3D-Daz First concept for adult game (need your feedback!)

[Deleted member 1394645]

Hello everyone!

I need your feedback regarding an idea. Please tell me if you would be interested in this story concept. And please give me advices you think are important for me at the beginning of my "project". Thank you!

I´m a beginnner with just two months experience in Daz3D. I figured out the basics of 3D modeling - shaping, morphing, posing and how to customize library content. I will improve these skills and go further with rendering, lightning and texture.

My goal is to make characters as realistic as possible, but still considering normal render-times.
My dream is to make an adult game with an exciting and unique story, focused on hardcore sex. 15% introduction, 70% sexual interactions, 15% exciting ending. The focus should be on passion in the sex interactions. The characters should exceed their limits of ethical and moral standards, just let theirselves go.

I´m working on a concept. The story is almost written. The characters almost finished. The environment is in preparation. My current Apple hardware is 9 years old, but I already ordered a virtual machine with a reasonable configuration to work and render fast.

Thsi is the concept:

A virus epidemic kills 90% of worldwide population. Anarchy and lawlessness rule the world. The social system collapse. Four wealthy protagonists try to escape to an old private bunker, which was bought 20 years ago for a nuklear disaster and is filled with enough resources for a decade. Two protagonists - Alex (21) and Masha (41) - reach the place with a car. The two others - Victor (46) and Michael (20) - crash with a helicopter on the way to the bunker from another country.

Seven months later, Alex and Masha start to loose the last hope to see Victor and Michael, again. They are on their own. They have a lot questions and they wait for "normal" times. Nevertheless, they try to live an ordinary life. The isolation, loneliness, and natural desires for passion and love has a permanent influence on both protagonists. Thoughts and moral concepts changes. The things get difficult, but also interesting...

 

[jhfkashfkjsdahkfslhkjshd]

i dont know if people will like the virus epidemic setting, the animations are fine but maybe make the girls more real(for me the girl is pretty much perfect but ok). What I noticed is that the most playing games are those with sandbox style

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

i dont know if people will like the virus epidemic setting, the animations are fine but maybe make the girls more real(for me the girl is pretty much perfect but ok). What I noticed is that the most playing games are those with sandbox style

Thank you for your feedback! I will make the female protagonist more realistic, as soon as I learn more about texture and realistic skin! And of course the male protagonist, because he looks strange at this moment.

I chose the virus pandemic setting because I´m tired to play and see adult games which are equal and have the same setting... A young boy wakes up in a house... everything looks modern and perfect... and he start to interact and manipulate other characters.

That´s why I don´t want to go in this direction. I want to make the main male character more masculine, more experienced. And the environment will be a private bunker, not in a sandbox style (because I´m not a game developer), but with different paths the user can choose depending on the preference. I think Renpy will be the solution.

 

[jhfkashfkjsdahkfslhkjshd]

Thank you for your feedback! I will make the female protagonist more realistic, as soon as I learn more about texture and realistic skin! And of course the male protagonist, because he looks strange at this moment.

I chose the virus pandemic setting because I´m tired to play and see adult games which are equal and have the same setting... A young boy wakes up in a house... everything looks modern and perfect... and he start to interact and manipulate other characters.

That´s why I don´t want to go in this direction. I want to make the main male character more masculine, more experienced. And the environment will be a private bunker, not in a sandbox style (because I´m not a game developer), but with different paths the user can choose depending on the preference. I think Renpy will be the solution.

okay, thats fine i am looking forward to this game

 

[BigIrishLug]

I think the renders carry their own unique style. Good job and good luck.

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

I think the renders carry their own unique style. Good job and good luck.

Thank you! I´m still improving my skills and the characters of course. The female character is almost finished. The male character needs some changes. I think I´m on a good way.

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[ivanch88]

My goal is to make characters as realistic as possible but still considering normal render-times.

