The game is really rough. The writing is very obviously badly translated, but worse, the writing is just bad as well. At one point the character is shocked that they need $10k per year for rent and exclaims they've never seen that amount in their life...an amount that translates to like $800 per month, which is exceedingly reasonable. At another point the character explains they don't know what coffee tastes like, then recommends a caramel macchiato almost 3 lines later. At another point a woman is exclaiming how they are very attracted and want to sleep with the character, but then explain they're just looking to find friends. It's all over the place, and while some of it is down to a bad translation, the rest is inexcusably poor.
Willing to give this 2* though, because there might be some potential here, but it needs massive amounts of work.