Feedback on one of my girls

Should I remake her?

  • Yes

    Votes: 9 52.9%
  • No

    Votes: 8 47.1%

  • Total voters
    17

ApexDollar

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Jun 6, 2018
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So i've been working on my game for a little while now and after play testing it and looking back through renders, the first girl I worked on seems a little underwhelming. I'm not sure if i'm just being picky and over critical so I would really love some feedback from you all.
 

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Jul 19, 2017
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Hair looks kind of janky and could be posed a lot better...but not horrible for first character.

..If you've seen some of the stuff I've had to see from full blown games put out for public consumption. :WutFace:
 
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Character and personality is important, and I can't read much out of that picture, were you going for the "gothy crackwhore"? It looks like a 40 year old "former" prostitute trying to pull of a youthful look in a wig.
 

ApexDollar

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Jun 6, 2018
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Yeah, the hair is one of my biggest gripes with her, it looks fine in some scenes but in close ups it gets a little rough.
 

Quonix

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Nov 21, 2017
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To me it looks good, maybe try a different eye color, I feel like blue doesn't fit her but that might be just my personal preference speaking. I recommend trying with green.
 

thecardinal

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Jul 28, 2017
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The render quality itself is fine (some people mentioned the hair, but that's an easy fix).

I'm gonna say this as nicely as I can, but can you really call it one of 'my girls' when it's just this model with the skin, tattoos, and eye settings she came with:

I would suggest using the 'Shaping' tab on Daz and mix it with at least one other Daz model. You might come up with something really great and original!
 

ApexDollar

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Jun 6, 2018
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The render quality itself is fine (some people mentioned the hair, but that's an easy fix).

I'm gonna say this as nicely as I can, but can you really call it one of 'my girls' when it's just this model with the skin, tattoos, and eye settings she came with:

I would suggest using the 'Shaping' tab on Daz and mix it with at least one other Daz model. You might come up with something really great and original!
A very fair point and something I've been much more attentive with in my other characters.