Everything looks good except man's dick (no one has such a giant dick) and his devil's black eyes (play with the sclera surface settings).

 

[Reaver]

If's she is 41 I don't see it, she looks late 20s at best. Way too young, also you might want to add a few streatch lines and or veins starting to show on her massive tits, seeing as 40's is when shit starts to show age. It's a good game concept hope you can make it work. (and maybe not make the MC's cock so large. try and make it normal.) (the porn industry brought all that crap around, most (wight) ppl have a chock anywhere from 5.6" to 6.2" not 10+" like your MC there. If you want this to be realistic.

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

If's she is 41 I don't see it, she looks late 20s at best. Way too young, also you might want to add a few streatch lines and or veins starting to show on her massive tits, seeing as 40's is when shit starts to show age. It's a good game concept hope you can make it work. (and maybe not make the MC's cock so large. try and make it normal.) (the porn industry brought all that crap around, most (wight) ppl have a chock anywhere from 5.6" to 6.2" not 10+" like your MC there. If you want this to be realistic.

Thank you for your feedback! Really appreciate it! I improved my main female character a little during the last months. And I really started my first project. The environment is already built. The story for first episode is written. The concept was changes a little but is basically as stated in the first post.

I just need to fix some render problems can start with rendering and managing RenPy simultaneously. Here are some basic renders. I´ll have to make her calves and knees a little bigger, then it will be fine. I used aging morphs. With right lightning and a some micro adjustments Masha will look like 41 years old Milf

 

[Reaver]

more realistic, but the legs by the hips are out of wack. Ya now that i look at her waist and hips + upper legs, none of it works together. she go's from thin wast to child baring hips, to thick girl legs then her legs turn into stick legs...

Pic. 1 observations:
Narrow the hips a tad, close the gap in between the legs and add more muscle / fat to the rest of the legs and she will look normal.


Pic. 2 observations:
Her tit's are way too large for her frame, reminds me of a bimbo with implants but it's like on an anorexic women. (probably have to see her without any close in a static T pose to see what i can spot that's off with her frame.)


Pic. 3 observations:
The third one is ok, the arms are a tad to thin (more muscle maybe? or just a bit bigger) can't nail down what's off with the arms fully. (the second pic the arms look ok, which is odd considering the difference on the 3'rd pic. Might have to do with the lighting, not sure.)

Ok, so after looking at all 3 pic's over some time; it feels as tho the frame you used was for someone that is too thin, for what you're trying to present. Overall her face is perfect it works for a 40 year old, same with the skin. So just a few changes and you have it nailed down.

Hope that help's, and yes I know what I said is a bunch of work to fix.

My 2 cents

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

Thank your for your detailed critics. This helps me a lot to understand everything from a different perspective. I would like to comment each point. First of all, I don´t want to make Masha "normal" like a ordniary housewife with medium fat body. Furthermore I don´t try to make everything maximum realistic, because in the end I will create a character who has realistic aspects but looks unbelievable perfect at the same - Maybe this will be my individual kind of art.

Pic. 1 observations:
Narrow the hips a tad, close the gap in between the legs and add more muscle / fat to the rest of the legs and she will look normal.

Every body has parts which are very unique. We memorize pornstars and ordinary human in our social environment by specific details (a glass, big tits, a grain in the face, etc.). What I tried is to give Masha very unique thighs. I saw thighs like hers very often in a lot countries of Eastern Europe. The gap should be the result of three children. A lot of stunning women have this gap. Just adding fat to the rest of the legs would be against the story I have written. In the story, Masha is isolated in a basement with MRE food-supplies, which are not really tasty. She loses weight, some of her parts lose more fat than others (that´s simple biology).

Pic. 2 observations:
Her tit's are way too large for her frame, reminds me of a bimbo with implants but it's like on an anorexic women. (probably have to see her without any close in a static T pose to see what i can spot that's off with her frame.)

