VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Freeloading Family [v0.32] [FFCreations]

Beautifully done, well written

The characters are very well developed. The story is interesting. Some very funny lines. The protagonist doesn't seem like a complete douche like in most games of this sort. The character models are gorgeous. One of the better games that I have played. Really well done.

I like the art, specially Alice . The story is good so far. It needs some polishing though. I mean you can't have in one scene MC and Alice having sex on the balcony and the next scene they sit on bed with the receptionist.
Also from one moment were no one knows that Alice and MC doing it to suddenly everyone (friends) knows about it, I felt like i missed a whole chapter.

About animations, i don't think they are necessity for a good story telling. Personally i prefer nice still images from different angles that shows the expression of the chars and the act, than just one cam animation.

Overall, good work, i can't wait for the next chapter.

6/10 Golden Medium Way. Nice story. But gameplay? Lie on the skip and wait for the end. That's how it impressed me. Boredom. You can watch the scenes but I don't even have a shard that should bore into my memory. No tension, excitement, corruption. Just a nice comix.

The story and humor in this story is amazing. The characters are well developed and have many different sides. The flow of the story is wonderful. I can't stop laughing at the humor written so well into everything. The characters all mesh well together as one happy group. One of the better novels I've gone through. I can't wait to see what happens with certain characters and how things play out. Well done, and keep up the excellent work.

My Rating of this Game (V0.16) is:

Pros:
-Great Renders
-Nice Story
-Good looking milf
-Action

Cons:
-could be longer updates

Total Rating so far:
Like the renders in this game,also the different scenes in each update,I sometimes feel the updates are too short,could also just be my imagination.
Worth the download

For me, this is a 5 out of 5 game and It will be a good example for every VN game developer.

The character is the best module in VN games. Sister is the most attractive one in any similar games. Both of her inside and outside part is fantastic. And I hope we have more game has similar outlook of their characters.

The story is descent and considering. The plot is convincing and the option is neither too complicate nor too straightforward. I don't need a difficult or multiple-choice game-play as long as it has a good and decent script, and this one certainly have got an excellent story.

Somebody may not like the new update story and don't like the new character. For me, it is OK. I like developer give some new options as long as it doesn't ruin the logic of the story. So far it hasn't and I would love to give them more time to see where the story will go to.

After all, this game probably is the top 5 3D game now days and I would happily to be a patreon for the developer because of this awesome game.

Reviewing V0.15

Story: Everything looks good here, nothing to say, it's a love story with maybe harem option(i'm a soft person and the first run of every version will always be a vanilla with MC and Steph love each other with less interruptions(from other characters) possible

Graphics/Renders: High quality stuff, love it, aside Leah's lipstick(i don't like glitters XD)

Characters: Just so good for a game like this, MC is a bit passive and his dad is a major villain, in an annoying way, the king of backstabbers.

Bonus: Black Sabbath! a Jojo reference, i laugh for like 30 minutes when i saw him...and make me question if my life is actually a jojo reference bc everywhere i go, anything i play, somewhere near me there is a jojo reference! and i fucking love it!

so yeah 5stars! I love this game, is in my top3 of my favorite games(i don't decide in which position yet but top3 for sure)

Review of V0.32 [Completed]

The game went from being good, to being mediocre, with just the endings.

Alice/Main Girl: She becomes a therapist, after a few years of working, she gets depressed, quits her job, she does something different(that we aren't told), MC is just there, they keep their poly-relationship, but with occasional hook-ups for threesomes. I repeat:MC is just there, we don't learn much aside eventually he made peace with his dad(despite the awful backstabbing that his dad did, and after the dad still divorced MC's girlfriend's Mom during they honeymoon/cruise).

Leah: MC is just there, they live together, she is successful(as sport-journalist), not much else, she is happy doing a job he likes

Melody: Becomes writer of tv-shows, so She moved away with MC(who is just there), she is doing a job she likes and thrives with it.

