VN Ren'Py Fog of War [Ep. 5.5] [Story Machine Studios]

[Crowangel]

ok im just gonna be honest here, this wasnt your best update.. for one the Lydia inconsistency with her hair before her even getting to the salon was just plain lazy.. There was a fair amount of hope for this title but it seems to be falling in quality with each update.. MC STILL looks like a hulk and it doesnt look right in most scenes if anything if looks comical when it shouldnt..
Sorry but this one has drastically fallen from my must reads

 

[Andarilho]

Whats the deal with not showing any penetration on sex scenes?
Is this to avoid dealing with collision problems when posing?
This VN has some nice potential, but the camera angle when the "action" starts is really disappointing.
I'm sure this is robbing Story Machine Studios from some more patreons, and sadly i am one of them.

 

[KoGa3]

Info: updated my Android port (with wt hints/gallery unlocker) for the new game version v0.4.2/Ep4

 

[N0lla]

Excellent renders. Good story - like where its going, hero to the rescue.

well done devs.

 

[AnyName'llDo]

ok im just gonna be honest here, this wasnt your best update.. for one the Lydia inconsistency with her hair before her even getting to the salon was just plain lazy.. There was a fair amount of hope for this title but it seems to be falling in quality with each update.. MC STILL looks like a hulk and it doesnt look right in most scenes if anything if looks comical when it shouldnt..
Sorry but this one has drastically fallen from my must reads

I haven't paid enough attention to Lydia's hair to notice if it's 100% consistent or not. Her hair looked fine to me. The MC looks a little more jacked than he should be. Definitely not Hulk proportions. The bottoms of pecs don't show through shirts that much unless the shirt is wet. Not worth critiquing, though, IMO.

Everything you complained about seems minor to me. The weirdest graphic choice to me was to put earmuffs on everyone at the firing range except the MC. Hearing protection is required at a gun range. Also, in combat and in training, soldiers are required to wear ear protection.

 

[txe320]

I haven't paid enough attention to Lydia's hair to notice if it's 100% consistent or not. Her hair looked fine to me. The MC looks a little more jacked than he should be. Definitely not Hulk proportions. The bottoms of pecs don't show through shirts that much unless the shirt is wet. Not worth critiquing, though, IMO.

Everything you complained about seems minor to me. The weirdest graphic choice to me was to put earmuffs on everyone at the firing range except the MC. Hearing protection is required at a gun range. Also, in combat and in training, soldiers are required to wear ear protection.

Well, I know it's not realistic, but storyline wise, but its kind make sense that he doesn't wear them because he has implants and can "turn off" his hearing whenver he wants, so basically, without ear protection he can still protect his ears naturally.

 

[AnyName'llDo]

Well, I know it's not realistic, but storyline wise, but its kind make sense that he doesn't wear them because he has implants and can "turn off" his hearing whenver he wants, so basically, without ear protection he can still protect his ears naturally.

Decent argument. You'd still be required to wear them. Same with Rybeck who wasn't wearing protection.

 

[burbero]

Dude, seriously mc looks so bad. Not just in this render, but in all of them. He always looks fat, not muscular.

 

[Dessolos]

Dude, seriously mc looks so bad. Not just in this render, but in all of them. He always looks fat, not muscular.

meh a minor nitpick for me, at least he doesn't look super young like some MC's ill take this over a super young looking one anyday. ( he still look young but not like he is still in high school young)

 

[burbero]

meh a minor nitpick for me, at least he doesn't look super young like some MC's ill take this over a super young looking one anyday. ( he still look young but not like he is still in high school young)

No, it's just bad sizing. The developer wanted to make him a big muscular guy, but with the clothes he just looks fat and out of place.

 

[MrBenny]

Dude, seriously mc looks so bad. Not just in this render, but in all of them. He always looks fat, not muscular.

Haha, that image kind of reminded me of Meatloaf's part in the Fight Club movie. Bob who was body builder who over did it with juicing (steroids), and ended up with huge breasts.