Partly agree with you. Maybe you could check the two ultra-hd pics to get a better understanding if it´s still a "bimbo" style?
I don´t think her brests are "too" big, because of the three children and a naturally gift, which some woman simply have. Please consider that her tits hang down a little. And please ignore the rendering-bug on her right nipple.

Pic. 3 observations:
The third one is ok, the arms are a tad to thin (more muscle maybe? or just a bit bigger) can't nail down what's off with the arms fully. (the second pic the arms look ok, which is odd considering the difference on the 3'rd pic. Might have to do with the lighting, not sure.)

Here, I agree with you. I really think she need more meat in her arms. I will try to find the right balance between fat and muscles.

Ok, so after looking at all 3 pic's over some time; it feels as tho the frame you used was for someone that is too thin, for what you're trying to present. Overall her face is perfect it works for a 40 year old, same with the skin. So just a few changes and you have it nailed down.

Hope that help's, and yes I know what I said is a bunch of work to fix.

My 2 cents

Thank you for your comments, again! That´s great! I´m happy that you liked the skin and face. But don´t forget, Masha is in the story not a random/ordinary wife. She is a hot formal escort and worked hard on her body to stay in shape.

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

Bigger arms, calves and shins.

 

[Reaver]

Not sure if it's the lighting or the static pose but her legs look normal, and her arms look good now.

As for the MRE's that she has been eating, MRE's are high in carbs and vitamins, they are meant for solders and to keep them going when they don't have access to a mess hall. So yes she would put on weight if she was eating 3 MRE's a day everyday for a year +.
just some random info for you.

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For more info look at that web page.
Mind you that is for the US. " Each MRE provides an average of 1,250 calories (13 percent protein, 36 percent fat, and 51 percent carbohydrates) and one-third of the Military Recommended Daily Allowance of vitamins and minerals. A full day's worth of meals would consist of three MREs. "

Russian MRE (IRP)

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"This ration pack is HUGE and has over 5,000 calories, 5 entrees, flame less ration heaters, stove and just about everything! Entrees can be eaten hot or cold, just as a US meal ready to eat."
So when it comes to Eastern Europe they get more food then the US does.

So the only way she would loose weight is if she only had a small amount and she had to ration them out. Also how will she get water? You can go 23 day's without food but you need to have water within 3 days or you die. Around a litre of water a day, to 3.7 litres, is a must to live.

I have a lot of knowledge on this topic and others hence all the comments.

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

I have a lot of knowledge on this topic and others hence all the comments.

Thank you but I really now what MREs are. Problem seems to be, that after a lot days with „the same“ food someone could start to eat just the amount to survive. Not for enjoying the food. This will be one detail. The other will be that water supply is also there. There won’t be a nuclear disaster.

 

[fjw]

I like your art style. I must say the virus pandemic thing is an interesting choice of setting given our current predicament. Would that be a plot point in the story? Or would everyone already be immune since they survived?

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

I like your art style. I must say the virus pandemic thing is an interesting choice of setting given our current predicament. Would that be a plot point in the story? Or would everyone already be immune since they survived?

At the begining of the story, two characters (older woman, young man) will already be 7 months in a basement, waiting for other 3 characters (old man, young man, young woman) who got lost on the way from an other location. The virus itself is not the main problem in the story. The scenario won´t be something like "28 Days Later" but similar to "Contagion". Main problem will be anarchy, panic and the waiting for vaccine. That´s why they escapeted from the civil society. I hope that´s enough for the beginning. I´m preparing my patreon page and will share it in my signature as soon as it´s published

 

[harykont]

Hey great story first of all keep going. Arts look little weird like alien anatomy its your art but i think you should keep little realistic morphs good luck.

 

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[Deleted member 1394645]

Hey great story first of all keep going. Arts look little weird like alien anatomy its your art but i think you should keep little realistic morphs good luck.

The renders in the first post are from last year. They were only drafts. I deleted them Thanks!