VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Freeloading Family [v0.32] [FFCreations]

Not a lot of content so far but the girls are very well rendered. Depends on future progression, this could easily go up or down, but I like what I see so far (3.5/5).

Your choices doesn't appear to have a whole lot of impact so far. I'm sure they will influence future story branches, but you don't see any of that now. There's not a lot of dialogue and scenes and I know the writer said he does not want to have filler contents, which is good, but filler contents can sometimes add to the immersion so don't completely shy from that.

This game has a story that I like, a cool design of characters. This is still a rough draft, but the introduction is clear is fluid. The perversions are not lacking. I'm starting to see multiple choice events. Attention to the runaway, the girls are horny, you are the Tour Effel, it could be that the events without kissing is uncommon.

Review 0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.1 alpha

I'll be as short as the preview:

art 7/10: sis model is pretty good, the rest below average
story 1/10: brother/sister with tons of cash in an empty house(1 of the 2 will be the dom in the relationship) + some english errors.
sound 0/10: no sound
overall 3/10: i swear to god that if i have to read another copy/paste story i will beat the neighbor cat, but the dev can render so maybe there is hope