3D-Daz Feedback on character for new game

[JuanDomingo]

Hi people, i'm working on a new game and i am trying to design the characters, so... if you can give me any feedback, thoughts, critiques, technical/artistic tips, anything will be greatly appreciated.

My goals are:

• Characters should be realistic, not cartoony.
• Characters should look original, you shouldn't be able to say "Oh, he made it with this or that DAZ character"
• Characters should be hot, but next-door looking, not supermodels, not unrealistic proportions, the more natural the better.

So with that in mind, I'm working on MC's "landlady" (bullshit, it's the mother, we all know that), and I used as inspiration

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, a not very famous porn actress.

She needs to be a real milf, not a 20 y.o. looking standard DAZ character, imperfect but sexy, in her early 40s, next-door looking. So well, this is what I have until now:






I'm eager to read your comments, THANK YOU!

 

[BigIrishLug]

Her body is absolutely thick in all the right places, with noticeable curves and ageing to look like a proper MILF. But personally I would reduce the fake boob option and go with the more natural for when she's naked her nips aren't pointing to the sky like over inflated balloons and they get smashed slashed smushed into her chest with some of the gravity morphs. Makes for great renders for shower scenes and also having them smashed into other objects are absolutely fascinating (eg; MC, Furniture, walls... etc). Also the eyes aren't captivating, dull and flat. I'd go with a soft brown, with the yellow tints to bring out the colour of her hair and that would also make her eyes smoldering with the fringe of the hair prop.

 

[Deleted member 609064]

Looks good.

Her skin is a little too nice in my opinion. You could mottle her

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and forearms a bit with freckles and birthmarks. Don't go overboard. Make the skin look real for a middle-aged woman with a few miles on her.

Definitely paint those fingernails in a solid color. Dark red (burgundy).

You could also put some form of necklace on her. Not a collar but actually jewelry. Something that can swing and slap against her breasts while being taken doggy.

Under the clothes, don't overlook tanlines. A woman that age will probably tan in a salon or in her backyard, and may have tan lines, which are one of my fetishes. Brown torso with pasty white ends of her breasts ending in a nice nipple (nipples on MILFs are important!)

 

[JuanDomingo]

...But personally I would reduce the fake boob option and go with the more natural for when she's naked her nips aren't pointing to the sky...

I took your advice and removed a little "silicon bag" effect from the breast contour (check the new renders I added).

In relation to the eyes, i don't like them either, i don't wanna give up on blue, but yeah, the product I'm using is not very good, i need to research other options.

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[JuanDomingo]

Her skin is a little too nice in my opinion. You could mottle her

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and forearms a bit with freckles and birthmarks. Don't go overboard. Make the skin look real for a middle-aged woman with a few miles on her.
...
Under the clothes, don't overlook tanlines.

Check the new renders I added, the detail and tan lines were there, she was just too dressed. Tell me what you think, please.

Also, this is not final renders by any means, that's why there's no jewelry or make up, I'm trying to settle for a shape and overall look at this stage.

Thanks for your comment!

 

[Tataro]

The hair really brings her down. You should change it if possible. Maybe a redish "afro" look?

 

[Deleted member 609064]

The hair really brings her down. You should change it if possible. Maybe a redish "afro" look?

Lots of different tastes out there, but Rachel Dolezal isn't MILFy to me.

The straight, plain blond hair is very stereo-typically middle-aged. She's not supposed to look like a young hottie. That is not who she is. She's been married for 20 years and has kids in college or ready to have her first grand-children.

 

[JuanDomingo]

The hair really brings her down. You should change it if possible. Maybe a redish "afro" look?

Thanks for your comment, but i don't think that's the kind of look I want for her, I don't say the current hair asset is perfect or final, just that i see her as a straight blonde haired woman.

 

[Tataro]

Lots of different tastes out there, but Rachel Dolezal isn't MILFy to me.

The straight, plain blond hair is very stereo-typically middle-aged. She's not supposed to look like a young hottie. That is not who she is. She's been married for 20 years and has kids in college or ready to have her first grand-children.

There's a fair bit to go from my suggestion to Rachel Dolezal. The hair looks dead. And cheap. Brings her down. Doesn't have to be my suggestion but perhaps lengthen it.

Thanks for your comment, but i don't think that's the kind of look I want for her, I don't say the current hair asset is perfect or final, just that i see her as a straight blonde haired woman.

No probs

 

[Squaller]

Looks good however the hair does match like fist to the nose in my opinion (some might disagree).

 

[Deleted member 609064]

There's a fair bit to go from my suggestion to Rachel Dolezal. The hair looks dead. And cheap. Brings her down. Doesn't have to be my suggestion but perhaps lengthen it.

The image of the woman you posted is a hottie. MILFs can be hot but they aren't sex bombs. They are the lady driving kids to the soccer field in a minivan wearing sweatpants and a sweatshirt with their hair under a ballcap.

Cheap makes sense because she's not at an age or life position where she is spending a lot of money or effort on her looks, not more than the bare minimum. Of course, if she's married to wealth then maybe she gets done up by professionals, but if she is an ordinary suburban middle-aged woman, she doesn't look super hot. Part of the sex appeal with that kind of MILF is that she is the lady next door who still looks pretty good but her self-esteem isn't super high because Hubby works too much or tells her that she is old and ugly now.

 

[BigIrishLug]

Beautiful. Perfect MILF material. Breasts, with the hint of tan lines. If the eye's are a problem for you I'd suggest
ReEyes - Eye color and material Presets for G3F/G8F
or I've used this on the past for faster renders
Macro Eyes for Iray Bundle (G3) & GP Character Eyes for Genesis 8
Just some options to play around with. Cheers and Best of Luck.

 

[TheAnalSissy]

Not a fan of that nose on first post.

 

[JuanDomingo]

Not a fan of that nose on first post.

I soften the ridge a little 'cos it was too flat, but i'm not changing the shape too much. I think it gives her personality, and separates her from every other Daz unrealistic perfect doll models. People have those noses, even hot woman, check the model that was my

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, has the same nose, and wouldn't you fuck her brains out?

 

[Deleted member 609064]

I soften the ridge a little 'cos it was too flat, but i'm not changing the shape too much. I think it gives her personality, and separates her from every other Daz unrealistic perfect doll models. People have those noses, even hot woman, check the model that was my

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, has the same nose, and wouldn't you fuck her brains out?

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The skin on your muse is perfect. Exactly what I was talking about earlier.

And I really appreciate your commitment to making the model look like a real woman, and not a magazine centerfold.