Unity - Abandoned - Five Days [v0.63] [Archast]

I am trying a new standard of reviews, split on 4 criteria; Gameplay, CG, Immersion and Fluidity.

Gameplay; NA, right now this plays more like a VN, it's linear with some options to opt in or out of scenes, it's very straight forward.

CG; 5/5, the few that are in are great, the resolution is a bit low (and in 4:3), but they're well done, no weird faces and things like that.

Immersion; 5/5, there's a bit of 4th wall break which is nice, but overall, you know the settings, each character has a goal to achieve, and they do it in their own ways. The writing is pretty good and you can get into the mini-stories of each tenant.

Fluidity; 5/5, it's very straight forward, nothing much to add to this. You start the day, talk to the receptionist, and you have your tasks which each progress the overall story or character stories. There is absolutely no grind, so that's a plus.

You can convince not only me but many here if you go with the game the right way. For this you need 1 or 2 young sisters of her and the hotel can get bigger when going out. Pool Tennis Sauna park gym with special yoga and massage rooms etc.

I give you 5 stars despite some mistakes and the graphics could be better. But the idea and how you translate it into one is not only good but perfect. This can be a great hotel with swimming pool sauna gym tennis and BDSM room. Instead of making a city map again.

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.63...

The Unity engine is used, but it feels a lot like a RPGM game play style, but at least there isn't a whole lot of places to have to go...

The visuals of the characters, while not navigating, are pretty good... The navigation system is like a low resolution version of a RPGM game, with the added issue of accidentally running into clickable items over and over, causing a choice to pop up again and again, until you can properly navigate away from the object... I found that to be annoying...

The script is pretty good as I didn't run into very many spelling/grammar errors... The plot (what little there really is) revolves around a female protagonist who is working as a maid in a small hotel temporarily in place of her mother, for 5 days... During each game day she is tasked with cleaning certain rooms on certain floors, which all require interaction with the characters that are staying in those rooms, to include the owner on the top floor...

Of course, everyone in the hotel, to include the managers father (but not the manager so far) are perverts of one nature or another... The owner has many perverted requests of the protagonist, sort of in a corruption type fashion, starting simple and getting worse each time... The former MILF prostitute is after the owner, but there is also some sexual chemistry between her and the protagonist... The drunkard is passed out most of the time, and plays more of a temptation for the protagonist as he's always passed out naked... The blind twins try to act naïve, but it's all a rouse to con the women into getting what they want... The managers father is a night time predator, who goes after the women in the hotel as they sleep (and there is even the option of allowing him to rape the protagonist at night, which I'm usually not a fan of the character I'm supposed to be playing as being a rape target)... The private tutor is a bit of an unknown, as she doesn't appear much, but there was some teasing with her and the protagonist in the bathroom (perhaps for future content)... The manager is just a basic task giver for the moment...

Overall, this is pretty much just your typical short lived corruption motif porn fest... There really is not much in the way of any meaningful and/or deep story at all... And based off it's title, it will only last 5 game days, with 3 already done so far... The content does not last all that long, and any erotic scenes are very short... The visuals of the non-navigation look decent enough, but that is the only thing really going strong for this game... I'm not a fan of the highly low resolution RPGM feel of the navigation, but at least you don't waste a ton of time navigating all over the world at all... It takes place all in one building... It's past it's half way mark as far as development... Will I revisit this one? Maybe, but it will not be any kind of priority...

The creator of this game seems to be quite passionate about the MC (Marcy) as she must work to cover her mother at the hotel while her mother is away.

Each character that has made their home at the hotel are unique individuals with their own particular quirks and are not the usual brand of rehashed 'cliché' characters that you see in other titles... each come with their own personality and have their own particular interest in Marcy.

Artwork is done well and my only complaint would be that Unitiy is a little bit sluggish on my system... but by the end of the current release, you will find yourself wanting to find out what happens next.

Certainly worth a play-through!!