can modify some of the worst parts of the dialog. Other than that, 5 STARS!, and I eagerly await the next update!

This is a real NTS game. You get what you expect. Story, character, choices everything is amazing. Maybe dev could tone down the supernatural aspect a bit, but overall i really like it.

Art style is amazing, dev really goes all out and doesn’t shy away from fetishes.

High quality animation and audio. Large amount of background transitions to text ratio, keeps the game more engaging. I'm surprised about the large amount of renders this game has for being so short in length. As a finished game this will be high quality.

Really solid NTR type game, it hits all the notes a good example of the genre should hit. The MC is pretty lame which is perfect for ntr-centric games to launch the story from, also having such a hectic pace thanks to his paranoia gives the game a great atmosphere. Up to this point, Freya's storyline is just picking up steam but it has been great so far, but the real star of the game has been Danielle's short scenes, it definitely is a good way of introducing more sex scenes into the fold while keeping it kinky and engaging. I'm definitely seated for more updates.

Pro: Great models and posing; keeps the story going without starving you for sexual content; nails its fetishes soundly (perfect for a fan of NTR, interracial, themed dirty talk and similar stuff).

Cons: The story has a really unique pacing (not for everyone); like I said before, the game is all about its themes and fetishes so if you're looking for anything more nuanced or less hyperfocused, this ain't it.

8/10.
v0.4
A humorous NTR with very high highs, but somewhat mediocre lows.
I really wanted to give this game a max score - the 'Good' stuff in this truly deserves it. But the 'Bad' stuff was just too big for me to ignore.

Good:
- Tone - 10/10.
NTR <=> Comedy.
The very best thing about this game.
An NTR can be a pretty dark genre - and here author for sure explores some extreme emotions and past traumas - but because the comedy is at the very center of this story, it never feels truly gross, depressing or disgusting.

- Relationships (of the main couple) - 10/10.
The couple loves each other. It's not some empty relationship just for the sake of checking out an NTR box. Their funny/caring little moments are incredibly cute, and not just some padding between sex that you want to skip. You feel for these two freaks of nature.

- Sex scenes (of the main heroine) - 10/10.
From teasing, innuendos, and character turmoil to the flow and tempo switches - almost everything with Freya is pure electrifying enjoyment.

Bad:
- Sex scenes.
-_-
Half of ALL the sex scenes - with Mom - are complete side stories that have nothing to do with the main plot. These are just fanfics.
And another half - with the sister - has absolutely 0 emotional investment from her. There are just some gifs of her fucking appearing out of nowhere and no one on the screen cares about what's going on - until... she just becomes a malicious bitch? There's some glimmer of possible tension for her after the hospital - but it's quickly squashed and she goes back to be her unpleasant self.
Not very sexy of her.
And that is 'a bit' of a problem when almost ALL of the sex scenes in the game are either her, or her mom's meaningless cameos.

- 'Bad choices'.
"You want to behave like a decent human being? No content for you~"
"Oh, want more content? Act like a piece of shit."
Classic.
Dude, you have antagonists for a reason. Several of them! Use them if you need something bad to happen to create the drama.
Why the fuck are you forcing Ugly to destroy his own relationship, while antagonists just sit on their balls doing nothing - and picking up what's falling on them from the sky?
These relationships Are Important. See what I listed in the good stuff? There won't be any NTR without them.
It would be just like with the sister - mindless fucking. And I can go on pornhub for that. No need to sit for hours in the game.

Overall:
Hot, cute, and funny.
Highly recommend it even with the 'bad' stuff listed.
Most importantly: the author showed that he CAN write hot scenes and character tension - he just doesn't do it for the sister. For some reason.
And he CAN write the adorable relationships for the couple - he just uses MC instead of the antagonists to create the drama. For some reason.
He can do everything.
So I'm looking forward to the future of his stories.

very good gameeeeeee
specially the mom content. liked her intro but could hope for more involvement
also the sis. her cucking path is very fast paced and good
to lower degree the gf. hoping will get more involved with the sis to teamup
also hoping faster pace specially the mom cucking

I get there are not a lot of games where the big cocked black guy takes the main love interest. Couple that with the low quality of those games and that fetish is not well represented. This game may add another to that list (if you take that path), but it is not an arousing AVN.

The only animation I saw was the LI doing an eye twitch. I guess I didn't make the right choices to see anything else. All sex renders were very dark and no animations. The LI is attractive, but I could not have been more disinterest when the anal sex was happening.

If there is no interesting porn, the story and writing are way below a lot of other AVNs on this site.

This was not worth a 5GB download by any means. I'll put this in the forever ignore category.

It's not the best game in terms of visual and animation but the story is so fucked up but in a good way. You must be okay with cheating or/of cuckold things to like this game. If this is the case, than i think that you will love the original fucked-up story.

It's a game in the NTR category with like 4 updates now and zero NTR at all. Just teasing NTR, while having a sex scene with the sister and mom every 5 seconds . Not what I signed up for and it just feels like "padding stats"

Models are good, story is kind of amusing, but every time it even seems like "Oh finally, the game is getting to the point" nope, Freya wanders off to start another sex scene with the sister. How is it Freya is portrayed like she is mentally cheating already but has done literally nothing, in a porn game, while you have the sister who acts like her vagina is a BBC magnet because she walked into the sunlight?



To be blunt by this point I'm not sure it's gonna matter because there's barely a relationship between the two main characters as it is. They don't feel like a couple, it feels like she's his horny cousin or something and I'm convinced there will be some twist where Freya was all in his head, or some girl he had a crush on and there never was a relationship.

