Mister_M
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- Apr 2, 2018
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What I personally find missing in Deb's route - and it's not a critique of your writing or her character - is some humiliation aspect. She is more controlling, does some teasing and I liked her ignore moment (wish that would be expanded), but in general I find her too nice/playful/respectful during the femdom scenes (minus the spanking scene, but that was a result of her frustrations more than a result of her kinky side). That doesn't mean I want her to be 24/7 abusive domme of course, plus obviously there are different types of people, enjoying different types of content so I'm not trying to imply that you should change her character. In any case, nowadays it seems I'm getting what I want more from Emma than from Deb. And from Kim too to some extent, but I guess she will never be a viable option for me cause of the cuckolding angle. Have to say though that the shoes scene from ch. 5 was very well written (even though I thought MC gets into "I'm so subby, destroy me please" mode a little bit too fast); I was even slightly surprised at myself at the end that when Pete came back I wasn't - as I was up until that moment - thinking "Kim shouldn't cheat on Pete like that", but more in lines of: "Pete you bastard, can't you go away and leave us alone?"Deb's femdom path is getting quite focused on chastity
And I'm continuing now saves with MC locked in chasitity cage and free from it. I really hope there'll be more fun differences during sex scenes (with various LIs) depending if he's wearing it or not.
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