That's great. I checked it out, the game is built really well. Only thing that bothered me was, the fact that Mel sat on that boy's lap much earlier in the story as if it was a casual thing. I'd suggest you to take things slow. Tease us, burn it slow, and reward us.
Anyhow, I'll wait for the next update and let you know my feedback. Thanks for taking this up. My best wishes.
Good evening, yes we agree with all of this, because what you indicate is exactly one of the common threads of the story.
These images (Melissa sitting on Nahui) were a fantasy of Nahui's.
CosmoK worked well on it, but edited as is, these three illustrations mean nothing, because in the story the power cut is an excuse to put these beautiful renderings in the Alpha.
Furthermore, at the time of the story, mobile phones did not exist.
Only, there you go, the renderings are very beautiful, really.
Why not add them in the Alpha to show technical capabilities (and towards more eroticism).
They will not stay and will be removed (melissa with the mobile)
The power cut (restarting the meter) will be removed, it was just an Alpha assembly demonstration.
Take this as a bonus, unrelated to the story.
CosmoK will upload these renderings to its SubscribeStar for you to benefit from and the story will not be altered.
We have the real desire to create a rising eroticism, very slow, very slow and burning.
Based on the feedback, you seem to have noticed this, which is reassuring.
Thank you very much for taking the time to write us a relevant analysis.