As for the interaction with Tyrone i think I'll keep it as is. There's no actual NTR, just some school bullying to show how beta the MC is.
Honestly it doesn't really show how "beta" the MC is, just how much of a prick Tyrone is.
I have zero interest in Tyrone and honestly think he's overly stereotypical, but if you want to emphasize how much of a beta the MC is, I'd have Tyrone give the MC chances to stand up for himself, to just say "no," to deny certain things, and then not do it.
Cuz as it stands now he's so over the top aggressive in the first meeting that it doesn't feel like the MC is particularly pathetic, just that Tyrone is such an over the top stereotype that there's literally nothing our MC can do. This is in contrast to the Alice situation where he's actually given every chance to say "no" to her but lets her roll all over him.
But I guess that's the fine line with this type of content: It can be hard to distinguish between "This character is a pointless bully" and "this character is a spineless weakling" without going too far in either direction.
Honestly I'm super "meh" on NTR but Tyrone was *such* an over the top prick I worked to disable the stuff just because I didn't want it to be *him* in particular, which Alice hints at. If it were something like...Juan Gomez the sexy and belittling Hispanic pool boy with the great abs that every girl wants to ride like a pony and is so charming even the guys swoon over him, I probably wouldn't have bothered disabling the content.
I know it's a personal thing but IMO NTR sells itself a bit better if the "other man" is someone likeable.
Hey, does it give you any error when you try to save? What exactly does it show
I was never able to save either in the house, school, street, etc. I actually thought the game's auto saves were the only thing working to prevent farming good results from the QTEs.
