First ever render, would love some feedback (especially critical)

Heisenberg867

Newbie
Jul 18, 2018
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Hi all, I have no particular artistic talent, and I just started playing around with DAZ - this is my first attempt. Please tell me what you think and what could be improved. I'm especially concerned about where the lighting falls on a scale of bad-acceptable-great, and how to address the white pixels on the character's heels - I can't tell whether they're "shine" or pixel noise.

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