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People giving this 5 stars are genuinely trolling or friends of the dev, because even being incredibly generous it isn't more than a 3, and I only gave it a 2 because of Freya, otherwise it's like a 1.5

Its incredibly mid and its just the same bbc slop churned out in a slightly different way. I'm not even sure why the mom and sister are there... they are turbosluts from the start and there's zero corruption with them, in fact the game itself doesn't really do any corruption. Every character starts at a 100 with next to no actual corruption needed for them to start being whores. Also it hardly feels like ntr, firstly the mc is so laughably pathetic that you wouldn't feel remotely bad for him getting ntrd.
The biggest problem with the game is the non existent relationship between the mc and freya. They don't feel like they would ever be a real couple. I wouldn't be surprised if in the end freya was only the mcs friend and he was having a mental breakdown and imagined being in a relationship with here. That would feel more real and believable than there actual relationship. 1 extra star for freya, its a pretty good and unique model.

This one is a lot of fun. Recommend for anyone who is interested in Interracial, NTR and Cuckold type games/stories.

Crazy, but fun premise and dark humour. The female lead character(Freya) is really hot. Great creativity from the Dev with some nicely cut alternative images showing glimpses of what might befall Freya in the not too distant future, and a few opportunities to see scenes from the other persons POV if you choose. Great stuff all around.

FMC is hot
The game has a nice vibe, and the story is okay—not bad--it’s fun.
BUT the game has some major issues—big ones.
There’s no love between the MC and FMC. You don’t see it in the writing, and you definitely don’t feel it in the actions. Without that emotional connection, the NTR loses its meaning. So yeah, it’s disappointing in that sense.
FMC’s personality? Pretty bad. She starts cheating after like two or four days without sex! So, if you’re looking for an FMC with a solid, strong personality, you won’t find her here.
There’s no real corruption or tension buildup either. From day one, the FMC is already a slut. She’s way too quick to accept cheating—mentally, at least. Even if the game drags out the act of cheating artificially, it’s obvious in her mind she’s completely corrupt from the start.
As for the mom and sister? They’re just straight-up porn stereotypes. Feels like you’re on some adult site searching for "BBC." Their characters are just full-on sluts, and honestly, there’s no enjoyment in that.
What I wrote makes total sense. I just don’t get those 5-star reviews—like, seriously, just because the FMC is hot, they’re throwing out 5 stars? Come on, we need to raise our standards. A 5-star rating should be for a flawless game, at least according to F95 rules.

Still looking for a good interracial game. You'll like this game if you like games about black alpha males paired with slutty white women vs. "weak white bois".
I didn't find any stated "corruption" content in this game, MC's girlfriend is already pretty slutty, you can talk about seducing her, but a black guy doesn't have to try very hard to get everything he wants, and MC's mother and sister are just turbosluts.
The choices in the game are not very clear, if you choose the wrong answer, further choices can be blocked. On my first playthrough I had to go back and make a different choice to see more content. It's okay, but I would have liked more understanding of what the answer choices affect.
The game has animations, they're not bad if not too long, long animations are the usual clunky Daz3d animations.
I must admit that this is not a bad game if you are into cuckold fetish and humiliation of white boys (but nothing outstanding in terms of visuals or story), otherwise you will not get pleasure but only a bad mood.

This is the gold standard of NTR games.

It has an engaging story, and how the cuckolding/cheating develops is very clever.

What makes this masterpiece truly amazing is how the game plays into his insecurities and anxiety over Freya being defiled.

Freya is well-written and likable.


10/10

A solid NTR-goofy focused game, unlike most games that have no emotions, this plays solid with MC's insecurities, and I like how it flashes as a thought in MC's head. Loved this concept!
Art is really well done!
Story doesn't seem to have a foundation yet so I wouldn't rate it so early....
Characters are well done except for the black guys! Even the side characters are good, except for the side black guys who sound really cliche and dumb to be honest.
Dialogues are good, cliche in some areas, for example you'll fall in love with my BBC...bleh...actions should speak louder than words here.
Overall, I'm really happy with the uniqueness of the progression and thought process of the creator!
Hope to see this game thrive for long!

Now, I do like a well written NTR and I think this has potential. The FEM MC is super hot, and some parts are super goofy.
But for now, the story is too short to really judge it well and how each choice well affect the story can't be seen yet.
It'll be on my radar, score might go up or down in the future.
I would rate it a 3.5, but for it's potential I'll give it a 4.

Fun and interesting premise with a crazy old man more or less trying to trick you into become a cuckold by having you do some silly tasks!
The characters all look nice and original from what I've seen. The female heroine is top tier in looks, and a redhead which is always a 10/10.
Story so far is amusing with pretty good renders. It's a slow build to the real thing, but the hallucination scenes make the wait pretty juicy!
The distortion/hallucination effects combined with text that mock the MC is a great idea that is super erotic.
I can't wait for future updates!

This game is absolute perfection. Freya is by far the greatest, hottest woman out there. The combo of great humour, the potential for some amazing NTR and the fact that Freya is so incredible, makes this easily a top 5 game for me…and it’s only at 0.2!!! Really looking forward to more more more

Looks like a great start. Good renders, sense of humour, hot love interest. Certainly focuses on NTR, but seems like it's more of a loss condition overall.

I'll be watching this one in future. Hoping the updates are kept regular.

Very good first release, I liked the idea of being an NTR with a humorous tone, it seems like it came at the right time, as the genre is a bit saturated with depressing stories. The girlfriend is very hot, I hope she is totally cheating.