Karina: She becomes a tattoo-artist, MC is just there supporting her in a relationship, they're happy

I can go on, but the point is, these endings are generic, and the main/first love interest ends up miserable with the job of her choice, but the others don't have any set-back or problem of any kind. It's boring and infuriating how MC is just dismissed in 2-3 sentences. Had to lower my rating.

Well, where to start... This is my first review, I am kind of new to these type of games, have a few dozen under my belt now and this is one of the first to really resonate. It is an amazing story so far, I am really engaged with the characters in the story. It has a lot of heart, and I can really fall in love with the characters and situations. On a more technical side, the characters are beautiful the situations don't seem too forced. It is fairly realistic and doesn't jolt you out of the situations really. A lot of games I have played make you feel like you are playing a game, this feels, I guess, more natural. I know the game is really linear, but even still I feel really engaged in the story line. I am really looking forward to the further updates, this is one of the most engaging stories I have played even with the fairly linear story line, which in this case is not a bad thing at all.

tl;dr This is a really good story, play it.

4/5

Awesome Game

PROS
-Sister/Roommate is one of the sexiest Characters in a VN.
-One of the Hottest sex scenes of all VNs
-Developer makes frequent updates and listens to feedback. Constantly tries to improve the game.

CONS
-*Spoilers* Game has taken a bit of a dive after finally banging Sister/Roommate. Future updates should go back to the previous formula and focus on longer scenes with Sister.

Nice Story with lot of comedy, well also like character design ("Alice especially "), but it can be increase in character development (relation between MC and Alice), maybe story about how Alice can like MC because it's like to sudden and MC not do much effort in getting Alice attention, for other character well not much problem since it's suitable with other character personality.

Overall it's quite good and thanks a lot for creating it.

I loved the story. I'm already looking forward to seeing the future update.
The story is well developed, maybe I regretted losing the figure of Susan so soon, I would have liked to see a little bit of BDSM in more.
I'm falling in love with the step-sys.

thsis game has choices that matter,
it has commedy and character development
it has perfect renders and story telling
the paceing is just the right balance of dialogue and sexy times
Let the Niel flow aroudn the Eifel tower! (that's something you'll understand once you play the game)

this VN is HILARIOUS. i hope someone who knows how to tag things tags this with humor. it's about a brother and sister's daily lives in school with their friends. there's really no central plot (yet) and everything is just one funny event after another.

by the end, it seems like the first real obstacle has been thrown at the brother and sister. definitely my favorite comedy VN of this year.

Review of v0.13

In my recent review of [name redacted due to reviewing rules 2019-02-26], I remarked how it was on another level from other recent (yet still deserving) 5-star reviews I've given. It was a step above. Well, Freeloading Family is in that same league, or at least is very likely to be when complete. Whereas [DA] was exceptional sex+lust+drama, FF is exceptional sex+romance+humor&wit. I loved it so far.

The MC is fantastic. While young, he is experienced, intelligent, and witty. What a joy to play as him.

The female leads are written very well. At the start, my initial reaction to each was that they were thin caricatures. I was very much mistaken. The sister seemed at first to be this oh so innocent flower, her bestie a ball-buster, and Melody just a crazy bitch. Nope on all counts. They each had a lot of texture and character and were all three exceedingly lovable.

The character models are good if not exceptional. Screenshots do a fine job of relaying those. The sister is quite cute (though I wish she'd wear her hair back more - much prettier).

The story was generally good. There were a few elements I disliked here, however. For one, everything about the English teacher just felt too over the top. The game doesn't take itself too seriously, true, but she exceeded my generous suspension of disbelief thresholds.

And while I understand the reason the author forces us to do something so monumentally stupid that no one is so idiotic to actually do, it doesn't excuse the funneling. There had to be a better way to force events rather than something so rage inducing. I was stressing so much about it I couldn't fully enjoy a whole series of otherwise very hot scenes.

While I have complaints about the story,I have none about the dialogue. The dialogue is excellent. It's kind of like watching Sports Night, everyone has something clever to say to feed the next. I liked it very much and was heartily laughing quite often.

