The latter two thirds of the game are better than the first third. It seemed the story telling improved, largely, so I assumed the Dev either hired additional writers or they went out of their way self-improvement style. It would have been nice if they went back to improve the first few chapters to be, as relatively, in depth as the latter.
There are, however, so many spelling errors and inconsistencies with grammar. Even half way through the game I thought about making a mod/addon to correct them all. Which is a shame. Though, don't get me wrong, I do like the game. Just wish it had some TLC and thoroughly proof-read. Yes, I know it is, essentially, a porn game or what have you. But it is still jarring, at times, to see such errors so frequently.
The time between the Father coming home and the start of the epilogues could have been expanded. I think that is a point of contention for a few people here. But, for the endings themselves? Well, let us get the "bad" out of the way. Alice's ending. Whilst I love that she ended up marrying the MC it still is a bit weird, to me, that they continued the poly thing. Sure, inviting a third into the bedroom, once in a blue moon, is fine. I think adding a third as an actual girlfriend undoes the work of the epilogue prior to it. Personally? I would have put in a choice before that. To go either with a monogamy route or a poly one.
However not adding the random woman as Alice's GF. It is obvious that Leah would have been the perfect choice. Akin to coming home to realise, after all that time spent away, that she couldn't live with out both the MC and Alice and vice versa. That would have been better than having a threesome then discarding her, entirely, a few sentences later. This is why having an editor, or a second set of eyes, to look at things is important. To see if it flows and makes sense.
My personal favourite endings are both Leah and Melody. They hit home hard, with me, especially and I certainly was not dry eyed by the end. So I have to congratulate the Dev on those there. Let us just say my own life was related to both of them on the story arch level in the epilogues.Even for an 'adult' game if you can, some how, make something relatable... if only to a slight degree. A slice of people will love it just for that. Memories, and emotions, are a powerful thing. I don't, generally, self insert.
I tend to read AVNs for what they are. As if you are watching a film. So kinks, in games, don't bother me as it isn't about me. Though if a writer can make me emotional by making it relatable... Then they have done something great. Only a handful of AVNs have a brought a tear to my eye. Needless to say, naturally, it is not the draw for such games - Just lovely when done properly.
I liked the Harem ending. In many ways I liked that is was pseudo open ended and clear that their lives had only just begun.Though there is a part of me that wishes it would have gone deeper and had a few more "A couple of years later" moments. But, that is just me.
As for Susan? A plot device, for sure, though it would have been fantastic if you could ignore the other girls and simply have two routes with her. One of lust and one of love and to finish it off with her own epilogue of her and the MC after college living together. Or something along those lines. But that would purely just be wishful thinking as, again, merely a plot device.
Hailey? Well, what can we say? Poor woman. Though by the end of things she is in a far better place, thankfully. Her inclusion to the Harem epilogue was a nice touch. I think she would also deserve her own Epilogue of Hailey and the MC living together lovingly. Out of all the girls, Aunt Hailey needs a happily ever after type scenario.
For the reasons above I can't give the game a 5/5. Quite a few easily rectified issues still persist. But, to me, it certainly can be a 4/5 and reside in my top 15 AVNs list. Which is no small feat.