 

[Crowangel]

I haven't paid enough attention to Lydia's hair to notice if it's 100% consistent or not. Her hair looked fine to me. The MC looks a little more jacked than he should be. Definitely not Hulk proportions. The bottoms of pecs don't show through shirts that much unless the shirt is wet. Not worth critiquing, though, IMO.

Everything you complained about seems minor to me. The weirdest graphic choice to me was to put earmuffs on everyone at the firing range except the MC. Hearing protection is required at a gun range. Also, in combat and in training, soldiers are required to wear ear protection.

re- the ear protection he says he doesnt need them because of the work they did on him he can muffle the noise himself.. and about his body it clearly morphs/merges with itself on quite a few scenes due to its excessive size and the devs animating the scene as if he was a normal built person still.. a muscly physic would disable him from being able to do most stuff he does at that size and he would walk like a over starched body frame rather than being limber..
and for Lydia's hair she gets it cut at the salon however during the scenes that lead to Lydia and mc having their 1st kiss at her company when he notices that she is working to hard and its causing her to burn out she already has that same haircut just in a diff style for the office work, then several scenes later she is back to her default hair she had throughout the game so far before she goes to the salon

lastly check back.. its not complaining more so letting the dev know my opinion with FEEDBACK as someone who HAS SUPPORTED this title since its launch as well as been a patreon because they liked its story even if (since the beginning) was vocal about issues like the bod size

 

[bearlishbody]

Meat, you did a nice job making this game, animations are very real and the intimate scenes are good enough the story i do like and the story also seems tought trough somehow.. i cant wait for the story to contiue btw nice style of ladies and seroundings.
als nice to see that you make the main caracters change clothes ..... top work enjoyed it.

 

[Skep-tiker]

Does anyone know if the choice of LI after the house fire is locking out the other LI's paths permanently?

 

[vs2011xyz]

Made a quick Mod and Android port for the game (got a suggestion) and added WT hints.
Info Jan 22, 2023: The Mod only download is stopped, there is now another one available here


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Mar. 19, 2024:
Updated my Port with Mod for the new game version Ep4
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Android port from the game compressed v0.4.2/EP4
with integrated Mod v0.4.2 (~850MB)
Pixeldrain -

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Thanks

 

[flintlocker1]

Suggestion, make the sex animations separate videos instead of one long one. I thought I was missing something when Scarlet was suddenly cumming on top of you after just giving you a blowjob, turns out I just needed to keep watching the animation to see all of it

 

[jhonatanw]

Hello Everyone! Fog of War: Book One will release on May 5th!

Please wish list! Tell your friends. Tell your mother. Don’t tell your sister though. She already knows!

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[wilkwild6896]

Made a quick Mod and Android port for the game (got a suggestion) and added WT hints.
Info Jan 22, 2023: The Mod only download is stopped, there is now another one available here


====================================
Mar. 19, 2024:
Updated my Port with Mod for the new game version Ep4
====================================


Android port from the game compressed v0.4.2/EP4
with integrated Mod v0.4.2 (~850MB)
Pixeldrain -

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Spoiler: Android port - more infos...

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some ingame pics:
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Is there any chance you would restart mod support for the main PC version of the game? No offense to LaikDink, but he has been taking between one and two weeks to update his mods lately. I'm not really trying to complain; I just really enjoy the game and like to play with a WT mod.

 

[jhonatanw]

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The date is here!

Steam will release on May 5th , 2024!

It will come with a rework of the prologue and earlier lewd animations. A new audio scape and achievements!

Please wish list here! Even if you don't plan to purchase wish lists can help a lot!

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[KoGa3]

Is there any chance you would restart mod support for the main PC version of the game? No offense to LaikDink, but he has been taking between one and two weeks to update his mods lately. I'm not really trying to complain; I just really enjoy the game and like to play with a WT mod.

Laikdink has updated his Mod.