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What you needed was a story that could grab you, you know like Urban Demons or anything involving ScarlettAnn the Milf that draws Milfs.
What you made was a story about a man recollecting his past as a teenage boy with his mother and sister on a resort.
It was more or less all over the place, which made it less enticing to stay focus to any single thing.
As Dr. Bones would say in a Sonic manner, "That's no good."
You need a protagonist that can grab the audience regardless of age. You need smoking hot ladies and you need antics to happen based on personal choices, but also a main story that gets done what you want.
I argue that you create an non-image based interactive story. This will create the wide range of scenarios (given you allow other people involved) with less from yourself. While that is going on you can work on character designs that best suit your interests.