VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Follow the Leader [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

The story is just getting started and I already love the girls in this VN. SuperWriter always finds a way to make fall for these girls. His rendering has improved so much over the years, and the VN shows that. I like the fact we kind of steal the harem from a grade-A asshole, but there is no instant harem here. Two updates in and I am hooked yet again on another SW game. I definitely recommend getting in on this now, because I think Follow the Leader is going to be really fun at least it has started out that way. I can't say I have a favourite, but I love Nine at the moment, but I am sure SW will find a way to make me love them all the same as he usually does. So if you can add another VN, this one might be for you.

Nice renders, good writing, interesting story.

Why only 3 stars? For me, a story needs to be believable. A guy that was a slave for his whole life, knowing his master.

* He will risk his live for an unknown clone that was treating him badly? Obviously knowing that his master keeps refreshing his harem continuously? And within 1 day of his freedom? NO WAY.

* Clones being a few months old, only learning what they should. But still they know too much. Eight should already have been sorted out in the cloning facility, because of her obvious malfunctions.

There is not much needed to make the story believable. I feel that the dev intends to explain a lot in the upcoming releases. But that is not enough. When I go to cinema, I'll watch the movie to the end, and might (or not) be satisfied with the resolution at the end. Here, however, we have a VN that is released in parts. Not all answers need to be given in each part, but each part must be _believable_ in order for people to continue to follow the story. So, please, dev, give enough backround to make the story believable. More about clones, more about slaves. Maybe even more about dragons.

[Based on v0.1; updated to v0.2, still holding at 4 stars]
Solid start, but not much there yet. There's only a little bit beyond a prologue as of yet.

I expect that we'll also be learning more about the MC's missing mother, who is only "seen" in brief blurry flashbacks.

Renders of the three women match the quality of the dev's other games with similar generous curves; we've yet to find out if the MC is "overly developed".

Several select-menu-item-within-a-few-seconds needed to get the highest score with the companion women.