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VN Ren'Py Footy Dreams - A new Football/Soccer-themed Adult VN

JIJU_Ent

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I'm glad to post that Footy Dreams is out now.




The game is a 3D AVN themed after Football, and it is a dream come true of sharing this with you lot.

Download and let me know your thoughts!

- - (All hosted under Workupload)

Changelog:
  • Over 2000 lines of code.
  • 300 2K (2560x1440) Still Renders
  • Seven animations consisting of a total of 1200 frames.
  • 15+ background music and SFX.

Thanks, JIJU.
 

WICKEDp4th

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First thing comes to mind.

Your Text needs outlines. Textboxes are a solution but they are distracting/obfuscating the scenery.
In my opinion the grey Box for the Title/Name is not needed. It blocks/distracts the view to the beautiful images ;)
text needs outlines.png


White stripes throughout a good chunk of images during that scene.
the white stripes.png

Name is hardcoded
name is hardcoded.png

Overall a good experience in my opinion. Some gramatical issues (to be expected from a non native speaker), the animations stutter a lot (running on ryzen 7 5800x3d and rx 7900xt samsung 980pro 1tb m2 ssd).
Maybe not call the Version 0.5b i guess, people will expect way more content from a 0.5 Version. Apologigies i misread the Versioning. ;)
 
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JIJU_Ent

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First thing comes to mind. (I will add more later)

Your Text needs outlines. People don't like Textboxes.
In my opinion the grey Box for the Title/Name is not needed. It blocks/distracts the view to the beautiful images ;)
View attachment 4174752


a bit of nitpicking here, but where does this story takes place? Britain or the US?
I read about Manchester FC (not United or City) and i do not get the idea of the three Bullies you met on first collage day. Why would the instantly talk/think about american football when it's in the UK?
I have added the textbox opacity slider; I think it will help in getting a clearer view of the text.

The seniors are being goofy here (pretending to be, which will become clear later that night), so I thought this angle would suit the scene. Since Manchester FC is European, the setting is British (even though I’m not British myself).

Namebox opacity I'll take care too. Thanks for the feedback!
 
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JIJU_Ent

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First thing comes to mind.

Your Text needs outlines. Textboxes are a solution but they are distracting/obfuscating the scenery.
In my opinion the grey Box for the Title/Name is not needed. It blocks/distracts the view to the beautiful images ;)
View attachment 4174752


White stripes throughout a good chunk of images during that scene.
View attachment 4174793

Name is hardcoded
View attachment 4174798

Overall a good experience in my opinion. Some gramatical issues (to be expected from a non native speaker), the animations stutter a lot (running on ryzen 7 5800x3d and rx 7900xt samsung 980pro 1tb m2 ssd).
Maybe not call the Version 0.5b i guess, people will expect way more content from a 0.5 Version. Apologigies i misread the Versioning. ;)
Yeah, the hardcoded part was a mess. I didn't code it to change the character's name first. Also, I need to fix the grammar, it'll hire a proofreader when I can gift him enough income.

About the white stripes – those were toilet papers! It's like don't need decorations to make an induction party a success, lol.

Animation stuttering is disappointing; it worked smoothly on my end. I'll check it out. Could it be because it's running at 30 FPS?
 
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WICKEDp4th

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Yeah, the hardcoded part was a mess. I didn't code it to change the character's name first. Also, I need to fix the grammar, it'll hire a proofreader when I can gift him enough income.

About the white stripes – those were toilet papers! It's like don't need decorations to make an induction party a success, lol.

Animation stuttering is disappointing; it worked smoothly on my end. I'll check it out. Could it be because it's running at 30 FPS?
About the grammar part, nobody's perfect. happens to all of us. ;)

toilet paper: Okay! cool! No issues with that. (y)

Animations stutter: I changed the settings (Shift+G) and checked and changed the options. different renderer and different FPS Modes (144Hz (Monitor output)/60Hz/30Hz) it was almost fluid in 30 FPS mode.
 

JIJU_Ent

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About the grammar part, nobody's perfect. happens to all of us. ;)

toilet paper: Okay! cool! No issues with that. (y)

Animations stutter: I changed the settings (Shift+G) and checked and changed the options. different renderer and different FPS Modes (144Hz (Monitor output)/60Hz/30Hz) it was almost fluid in 30 FPS mode.
Thanks for the first two points.

About animations, now is it working fine, or was it a display related fix?
 

WICKEDp4th

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Thanks for letting me know. My screen supports 144Hz too, so I will see how it does on fixed frame rate.
Just to be clear, i mean this settings.
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chrome-capture-2024-10-28.png


EDIT: I resetted all options to it's default state and disabled the Powersave function, that worked. The Animations now run fluently in 144Hz/FPS mode.

Sorry for the confusion. :confused:;)
 
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