Femdom lovers - Quick Beta Reading

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Oct 8, 2017
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For my next project I wrote an optional pegging scene, it is on the gentler side of the femdom spectrum. It is not really my fetish and I would like the opinion of someone who actually knows about this sort of things or at least is more into it. Any kind soul would like to give it a read? It's about 1000 words long, less than a five minutes read. Can you help?