Ren'Py - Fire of Life: New Day [v0.33.2s] [Dana Haywood]

Rating based entirely on renders and looks. Story is non-existent to the point I had no idea what was going on, why it was going on, or why I should care by the time the game told me I had played everything. It's like biting into a chocolate rabbit at Easter to find out it's just one of those hollow ones rather then solid.

Reviewed version: 0.33.2s
If you're in it just for the sex scenes, I suppose this would be 3 stars, but...
Renders are OK quality, maybe a little below average? Often too dark to see details.
Plot is hard to follow. There doesn't seem to be much continuity between scenes, nor much exposition.
There seems to be a lot of torture theme here ... not what I was expecting.

typos and grammar issues, spaztic plot, jumping all over the place making it difficult to follow and buggy as hell
solid visuals and theres some good material to work with. Given some more time and care it could develop into something worthwhile