I have added the textbox opacity slider; I think it will help in getting a clearer view of the text.First thing comes to mind. (I will add more later)
Your Text needs outlines. People don't like Textboxes.
In my opinion the grey Box for the Title/Name is not needed. It blocks/distracts the view to the beautiful images
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a bit of nitpicking here, but where does this story takes place? Britain or the US?
I read about Manchester FC (not United or City) and i do not get the idea of the three Bullies you met on first collage day. Why would the instantly talk/think about american football when it's in the UK?
I created a page here.Thank you!
I'll give it a try.
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Yeah, page looks good!I created a page here.
I think the format is right, did I do anything wrong? I also reported the page and asked for a dev tag (YAY!). Let me know if I missed anything. Thanks!
Yeah, the hardcoded part was a mess. I didn't code it to change the character's name first. Also, I need to fix the grammar, it'll hire a proofreader when I can gift him enough income.First thing comes to mind.
Your Text needs outlines. Textboxes are a solution but they are distracting/obfuscating the scenery.
In my opinion the grey Box for the Title/Name is not needed. It blocks/distracts the view to the beautiful images
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White stripes throughout a good chunk of images during that scene.
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Name is hardcoded
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Overall a good experience in my opinion. Some gramatical issues (to be expected from a non native speaker), the animations stutter a lot (running on ryzen 7 5800x3d and rx 7900xt samsung 980pro 1tb m2 ssd).
Maybe not call the Version 0.5b i guess, people will expect way more content from a 0.5 Version.Apologigies i misread the Versioning.
About the grammar part, nobody's perfect. happens to all of us.Yeah, the hardcoded part was a mess. I didn't code it to change the character's name first. Also, I need to fix the grammar, it'll hire a proofreader when I can gift him enough income.
About the white stripes – those were toilet papers! It's like don't need decorations to make an induction party a success, lol.
Animation stuttering is disappointing; it worked smoothly on my end. I'll check it out. Could it be because it's running at 30 FPS?
Thanks for the first two points.About the grammar part, nobody's perfect. happens to all of us.
toilet paper: Okay! cool! No issues with that.
Animations stutter: I changed the settings (Shift+G) and checked and changed the options. different renderer and different FPS Modes (144Hz (Monitor output)/60Hz/30Hz) it was almost fluid in 30 FPS mode.
Yeah, it was stuttering a lot in 144Hz mode. When i changed it to 30FPS it got a lot better.Thanks for the first two points.
About animations, now is it working fine, or was it a display related fix?
Thanks for letting me know. My screen supports 144Hz too, so I will see how it does on fixed frame rate.Yeah, it was stuttering a lot in 144Hz mode. When i changed it to 30FPS it got a lot better.
Don't know why.
Just to be clear, i mean this settings.Thanks for letting me know. My screen supports 144Hz too, so I will see how it does on fixed frame rate.
Gotcha!