So this is a great game, thank you for the work so far. I'm looking forward to playing more!

This game gave me a heartboner, an actual boner, and a fair few chuckles. The main characters are believable and have spunk and pizazz in spades. Their personalities come through strongly, and not just in a "hurr I am a fuckable archetype" way. Strongly recommend.

Like so many I love this game. Love his sister and even if she was not his sister I would still choose her. The model is well made and sexy. But most of all her personality.

Love how each one of them their personalities shine and really easy to distinguish.

Great renders and flowing story so far. Only gripe may be lack of animation or rather better image series movements, still the game is great.

Well done Dev.

GIRLS 5/5 : The girls in this game are by far one of the most beautiful I've seen anywhere so far. They are all original models or at least I haven't seen the likes of them anywhere else. The faces are really well done and the bodies are amazingly voluptuous with sensuous curves. Most of the cast are THICC THOTs, which personally I love. If you are into more petite less porny looking females, there is a new character that was introduced in the latest version (nothing happens yet) and maybe others will follow. This is without a doubt the best aspect of this game and why I gave it 5 stars (Please bring Susan back).

Plot 3/5 : Not particularly interesting, typical high school incest story with a pinch of romance. The conversation dialogue has been done very well. The main focus seems to be about how you relate to the girls, and we get a bit of background on each of them. But there is nothing else going on in the story for the MC besides that and that makes the story feel a bit empty at times. Still better than your average parody game, for the most part this game feels more mature. It wouldn't hurt for a wider variety of cast members that weren't necessarily romancable or girls.

Renders 4/5 : They really good and most of them seem original as in I haven't seen them in 20 other games. Definitively needs more frames per scene, by that I mean more images, more movement and different angles to make the game feel more life-like and dynamic. Could use with a wider variety of locations, mostly you see the girls in a static background Japanese VN style. I did like Leah's house a lot tho. Need more animations, lots of more animations.

SEX 4/5 : Like the creator said, this is a 'Slow Burn' game but still its not a slow as many other games I've player and its not grindy at all. In fact you do get to have Sex with some of the girls right away and it doesn't get forever to seal the deal with the main girl either. There is a bit of kink in them but I could do with a bit more, and the game implies that girls will remember certain 'sexual preferences' you mention to them during interactions you previously had to cater to your preferences in the future, which I think is brilliant. I did have some problems with the SEX scenes tho. They feel way too short. They need more variety in options and angels. It would be nice if the girls seemed more involved during them. Finally most of the them lack animations and the one that are animated feel a bit stiff. But I am sure this will improve as the game develops further, too bad the older scenes will probably remain the same.

All and all, this is a brilliant game with gorgeous girls and LOTS of potential. It falls a bit short, but there is always room for improvement. Lots of folks say it needs more content and by that they mean that they are used to games being a lot more heavy in the ways of number of images and lines of text. Not crazy about the path by points system (since people will mostly always focus on 1 path), more options would be nice.

Will absolutely keep track of its progress.

PS: I would be really nice if the new gallery feature was limited to the sexy interactions with the girls instead of everything and if you could move more easily from image to image. Something to keep in mind, I am sure you get what I am saying. *wink*

I can't bring myself to finish this game, because I can't stand the awful choice scoring system where:

Being nice = submissive
Being an asshole = Dominant

Due to you being nice to someone earlier, few options with this character is avoided or can't be pursued because you being nice is you being a submissive pussy. I hate this system in the game.

The renders are great, couldn't get that far into the storyline because of this.

This is just a wonderful game. So surprising to start a game that sure seems like it's going to be a very horny story about very hot people and turns out to have actual human emotions too! Love it a lot, can't recommend enough.

I simply love it. And really like the story behind. It´s about friendship, love and.... well.... sex. But thats not the only thing going on, thank you for that.
Graphics are okay I`d say, and if you look at it as a visual novel it`s really fun. Keep up the great work.