VN Ren'Py Abandoned FrankenFur [v0.1.1] [PorkyPy]

[Bob69]

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You are an unemployed human in a small village looking for work. One day a letter arrives from a mysterious person named Dr. Frankenfur who lives in a castle outside the village. The doctor agrees to hire you as an assistant to help in her biological and medical research. Hopefully you're ready to get your hands dirty.​

Thread Updated: 2025-04-09
Release Date: 2024-05-22
Developer: PorkyPy

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Version: 0.1..
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[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[JennaJJ]

... Thx 4 the share ...

 

[rKnight]

One day a letter arrives from a mysterious person named Dr. BaasB who lives in a castle outside the village.

THX for the share...

 

[Man_in_hat365]

abandoned on the first upload... sadge.

 

[Mcknobz33]

well that was quick!!

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks for the upload.

 

[Klaptrap]

Wow, already abandoned?

 

[PorkyPy]

Oh wow, this is actually mine, never expected it to get uploaded here given how short it is.

Regarding it being abandoned, I still am kind of working on it. When I made this, it was for a one week game jam and just decided to jump in and crank something out. At that time I was brand new to learning Renpy and Koikatsu. Since then, I've been practicing with both and have gradually been increasing my skills. Also, I didn't really have a fleshed out story other than what was published, just kind of a Frankenstein parody. I suppose if there's interest, I can probably get back to working on it.

 

[FeLisk]

I mean
I last longer then this game

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

Oh wow, this is actually mine, never expected it to get uploaded here given how short it is.

Regarding it being abandoned, I still am kind of working on it. When I made this, it was for a one week game jam and just decided to jump in and crank something out. At that time I was brand new to learning Renpy and Koikatsu. Since then, I've been practicing with both and have gradually been increasing my skills. Also, I didn't really have a fleshed out story other than what was published, just kind of a Frankenstein parody. I suppose if there's interest, I can probably get back to working on it.

Fair warning: I have yet to play this, and will make another post when I actually do.
I'd personally love to see you continue it, though I am heavily biased because it's a Human On Anthro game.
However, given it's originally a Jam title, I understand if it's hard for you to work out exactly how to continue it, and would fully support you just moving on to a new, similar project as well.
Once I actually play it I'll have more to say.

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

Oh wow

Fair warning: I have yet to play this, and will make another post when I actually do.

And now I have.
First, here's the list of spelling mistakes I saw:
exhuasted instead of exhausted
appologize instead of apologize
exlpain instead of explain

Admission in advanced: I know you only had 1 week to work on this, so forgive me if some of this critique is unfair, I tried to keep it in mind, but I feel like I should just say exactly what I think.

Okay, so I get that the nature of the backgrounds doesn't give you overt control of the look, but I think you might want to make some of these more "gothic" looking, as right now they look very stock fantasy.

I also really don't like the modern slang/confusing anachronistic setting. I went in thinking it was set around the time of the novel, so 1800s, but immediately the MC started using modern curses. I get you were going for comedic (for what it's worth, I did audible chuckle at the 'meow too'd' joke) porn tone, but that part just kinda irked me right at the start. For what it's worth I did get used to it fairly quickly, but there were some other issues, like how Frankenfur cured Breast Cancer, yet people assume her castle in abandoned? Anyone that cured even one form of cancer like that wouldn't just be forgotten like that.

The other part I didn't like is that there's a lot of great material in Frankenstein and a lot of it got thrown out just to make Figor act kind of simp-ish. Now don't get me wrong, Igor is an OG simp, but Frankenstein still does a lot of hands on shit in the story/parodies of it, so Frankenfur really felt like a step down from that.

Now, despite all of that, I did enjoy the experience enough that the ending screen made me go "wow, that's it?" and wish to play more. I hope you do continue to work on it, especially since you are no longer held back by the 1 week jam time limit. I'd also likely enjoy other projects you made in the future.

 

[PorkyPy]

And now I have.
First, here's the list of spelling mistakes I saw:
exhuasted instead of exhausted
appologize instead of apologize
exlpain instead of explain

Admission in advanced: I know you only had 1 week to work on this, so forgive me if some of this critique is unfair, I tried to keep it in mind, but I feel like I should just say exactly what I think.

Okay, so I get that the nature of the backgrounds doesn't give you overt control of the look, but I think you might want to make some of these more "gothic" looking, as right now they look very stock fantasy.

I also really don't like the modern slang/confusing anachronistic setting. I went in thinking it was set around the time of the novel, so 1800s, but immediately the MC started using modern curses. I get you were going for comedic (for what it's worth, I did audible chuckle at the 'meow too'd' joke) porn tone, but that part just kinda irked me right at the start. For what it's worth I did get used to it fairly quickly, but there were some other issues, like how Frankenfur cured Breast Cancer, yet people assume her castle in abandoned? Anyone that cured even one form of cancer like that wouldn't just be forgotten like that.

The other part I didn't like is that there's a lot of great material in Frankenstein and a lot of it got thrown out just to make Figor act kind of simp-ish. Now don't get me wrong, Igor is an OG simp, but Frankenstein still does a lot of hands on shit in the story/parodies of it, so Frankenfur really felt like a step down from that.

Now, despite all of that, I did enjoy the experience enough that the ending screen made me go "wow, that's it?" and wish to play more. I hope you do continue to work on it, especially since you are no longer held back by the 1 week jam time limit. I'd also likely enjoy other projects you made in the future.

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback, it's very useful to think about should I continue. I agree, the scenes could have more gothic vibe which is what I'm going for. I also have lots of notes, ideas, and other characters for it, but again, it's a matter of putting it all together into a coherent story/game. I should probably go back and re-read the original.

 

[Dolboebina453]

I mean
I last longer then this game

cute gif

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback, it's very useful to think about should I continue. I agree, the scenes could have more gothic vibe which is what I'm going for. I also have lots of notes, ideas, and other characters for it, but again, it's a matter of putting it all together into a coherent story/game. I should probably go back and re-read the original.

IMO I kind of think the intro could use a bit of an expansion, with maybe a character the MC talks to before they head for the castle. There's some stuff later that's very tell-y and not show-y, like the MC's interspecies fetish. Having him interact with another anthro could help with this.

Another peeve I had, but cut from my original post, was when Figor returns to his room after first meeting Frankenfur (I might be misremembering the exact order it appeared in) and says out loud how attractive she is. This is very YMMV but I really just hate it when a character has to directly say "the girl was hot". Instead, Figor should be talking only about her breasts, and especially on the fact that her breasts are obviously larger than any he's previously seen. This would mesh well with the reveal about the serum in the following dialogue and give Figor some more solid characterization on how he's later manipulated and still play out pretty comedically, you could even add some accidental breast puns from him in subsenquent scene.