edit update 10/6/2022: This game had potential, but it's execution is horrible. This is one of the worst femdom games I've ever played.
edit: The render quality has gone up. I can tell the dev puts more effort into making better renders. I'm bumping from 2 to 3 stars. The reason it doesn't get more stars is because the game is still in early introductory state, not enough content. The scenes with Louise don't match the fetishes on porn sites. If he wants to do content with Louise correctly, he should watch femdom porn of that nature, then make a list; consensus, of what actually happens in that video, then make content based on that analysis.
This is a kinetic novel, although you can accumulate money in game, which means it will eventually have choices I suspect. The game has very light femdom scenes of which all are poor quality imo.
Story 2/5 - Girl hires you and gives you a new place where you live with women who femdom you.
Renders 2/5 - There are problems with almost every render. The hair will be out of whack. The deformations will look problematic. Body proportions often don't look right. There isn't one render where you just says WOW. It's basically fast rendering without putting the time and effort in to ensure an erotic impact. Just fast pose, render, throw it in.
Gameplay 0/5 - It's currently just a kinetic novel.
Erotic Impact 1/5 - I like femdom games, but for some reason I didn't feel the erotic impact with this one. The women are not that attractive and fall into the uncanny valley area a lot of the times. The lack of choice hurts any chance of a good erotic impact since the story is so lacking. I think forcing fetishes you don't want huts the erotic impact, because in one scene you might be slightly turned on, but then forcing a fetish you don't like immediately turns you off.
Animations 5/5 - The animations are well done.
Music 5/5 - Music is good and fits.
Suggestions
- Let the player choose who they want to serve. Don't force any sexual action without the players consent, unless consent was already given previously.
- Instead of having so many girls, he should focus on 2 or 3. Improve their face and body morphs, make them more attractive. It's better to have 2-3 high quality girls, rather than 7-8 subpar looking girls.
- There is a scene where girls take pictures of you in the gym while the amazon bodybuilder spanks you.The blonde in the back is far more attractive. It would've been nice to have her as the personal trainer instead. The bodybuilder chick is not attractive at all. I like muscular women, but I don't feel it with her at all.
This looks like a very rough draft prototype game. He should definitely keep making it though and never stop improving. I've seen games start out like this, but after a few years really improve.